Chapter one

Kian was in Leeds, doing a spot of shopping on a rare day off. He wasn't used to Leeds, it was the first time he had stayed there for langer than a couple of hours. After feeling out of place at the posh Queen's Hotel, Kian decided to look for a new outfit he could wear that night whilst out clubbing in the heart of Leeds. Kian was walking around with Nicky, who could still only just remember his way around Leeds from his football days.
"I need a new top, but for God's sake not a white one," said Kian, much to the amusement of Nicky.
"Honestly, what is wrong with white?" Nicky chuckled knowing the silly answer he was about to receive.
"I will look like I'm in a boy band!"
"But you are in a boy band! Or are you ashamed of us?" asked Nicky, pretending to look hurt.
"Of course not, it's just that..." Kian stopped and stared in amazement. There she was, the girl he had lost four years earlier.
"Hello? Earth calling Kian! Come in, Kian!" Nicky mocked waving his hand in front of Kian's face.
"That's her, Nicky!"
"Who?" he asked looking puzzled.
"Hannah!"
"Who?" Nicky asked again. "Have I missed something?"
"I used to go out with her a few years ago, but her parents didn't agree with it and brought her here away from me!" Kian answered not taking his eyes off her.
"Why didn't her parents agree?"
"I'm three years older than her. We wnt out when I was seventeen and she was only fourteen. When she was fifteen they moved here."
"But there's nothing wrong with that, unless you..."
"Absolutely not! She wasn't ready so we didn't do that! God! I dread to think what goes off in your head sometimes, Nick!"
"Nick? It was an innocent question!"
"Come on!"
"Where? Kian, where are you going?"
"I've got to catch up with her. Come on, I'm not going to let her get away this time."
"Kian?" Nicky called after his friend, but it was no good. Kian was already crossing the road.
"Come on, Nick!" Kian called back.
"Ok, ok! And for God's sake, stop calling me Nick!"
"Yeah, yeah! Come on! She went that way," Kian said pointing towards Leeds Shopping Plaza. "Come on! Get a move on!"

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gr8 fic hun

can we have sum more plz?
that is soooooooooooooooooo good!

Chapter Two

"Oh Hell! She's gone. She definitely came in here!"
"Kian, leave it. Come on, let's go shopping. I need to buy a new pair of legs!" Nicky joked trying to catch his breath.
"But, I have to find her!"
"Look, no offence, but I think you should forget about her for now, and let's go shopping. If she lives in Leeds, you might see her again before we leave."
"I suppose," Kian said feeling disappointed. "Ok, where is the nearest Gap? I like their new jeans."
"I think it's somewhere up there. But I'm not sure," Nicky said pointing up the street.
"You're not sure? But you used to live here!"
"Kian, the last time I went shopping in Leeds, I was seventeen! That is a few years ago. Things are bound to have changed a bit since then. Plus, if we can't find it, we just ask someone!"
"Ok, let's go," said Kian pulling Nicky's jacket sleeve, and suddently feeling another burst of energy kick in. Nicky, however, just wanted to sit down and get his breath back.

"Oh, hi! I thought you two had run off," Shane joked as Kian and Nicky finally returned to the hotel.
"Ha! Look at him! Kian, you did leave some items for other customers, didn't you?" joked Bryan looking at all Kian's bags.
"Oh very funny! Anyway, Nicky bought more than me. He's just sorted them out into as few bags as possible so he could carry them easier," Kian replied in a very matter-of-fact tone.
"Yeah, in that bag I have new legs. I bought them on offer, I got feet free! Kian wore these ones down by chasing a lass through town," Nicky said, flopping into the nearest chair.
"Chasing a lass through town? Who?" asked Shane looking at Kian.
"You remember that Hannah I used to go out with? It was her!"
"How can you be sure? It's been, what? Four years since you last saw her. She was still a kid!"
"Shane, I know it was her. I just know it!"
"Ok, well someone better go get Mark so we can go get tea."
"Where is he?" asked Bryan only just realising Mark wasn't in the room with them.
"He had a headache, so he went to bed for a while."
"Oh, any excuse, the lazy bugger!" laughed Nicky. "A headache? I bet he's well enough to go out on the pull, though, tonight!"
"Oh yeah! Mark not go out to meet a bird? I think not!" said Kian leaving the room to go find Mark
"Tell him to hurry up, we are still off out later!" shouted Bryan as he watched in amusement as Nicky nured his aching legs.

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brill lynn! just read the 2nd chappie. add more sooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn!

keely
xxx

(p.s. yes thankx huni i did enjoy the party!!!)

Chapter three

"Don't look half bad, do I?" asked Kian who was very pleased woth his new outfit.
"Oh, shut up, you deutz!" laughed Shane as they entered 'Majestyk' nightclub.
"Wow, it's loud in here. Go on, my round first. What do you all want?" asked Bryan getting a few surprised looks off the other lads. "What? Fine, if you don't want a drink I will get my own!"
"Guinness!" they all shouted at the same time.
"Not bad in here is it?" commented Mark looking round at all the girls and sitting at the nearest table.
"Headache gone then?" laughed Nicky as Mark just smiled.
"She's nice. No, her! Oh, they all look good!" he said as the other lads all laughed at Mark's typical behaviour.
"You're too predictable, mate," asid Shane as BryanONG>"I'm ok, bit surprised to see you though," she replied.
"Good surprised or bad surprised?" asked Kian trying to take in her beauty. She hadn't changed much. Her long brown hair flowing freely down her back and her sparkling green eyes.
"Definitely good!"
"Good. I've missed you. Why didn't you write after you left?"
"I wasn't allowed. My dad intercepted all my letters. Why are you in Leeds?"
"We are doing a few small gigs in Sheffield and Manchester, but all their hotels were booked up. The Queen's Hotel was the only one with rooms. Bit expensive though."
"I bet it is! You haven't changed much, Mr Egan," she said stroking his blonde hair and looking into his blue eyes. "I'm ok, bit surprised to see you though," she replied.
"Good surprised or bad surprised?" asked Kian trying to take in her beauty. She hadn't changed much. Her long brown hair flowing freely down her back and her sparkling green eyes.
"Definitely good!"
"Good. I've missed you. Why didn't you write after you left?"
"I wasn't allowed. My dad intercepted all my letters. Why are you in Leeds?"
"We are doing a few small gigs in Sheffield and Manchester, but all their hotels were booked up. The Queen's Hotel was the only one with rooms. Bit expensive though."
"I bet it is! You haven't changed much, Mr Egan," she said stroking his blonde hair and looking into his blue eyes.
"Neither have you."
"I have, Kian. More than you will understand. I'm sorry, I have to go. Nice talking to you again," she called back as Kian watched her leave, upset that he had lost her again.

You will need to give me a couple of days to get chapter 4 to you as my website has eaten it and dropped little bits here and there! Lol! So I will need to type it all up again!
Please can I have feedback in the meantime!

I am afraid I cannot carry this fan fic on because my website I put it on has been invaded and some mean person has ruined the next couple of chapters and I am unsure of where all my drafts are. :(