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Title: Rin Hart
Description: Independent


Rin - January 24, 2009 09:23 PM (GMT)
Name: Rin Elizabeth Hart

Age: 26

Apparent Age: 21

Gender: Female

Species: Vampire

Coven: Independent

Place of Birth: Vancouver, BC, Canada.

Career: Journalist, writes from home.

History:
William Hart was bitten shortly before Rin was conceived, the disease hadn't enough time to poison his genuinely pleasant personality. However when she was born he become violently angry that she instead had taken on the appearance of the vampire that bitten him rather than her own parents. Never having been officially turned ... she carried the memories, knowledge and image of the vampire. The anger her father held grew more and more until one evening he attempted to kill her mother and herself. It was then that her mother decided to run for both their lives.

The idea that anything remotely supernatural existed was considered childlike, the firm belief in it is considered legally insane. At the age of four, Rin watched as her mother was institutionalized. Leaving her daughter to be taken care of by strangers.

When Rin was nine her mother was released, fully medicated and fit for a humane society. They lived in a exceptional home, in a beautiful suburban neighborhood free of any known risks. It was a warm Saturday night in the later days of July that William returned. When they found her, Rin was pressed tight into a corner, splashes of bright red against her tiny body. The vital liquid wasn't her own but in fact her mothers, who lay in a heap upon the floor in a cooling pool of blood. She was old enough to realize that her father had not come for blood, only for the destruction of the image that plagued him. Rin never remembered screams but someone heard that night and came before her father could finish his task.

The authorities came soon enough and put yellow tape around the area as the rest of the neighborhood crowded around. Even a gentle man in a uniform of blue carried her away from the nightmare and wrapped her in a warm wool blanket. They left her on the back of the ambulance to watch them take away her mother, to treat the scene as work, not a home broken by a crazed creature of the supernatural. Everyone was distracted, all equally horrified of the brutal death of the woman. Rin saw it as a chance to get away, a chance to run from the family they would force her into and the pain that cast it's dark shadow on her former home.

By the age of twenty Rin had established a career for herself, found a home, and had on the outside what appeared to be a normal life. Homeless shelters and the opportunities they provided had helped her significantly, though from the age of nine until seventeen she could never stay long. They would always try to put her with a family if she never found an adult to stay with. At the age of eighteen they couldn't lay a hand on her and from there she began her slow climb up the social ladder.

One night while taking a detour home through the streets of Dematire Rin passed an unsightly pile of garbage. Among it all Rin saw a mirror or atleast it should have been a mirror, there seemed to be no edge, no frame to hold in the reflective surface. She stepped towards it, her curiosity getting the best of her better judgement, and as it suddenly took hold of her arms she discovered a long lost enemy.

Rin struggled with the vampire Arabella, fighting the silence that choked her as the vampire pulled her in. It's mouth opened wide, fangs glistening with the pale light of the street lamp as it pulled her in fast, diving for that spot on her neck. Rin screamed with terror as she fought with everything she had, thrashing violently against the vampire's unnatural strength. Luckily the vampire managed only a scratch as her elongated canines barely grazed Rin's flesh. It was Rin's stolen abilities and strong will that left her only with a slight wound, one that would later become infected with a virus that mimicked vampirism. Drake Del'ran, a real vampire, realized what the infection was and offered her to save her by granting her the gift of darkness and an eternal lust for blood. Rin was frightened, though eager to find the strength to avenge her mother's death and so she accepted.

Within a year Rin began to face difficulties pertaining to her undead nature. Her home, the place of sanctuary and comfort was destroyed by the mortals she shared the building with. Despite their close proximity to her home they set fire to it hoping it would destroy her, later they told authorities it must have been an electrical fire. Her home was destroyed, everything burned, everything ruined. But her former friends strongly believed she had died in the fire and it provided her the opportunity to leave and start anew somewhere else where she would certainly have to be more discreet.

