Olay, Here's YellowBlade! This is my first TFS comic. It doesn't suck to bad. It actually has a whole plot. But I might put fillers in too. I don't have too many sprites of people her at the Shelter, but I'll keep looking. I hope my comics don't look to noobish.
SpriteSheets
Sukeruton Main sheet

The Fall of Fallout
1.Villain foreshadowing in the first comic? MADNESS!!!!
2.Attack of the Motion Blur!
3.Does This Belong To You?
4.Back To The Plot!
5.Showdown! Himo vs. Buu!

Fillers
AHHHHHHH!


Okay! I'm gonna go do something else...

*sigh* So yet another villain wants to destroy us. What else is new.

It will be awkward when I meet the big baddie face to face though.

good so far, keep it up.

Family Guy joke.
Oh, and I'll try to see who's in the bad guys group...
OK, I see Dark Sonic in the front...
Mephiles...
And Buu...
Don't know the other two though.
And I'm impressed by your sprites.

You especially, craig. This baddie will be quite interesting for you to face. Also note the minions. If you look closely and pay attation to the font colors you might be able to make out who they are. if you find out don't give it away!

edit:nevermind -_-

YAY UPDATE!!

Attack of The Motion Blur!

Paint.net RULEZ!!!! Thanks for putting it in your sig, Mettic or I probably never would have known about it.

It was an awesome comic. Hm...you kinda messed up on the alignment of my head in the last panel...OH WELL! Sweet comic =D

Yeah... I just noticed the mistake, but thanks!

If you look at the link for the second one, its from picoodle. I was gonna use photobucket, but for some reason it messed up the image a bit. So I just used picoodle which sounds cooler!

Might want to work on the bubbles.
Use this tutorial on word bubbles and closeups.
You have the closeups pretty much down though, and I am impressed by the action.

worst. simulation. EVER! also, best comic ever!

Thanks! I'll look at that tutorial now. Also the 3rd comic is on its way.(in like an hour and a half)

UPDATE!

Does this belong to you?

I DIDN"T KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOOOO!

...was there a point to that? Don't double post unless you have a new update.

Anyway, haha, run dude.

What are you doing there standing?
USE THOSE ANAMORPHIC LEGS OF YOURS AND RUN!

DROP THE RADIO AND RUN YOU FOOL!!!!

>:|!
I believe we have a problem

O My GOD!

I knew this guy on Xobx live Who said that all the time!

We have a problem we have a problem.

His name was mike too or at least I think it was...

His gamertag was PortDesolator or something.

anyway, AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!

I'm sorry, but you have touched MYKE's radio.

I foresee bloodshed.

No Super big update. Just a little filler...

AHHHHHHHH!!!!

owwwwwww.

YAY! UPDATE!
New body,new comic!


4.Back To The Plot!

We seem to have a situation.

TFSERS! MOBILIZE!

(SERIOUS CRIT WARNING!)

I'd suggest adding words to describe sound effects, like in panel 4, I'd have a "BOOOOM" or a "CRASH". And in panel 6, it needs a "KRAK" or a "POW" or a "RIGHT IN THE KISSER".

Good comic.

Also! I like your new sprites, but what was wrong with your old ones?

I just didn't like the sprites. The head was too big for the body. But that pikachu may make some appearances in the future.

I'm not much of a critic, but I have to agree with Wise, a sprite comic isn't as good as it could be if it doesn't have sound affects.

I also noticed you put (what I'm guessing are) the main characters in the bottom corner. It looks like a good cast, Cador, Craig, Mike, Himo, Wise, and Zhilo. (I didn't mention you, because it's pretty obvious you're in it.)

Yep. Their the main characters. I was just laying on my bed and came up with like the best idea for a future comic with the 7 of us.

Ow, my jaw!

Oh and as far as Buu is concerned, I hope Zhilo eats him.

and comic, what they said about sound effects.

OKAY! IGET IT SOUND EFFECTS!!!!!!!!! I"LL ADD THEM!

thanks for the good comments though.
I will be able to post them tomorw.

After looking at your new sprites I just have this to say.

You just had to have his creepy ass powers didn't you.

Ya know, it's times like this I wish that I had decided to keep those fire sprites. I wonder why I threw them out.

...

Oh, right! Kagu-Zuchi! I should really get back to working on that.

YES! I had to have the powers. Im gonna make my own attacks soon.

Okay Next comic! The fight has started!

5. Showdown! Himo vs. Buu!

YAY! My favorite panel is panel 18! Its perfect! i even got the ground shaking!

I found the perfect sheet of sound effects!

That got kinda... weird.

You should probably make it more clear what's going on in each panel.

Gimme :>

You might want to keep all the words the same size.
Aside from that, pretty good new sheet, and good comics.

Whoever keeps repairing those impact craters when you shift scenes is going to be pretty pissed as Himo.

AHEM...

6. Last Time on Buffy the Vampire Slayer

Sorry its a bit messy. i was rushing I have to go somewhere in like five minutes.

Oh dear. Yu-Gi-Oh abridged joke.
The "111" at the end though was a nice touch, though.

...

I've been impersonated AND cloned before, this doesn't prove anything.

It proves everything, Kelax, it proves everything...-_-

...I'm so ashamed D;