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Title: Sonic Dark: Regeneration
Description: Something Epic Indeed.


Xavier - September 9, 2009 07:13 PM (GMT)
Hello and welcome.

I've been doing Sprite comics since 2006. But I was never really good at Serious comics. I usually never really planned them out good, and the execution was extremely poor. Plot Holes, Horrible quality and lack of originality plagued me in my early days. Sonic Dark was one of my more Original Creations that I conjured up in '06, but again everything listed above made it a poor comic. Now, I've decided to take a third whack at this comic. /History

Plot
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Recently Sonic has shown High levels of frustration. Maybe because of all of Robotnik's recent attacks. He's been coming down hard on Sonic and the Gang. Relentless to rid the planet of our true blue hero. No one has ever seen Sonic snap, nor do they want to... What's Robotnik planning this time?

Note: I'm still working out the complete summery thing.


Sonic Dark: Regeneration Homepage


Latest Page:
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Chapter 1: Page 12

Author's Comments:
Coming Soon.
~Xavier

Wanna read back abit?
Prologue:
Page 01
Page 02
Page 03
Page 04
Page 05
Page 06
Page 06a
Page 07
Page 08
Page 09
Page 10

Chapter 1:
Chapter 1 Intro
Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 1: Page 2
Chapter 1: Page 3
Chapter 1: Page 4
Chapter 1: Page 5
Chapter 1: Page 6
Chapter 1: Page 7
Chapter 1: Page 8
Chapter 1: Page 9
Chapter 1: Page 10
Chapter 1: Page 11
Chapter 1: Page 11a

Whoa, nearly forgot.

Credits:
Modern Eggman by D.Burraki
Sonic Advance Sprites Ripped by Daniel Sidney
Egg Saucer and XXZone Ripped by SkyLights
Backgrounds From Background HQ
"DethEgg" DeathEgg By Damien
Dark Sonic Sprites and PA by Shadow_91 and Sprite Boy9

(First post here and I post a comic? Blasphemy!)

The following posts are reserved for the previous comics and their commentary

Xavier - September 9, 2009 07:17 PM (GMT)
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Page 1

Author's Comments:
Introduces our main Hero and soon to be Anti-hero.I'll put up the next page sometime later today If I'm lucky... I'm trying out a new style and it's pretty hard... Since I'm trying something new... and I have no idea how to pull it off > _ > I had to pull memories of how other people did it, and I have to say, it isn't isn't half bad...

C.S. Goto - September 9, 2009 11:31 PM (GMT)
You have talent and you use it on a sonic fan comic?
Why would you do this?

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:12 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (C.S. Goto @ Sep 9 2009, 06:31 PM)
You have talent and you use it on a sonic fan comic?
Why would you do this?

Because I can, and no one is stopping me. I have other talents too. And BTW you messed up my chain of posts with the previous comics in them, Veil fiend!

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Page 02

Author's Comments:
Enter Tails, Long time friend of Sonic. Aside from Amy, Tails is worried that Sonic might eventually lose his cool. But sadly he has to break the news to Sonic that Robotnik has launched another DethEgg. The DethEgg is a remake of the Death Egg MK 1. The reason Robotnik named it the "DethEgg" is uncertain. Upon further scanning, Tails has found out that this is one of many DethEggs that now orbit the planet... Sonic... isn't... happy...

Notes:
The reason for the little story is that sometimes many readers don't know what's happening from the just the comic along, Manly because the author doesn't have enough room for all the detail. ( Me ) So I put a small summery at in the Comments section after every comic. Be sure to read it to gain full understanding. I also increased the page size to make up for the larger panels in this Page.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:14 PM (GMT)
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Page 03
Author's Comments:
"Something inside... me... My chest feels so tight..." He managed to say as he fell to his knees. A cold, heartless voice seeped into his ears. "That's right... get angry... I LOVE it when you angry... Unleash me!" Sonic found in himself in a meadow, A figure stood before him. "Who are you?" He asked. "Why, I'm you of course... Can't you see the resemblance?" The figure replied. The sound of his voice made Sonic cringe slightly. "Your nothing like me!" He shouted "Oh, but I am..." Sonic then heard the voice coming from behind him, and he felt a sudden pull on his quills, He was lifted to his feet and bent slightly backwards. "Everything will be explained in due time..." The voice said as it faded, and sonic dropped back onto his knees, Tails stood near by, speechless...

