here is my list:

Mercenery General 103pts
Sword,Pistol,Barded Warhorse,Lance,Heavy Armour

Captan 85pts
Great wepon (Bitting Blade), Pistol,Heavy Armour

1 Paymaster 67pts
Sword,Crossbow,Light Armour

Hireling Wizard 149pspts
Barded Warhorse,Upgraded to level 2 wizard,2 despell scrolls

12 Pikemen 140pts
Standard, Musician

12 Pikemen 140pts
Standard, Musician

12 Pikemen 140pts
Standard, Musician

10 Bowmen 100pts
Standard,Musician

8 Duellists 44pts
Swords,Pistols

8 Btretonnians (Heavy Cavalry) 198pts
Standard,Musician,Barding for steeds

8 Btretonnians (Heavy Cavalry) 198pts
Standard,Musician,Barding for steeds

8 Light Cavalry 118pts
Standard,musician

8 Light Cavalry 118pts
Standard,musician

10 Norse Marauders 100pts
Standard,musician

10 Pay Masters Bodyguards 120pts
Standard,musician,Heavy armour

Cannon 85pts
4 crew,hand wepons

Cannon 85pts
4 crew,hand wepons

2000pts

What do you think??????

Let's see

General with that kit is 127pts

The captain must choose between the biting blade and the great weapon that's why the biting blade is called a magic "weapon" not a magic blade. Without the biting blade he comes to 65pts

The paymaster is good unless you want him with the bodyguard, in which case I'd swap his current gear for a pistol and heavy armour.

I'd drop the horse and the level from the wizard, 'cos from the kit you gave him he's a scroll caddy so that would make him 110pts

Merge two units of pikemen together so there's 24 give them heavy armour so they're 284pts, put the great weapon captain there and have them ranked 5 wide, I'll tell you what to do with the third unit later when we know how many points you have.

Dogs of war don't get Bowmen unless you mean crossbowmen, which going by the points you are, drop the command on these boys, if they get into combat they're dead. So that's only 80pts for them now.

8 duellists with pistols is 72 points not 44.

The heavy cav are alright, drop one from one of the units and give that unit a champion, then you put the general there. 6pts made up here.

The light cav should be in 2 units of 5 and a unit of 6 as they don't benefit from rank bonuses, drop the standards and buy the new unit a musician.

10 norse are little more then an overrun in units of ten, drop them for more paymaster's bodyguard.

The bodyguard should now be approx 20 models then swap the standard for a champion as the paymaster should be here generating the combat res for a banner.

Cannons only have 2 crew.

With the right points costs the army without the 2nd pike block comes to 1725pts. So now the second block, 20 with heavy armour, standard and muso comes to 240pts giving you 35 points to toy with.

Enjoy!