That will look a lot like this.

It's about that guy you see, there, and how he's awesome. I'll work out the details later.

For those of you who don't like clicking:


Don't forget to tell me how awesome it is.

That'd be nice.

Being able to actually read and understand what was going on would be nice.

I'm leaving soon, but so you won't be in wonderment for the next ten days:

"A cave. It seems okay, I've at least gained a moment's respite from LOPEZ."

"It smells bad. And that's a rosebush. In a foul smelling cave. Odd."

CLIMAX.

He's running from a mysterious character named "LOPEZ", and delves deep into a cave to find a very robust rosebush with no roses, and notices it smells foul. Then he's attacked by floating eel monsters.

With teeth and wolflike qualities.

When I get back I'll fix these problems, and make the things happening more obvious.

EDIT: Did I say Taliban? what I meant to say was Lopez.

Taliban? What are you, pushing hard for a metaphore relating to the war, (more like making sure they can survive.) going on? I wouldn't name any type of antagonist a group thats already causing a ruckus in real life. It just causes people becoming upset. If you really want to keep it taliban, keep it more, you know, subtle?

-Also, if it's a rose bush, draw roses.

Over the ten days I've been gone, I've made the comic make sense. I just haven't drawn it. Here's concenpt for Timbleton.

Link

This is the brown bag in the first comic redone. Harper is an opportunist.

Any comments on him? I've noticed he needs some more shading on the cloak, and the pants need a different color of green. Any ideas for a symbol on his neck guard?