Appearance:
Rin's appearance greatly resembles that of Isabella, the Italian mistress that corrupted her father. Her hair is a rich hue of warm milk chocolate, falling in liquid waves against her slender back till it comes to caress the rise of her bottom. Her skin is a deceptively warm honey tan, natural and rare for vampires, though in death it has paled some. Her eyes are blue like the Caribbean seas and shades of green and a golden yellow shimmer brilliantly in the light. When her abilities are at their most powerful those eyes darken, becoming like the midnight sky where stars have drowned.

Her style of clothing is casual, usually a fitted shirt with a pair of her favorite jeans. Though she doesn't pause at the opportunity to wear something more formal.

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Personality:
Rin tries to keep her life as normal as it can get when your dead, she doesn't possess a fondness with dirt, sleep in a stale tomb, or wear any unusual clothing or strange markings. She's a fun-loving girl who is loyal and protective of her friends. Some can honestly say she is stubborn as hell, determined to never give up unless the opposition is perhaps more patient than her. Also she hardly complies with her better judgement, thus making more messes than what she can clean up but she learns from her mistakes. And lastly due to an awful past she does admit to having a darker side and possessing supernatural abilities has not hindered it in the least. It is something rarely seen but it is wise not to cross her.

Etc:
Rin still clings to habits that are very human-like, one example is the small fact that she keeps a coffee machine in her kitchen but never drinks the coffee that has been made. The smell is still so very comforting. Also she has a lounge chair on the roof of her building where sometimes she'll recline in her bikini and sunglasses, reading Cosmopolitan under the starry summer sky. And lastly though she is young never has she even begun to embrace the unnatural grace of a vampire, she is still so very clumsy.

Romax - February 8, 2009 05:42 PM (GMT)
Hoo, boy. OK, from what I understand, Rin's father was bitten by a vampire, fathered Rin, became a vampire while Rin took on characteristics of the vampire that bit her father, her father tried to kill Rin and her mother, Rin's mother was institutionalized, then Rin's mother was released and the two lived together until William came back and killed the mother (but not Rin) and then disappeared, Rin ran away (at the age of nine) instead of going to foster care, survived on the streets until she was twenty, saw something shiny in a trash pile that turned out to be a vampire, got attacked by said vampire but managed to fight it off, and then was turned by someone named Drake.

OK. Once a person has been bitten by a vampire, they can't have children. Only a male might be able to. If they can, as when a male is turned and then has sex with a human immediately afterwards, the baby would simply be genetically like any other baby the male might have had before being turned. THIS page deals only with female pregnancy around the time of birth, but I think the theory would be that some viable sperm in a male might still be around to impregnate IF the newly turned vampire had sex IMMEDIATELY. If it wasn't immediate the sperm would not be viable because it would have been destroyed in the same process of everything else getting knocked out because of the turning. Male vampires can still have sex, they just don't have sperm.

Next big thing, how on earth is a nine year old going to survive on the streets and create a career, a home, and an outwardly normal life? Where is she going to get the money? How is she going to go to school? In short, where is she going to get any of the resources necessary to have a normal life?

On to the next point--who is Arabella and why on earth does she have the appearance of a mirror? More, unless Arabelle is an extremely weak fledgling, Rin would stand no chance against her. That's the way Vital's vampires are.

Some more questions: Who is Drake Del'ran and why in the world we he turn Rin? More, if Rin was only scratched, why would she need to be turned? Why did the mortals burn down Rin's, and their, home?

Without some major revisions, essentially a total overhaul, there's no way the mods are going to approve this. I'd classify this application's chances of getting approved as nil.

Rin - February 17, 2009 04:56 AM (GMT)
Well fuck me.

First off I copied and pasted this from the original bio and sure ... without a doubt shit has changed since I've written it but if someone is going to pick it to death I'd prefer it be someone like a mod or admin god.

Until then I'll make the obvious changes.




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