Notes:
I couldn't resist doing another page xD Love Sonic's pose and expression in Panel three. Couldn't have done it better. And there is some white space in Panel four, I'm aware of that and can't fix it at the moment without remaking the panel.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:15 PM (GMT)
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Page 04
Author's Comments:
I observed as he went through what seemed like a temporary possession... I'm overjoyed to know that my stress tactics are working! Soon, that power he possess will be under my control and I can finally take over the world! Silencing anyone who dare object to my rule!

Notes:
Lol Two Panels. No I'm not lazy, His intro is a short one, no need for long winded Evil plan speeches, he has those on Audio book. You can also buy his Newberry award winning book "My way, or die!: A story of a man on a mission" In book stores near you! xD "MEANWHILE ABOARD THE DETHEGG!"

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:17 PM (GMT)
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Page 05

Author's Comments:
After what I just witnessed I really didn't know what to say for a moment, until I remembered that we had to report this tot he others... I managed to keep quite most of the way there, but I couldn't any longer...


Notes:
Last update for me today... Expect more tomorrow.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:19 PM (GMT)
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Page 06

Author's Comments:
We all gathered at the "Base" Which is really where Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles live. Tails gave us the News, Robotnik is back again... But what does he want? We usually get some type of message from him. But the fact that he has that many DethEggs in the sky above us is insane... And the E.D.S.Ts... The hell is he planning...

Notes:
First and Foremost, E.D.S.T stands for Elite Drop Shock Troops, No this has nothing to do with Halo, though the idea came from it. The Prologue is soon coming to a end and Chapter One will soon begin. Enjoy the page everyone, and tell your friends! ;P

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:23 PM (GMT)
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Page 06a

Author's Comments:
Robotnik opened the com lines to the other DethEggs. "Prepare the E.D.S.T for launch!" He barked, the Bots for all the other DethEggs scrambled, making necessary preparations.

Notes:
Nothing Special, just showing what the scale of the invasion is like. You guys get a Real Page tomorrow.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:25 PM (GMT)
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Page 07

Author's Comments:
I looked over my shoulder to see 4 E.D.S.T land, about a block behind us, We already knew they were fixed on us. Things are about to get messy...

Notes:
Woo! First Appearance of the Dreaded E.D.S.T! Yes they are Emerls. But why Robotnik choose Emerl models to be the E.D.S.T? Find out next time on Sonic Dark: Regeneration!

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:27 PM (GMT)
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Page 08

Author's Comments:
It's odd... I'd never would have thought Robotnik would manage to salvage Emerl's Memory Chip... After He exploded, there was really nothing left... Of Course He's Memory still had everyone's moves copied in it, so Robotnik managed t make a power source and made the E.D.S.T. They're like no other badnik Robotnik has ever built... They can switch fighting forms and styles on the fly. And they're insanely durable... they won't go down without one hell of a fight... No kidding... "Oh shit, even more are dropping? What the hell! I thought the was a invasion not an asslault! Tails! 'The Hells going on?!?" "Seems like they're pinpointed to your location! There are about 50 more on the way! You got to get the hell outta there!" Tails screams. "50 MORE!" My eyes widen in horror, the ground shook as 12 more hit the ground.

Note:
My first fight scene ever! :D It's not that bad I guess. Woot Prologue is almost over! Slaughtering Tiem! :D

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:30 PM (GMT)
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Page 09

Author's Comments:
It all happend so Fast... I saw one infront of me and next thing I knew I was in the air, and about a second later I felt a foot dig into my chest and slide into the slot between my chin and my chest, then all I felt was the ground under me... I managed to get glimpse of Knuckles, he wasn't doing well either, he got hit on the head pretty hard... I'm REALLY starting to get tired of these guys...

Notes:
No words in this Page. Only sound FX. So you better read the narrative. You better watch out for the Emerl on the right, he's got a Mean Right Hook.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:34 PM (GMT)
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Author's Comments:
I felt something lift me to my feet, as if someone had grabbed me by my collar... I thought it was another Emerl, coming to finish the job he started, I felt that tightness in my chest again, but this time it wasn't that sharp, and then everything got... Loose... I felt my body relax... This is the first time I've ever gotten any type of rest in 2 years... Is this what death feels like? "I'll take over from here, your need some rest..." What? who's that... "Don't tell me you forgot already..." Don't tell me... "That right..." To Be Continued...

Notes:
And with this the Prologue comes to an end. Now I must work on a fancy Chapter End Picture that might take me all day cuz I'm using Photoshop 6. AWAY!!!

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:37 PM (GMT)
Cover page for Chapter One

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Chapter 1 Intro

Author's Comments:
It's kinda Fancy...

