So a while ago I decided to try and get a fan comic of Bob and George. Since B+G is a Megaman orriented site I decided to make the comic Megaman based. I made the six comics required to apply but never did. So I wanted to know if the comics were any good or should be continued.
Comic 1Comic 2Comic 3Comic 4Comic 5Comic 6Let me know what you think guys, C+C appreciated.
Hmm...
The technical aspects seem mostly solid, though the camera could stand to zoom periodically. Trust me, it makes stuff look more dynamic. I quite enjoyed the use of the pixel art in #4 too.
Wily's mech is total dogshit though. Don't know which game it was from or if you made it yourself, but it really looks like it's in a different style than the others.
The writing is kinda meh. Really predictable, but considering you only made six strips, I'm not expecting an oscar winning story. There's one or two writing errors as well (so it look like you destroyed) and the censoring is totally fucking stupid. Don't censor. Anyone who reads webcomics has seen swearing MANY times before, I assure you.
Hmm...
Yeah. Continue it. It's got a few flaws, but nothing too bad and you seem talented enough to make a good comic.
| QUOTE (Avi @ Mar 16 2008, 08:34 AM) |
Wily's mech is total dogshit though. Don't know which game it was from or if you made it yourself, but it really looks like it's in a different style than the others.
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That mech is actually from the Arcade Megaman game called Power Battles or Power Fighters. The sprites in that version were more blown up so it had more puff to it...
But I see your point on it being different than the others...if anything, given your sprites are generally from Megaman 7, it might have been better to stick to just Wily's good old Saucer...
