these are the main characters in my comic which is coming soon

http://tru-gamer3.deviantart.com/art/charc...file-I-60617186
http://tru-gamer3.deviantart.com/art/Chara...ile-II-61104387
http://tru-gamer3.deviantart.com/art/chara...le-III-61110137
http://tru-gamer3.deviantart.com/art/Chara...ile-IV-62038030
http://tru-gamer3.deviantart.com/art/Chara...file-V-69571284


within the next few days I will be putting up detail profiles for each character

The arms are much to skinny. You definitely need to widen them up. You do have the right idea with the head-shoulder proportions, but it's not quite right.

EDIT: Dammit I will criticize you until you stab me in the eye.

Anywhays, the legs are too skinny and the clothes are quite plain.

although I thank you for letting me know what I need to improve on. I drew these pics a couple months ago (just now got around to posting them here) and I've gotten better since.

The eye!