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:40 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 1

Author's Comments:
Among other things, Robotnik also found another way to stop Sonic, other than water.. Ice, He nearly got Sonic once, he froze him and threw him off of the Station Square Spire... Luckily enough Tails managed to save him... Looks like Robotnik never forgot about that... Sonic stood frozen in place. The E.D.S.T robot grabbed him and took off before I could get back on my feet, and after that, all the others left as well... The hell is going on here...

Notes:
First page of Chapter 1, and I must say. The dialog seems forced... > _ <

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:43 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 2

Author's Comments:
The moment I come to, first thing I get to hear is Tails' voice blasting into like I'm standing next to the speakers at a Rave Party, Not to mention I already have a blasting headache. The E.D.S.T are gone and Sonic is nowhere to be found. "We lost track of him after he left the planet. He was cryo-frozen..." Just, great best thing I get to hear all day other than the sound of me getting my ass handed to me...

Author Comments:
Hiatus is teh over, But updates are going to be slow.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 12:49 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 3

Author's Comments:
Find myself in a holding tank... Like a dog. That inferior robot got the upper hand by freezing me. He knew what was coming so he punked out... turns out I'm some pawn in Robotniks plan... a Being like me? That's a laugh... But I might have some fun with this... "Hey? the hell are you thinking Dark?!?" That's none of your business. "Like hell it is, I'm in your fucking head!"

Author Notes:
Just so you know, All of Sonic's part are in Quotes, because he's more of a thought than a voice. And that's Vise Versa for all that past parts as well.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 01:05 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 4

Author's Comments:
Knuckles returned. He was pretty banged up but okay. I not sure how he can take such a beating, but what I heard over the radio transmissions, he must of been getting drilled into the ground. I addressed them of the issue at hand. The room was covered in a veil of eerie silence. I wonder what's going on right now...

~Meanwhile aboard the DethEgg

This chamber is hard to break out of... He must of found out my unique Life force signature... It's keeping me from making any kind of impression on the glass. A sharp stabbing like headache overtook me, it felt like something was being in planted into my brain... "Dark! What the hell is going on?!?!" Don't worry about it! It's none of your business! "Again, like hell it is! I'm in my own head!!!" As the process came to a close, Dark ceased to respond, even as Sonic yelled and yelled. One thought crossed Sonic's mind, Dark has been taking over...

Authors Notes:
Well, after 5 hours of working on this. Only because I was constantly distracted and misplaced. It is done. Enjoy the new page guys.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 01:07 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 5

Author's Comments:
No matter how loud I shouted, I received no response from Dark. Somethings wrong here... I took a few deep breaths and calmed down, and it just so happened I could hear what Robotnik was telling Mindless Dark... "Now, after a few tests it seems my show that the Download process is complete. For once, this has worked. So many prototypes... And I may soon take care of Sonic pesky friends!" That bastard! I have to find a way to get my body back...

Author Notes:
Oh Hai guys. I has updates for you all! I better start thinking up those fight scenes... This is going to be fun...

Xavier - September 10, 2009 01:10 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 6

Author's Comments:
Monitoring the tracking devices I had all of us wear is a choir, but it's vital of survival at times like this, these devices not only track your location but all your Vitals and Heart rate. Ever since Sonic was taken into space his device hasn't been transmitting, it must the Detheggs jamming the signal. The screen nearest me flashed a blue light. It must be Sonic!!!

Author Notes:
Crappy Narrative today... I'm recovering from a Allergic Reaction that was pretty bad, so spare me.

Xavier - September 10, 2009 01:12 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 7

Author's Comments:
As I approached where Sonic landed he was laying in the crater, he didn't seem hurt by the fall to my surprise. As I got closer he slowly began to get up. I'm not sure why I didn't notice earlier but he seemed poised to attack for some reason... Something isn't right here...


Author Notes:
And so begins the slaughter...

Xavier - September 10, 2009 01:15 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 8

Author's Comments:
Coming Soon.
~Xavier

Xavier - September 10, 2009 01:17 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 9

Author's Comments:
Coming Soon.
~Xavier

Xavier - September 10, 2009 01:19 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 10

Author's Comments:
Coming Soon.
~Xavier

Xavier - September 10, 2009 01:21 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 11

Author's Comments:
Coming Soon.
~Xavier

And that is all the pages with commentary until the one on the Main page. you can start posting now.

C+C will gladly be accepted.

Xavier - September 13, 2009 10:28 PM (GMT)
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Chapter 1: Page 12

Author's Comments:
Coming Soon.
~Xavier




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