Sketch's DA (The Fallout Shelter)

So, I am not entirely sure where to put this particular topic, but I figured this was a pretty safe bet... If I am wrong, I will be the first to admit it.

I have, throughout my journey in the land of TFS, posted a whopping TWO drawings of mine (excluding my comic). Considering my username, I think that is rather odd, so I decided that I may as well give you all a link to my deviantART thingy...

SketchedHero's deviantART

It has a small collection of my drawings, and might soon have some of my writings. Stop by if you like, or don't.

Well, they're decent, but not exceptionable. Your problem is proportion, which seems to be a passing trend in every, single, decent, utterly capable artist on earth. If you can get the heads consistently proportional to the shoulder and arms and such, then your art will be a huge deal better, and all you'll have to do is work on getting action poses- at least, that's how it is/was for me. Also, in some places, the arms are much to tiny.

Sometimes, it seems like it's a style you're going for, like in the Elf guy picture, and if it is, ignore me, i's a style I haven't aquainted myself with- but if it isn't, mark my words.

Mark. My. Words.

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Alright, "The Muffler."

A character for my comic series "Anarchy is the American Dream." He is based on a friend of mine, Mike... I guess. But, yeah, he has a muffler attached to his butt. Great for comic relief, should you need it. The muffler does have its advantages, as you never know what may come flying out of it. There's anything from a large mace - Mike's personal favorite - to ice-cream- my personal favorite.

I love this comment so much.

QUOTE (0ctane @ Mar 23 2008, 10:47 PM)

Well, they're decent, but not exceptionable. Your problem is proportion, which seems to be a passing trend in every, single, decent, utterly capable artist on earth. If you can get the heads consistently proportional to the shoulder and arms and such, then your art will be a huge deal better, and all you'll have to do is work on getting action poses- at least, that's how it is/was for me. Also, in some places, the arms are much to tiny.

Sometimes, it seems like it's a style you're going for, like in the Elf guy picture, and if it is, ignore me, i's a style I haven't aquainted myself with- but if it isn't, mark my words.

Mark. My. Words.

I think the odd proportion seems to be his style of drawing.

QUOTE (0ctane @ Mar 23 2008, 09:47 PM)

Well, they're decent, but not exceptionable. Your problem is proportion, which seems to be a passing trend in every, single, decent, utterly capable artist on earth. If you can get the heads consistently proportional to the shoulder and arms and such, then your art will be a huge deal better, and all you'll have to do is work on getting action poses- at least, that's how it is/was for me. Also, in some places, the arms are much to tiny.

Sometimes, it seems like it's a style you're going for, like in the Elf guy picture, and if it is, ignore me, i's a style I haven't aquainted myself with- but if it isn't, mark my words.

Mark. My. Words.

That, strangely enough, is a bit of a style I am going for... I make the forearms a bit narrower than normal, and the hands tend to be larger, or proportioned in one strange way or another. Heads just turn out as they do, usually the way I desire them.

Thank you, Delta, for noticing this.

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I love this comment so much.

Well, it's rather old... Oooh well.

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