Name: Panic Quinten Habil

Gender: Male

Age: 23

Apparent Age: 20-25

Place of Birth: Baku, Germany 1977 (is unsure due to him losing his birth certificate in the fire.)

Species: Vampire

Coven: the Divided (this is the one that he's the most like.)

Appearance: Panic stands at 5’4 and weighs around the middle 150’s. He has dark brown and blackish hair. He is graced with hazel eye’s that often change colors on their own. He has straight teeth which he was born with and they are perfect except for a chip in his left fang from a fight during his youth. He wears a variety of clothing that mostly consists of a pair of jeans with usually a t-shirt, a wife beater beneath and a pair of shoes. When he’s out he wears tight black pants, his sneakers, a black long sleeve t-shirt. He sometimes will wear sunglasses but he usually doesn’t bother. He is very thin but has a lot of lean muscle.

History: Panic was born in Baku Germany which he was also where he was raised by his mother and father. He lived in the urban part, with in the city. As a child he was extremely quiet, sometimes making his mother and father worry that he was autistic. But Panic was just a deep thinker as he is today. He often would tinker with various things like his toys but at the age of 3 he was given paint and his true talent came out. When he turned 4 he began understanding different concepts such as color blending and brush strokes.

His father who was not home much due to his job as a lawyer neglected to spend time with his son which dramatically affected how Panic viewed fathers and men which made he believe that if he was to ever have a child that he would spend as
much time as possible with them.

At the age of 13 the young Panic was the top student of his class. He was pulling straight A’s and still doing the extra credit to push him higher. One day after school a bully began picking on the small boy. Panic who was not a fan of violence tried to back down but he got punched in the process. He was hit directly in the mouth cracking his new adult teeth. The punch chipped a chunk off of the left fang.
Panic passed through junior high pulling the highest grades possible but when he reached high school he suddenly fell to grades far below the average standards. He began only focusing on his artwork going to graffiti and tagging. He became dark and unpleased with himself.

He then spent his time at a hidden place, an old abandoned warehouse where he would study, sleep, and then return home and say that he was asked to stay after school for something. This was his secret hide away, where he would work out his issue's that clouded his head. With doing the extra work to get the grades up he just managed to squeeze through with the graduating class.

He then went home and found that his parents had been killed by a murderer. Out of total shock he gathered his belongings and then went to the warehouse. He was deeply disturbed by this all but had to return, just to get the things he needed and then call the officials to deal with it. In the mean time he was heading to Demaitre, Canada. The hide away that he wanted desperately.

He soon arrived at Demaitre and worked in a CD shop working as a sales person. He did some art on the side and found his love for graffiti and tattoo's. He would occasionally tag here and there but after he raised enough money from working he set up his own personal tattoo parlor that’s called the Midnight Club. It ran for a while and now runs only on weekends at twelve o'clock. He only will tattoo a select crowd. His final night as a human was when he was traveling by skateboard home. He was overtaken by a vampire. He awoke hours later and found that he new strange feelings and abilities. He got on the internet and couldn’t find anything about it. He suddenly began feeling the different and went through the process of dying although he didn't know it at the time. Without a guide he doesn't even know that he's a vampire.

Firstly Panic I would like to point out that if your character was born in the 1970's he would be much more than twenty years old.

Secondly I want to point out that the place for your character's age is for their exact age. It doesn't matter if they know it or not and apparent age is connected to how old they would appear to be to mortals that don't know they are a vampire.

Third, vampires can't have tattoos. Sorry, just kind of a site rule.

And lastly but not leastly, I would like to ask that you expand your history and check both its grammar and spelling. There are something there that are good and others that are not quite so good, so yeah. Also as far as expanding goes, I would just like more specifics about your character and the life that they have lived up until this point. There is no such thing as writing too much here at Vital.