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Title: Human Mettic.


Mettic - January 20, 2008 04:18 AM (GMT)
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Now, their will be times in my comics where robot echinda Mettic just can't explain, like times I'm going to be taking a hintas, of breaking the forth wall...
So I though up this guy.
Human Mettic.
He's pretty much the author and unlike other comics, he won't make many appernces (Maybe spelling) or really count has a main character, but I'll need him.
And has you might've guess by now, advice is appreciated.
I would also like to say now that the word "Echinda" is not in Firefox's dictionary.

What I think I did bad: The cloths, Ugg...

Delta - January 20, 2008 04:24 AM (GMT)
Fix the shading and add a black outline.

Mettic - January 20, 2008 04:43 AM (GMT)
I fallowed Delta's advise and work on it some more.
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Gamemastermz - January 20, 2008 05:46 AM (GMT)
Looking slightly better...now it time for my CIC:
- Color themes seems to be odd. I think you should plan out the colors a little better.
- The shirt shading seems a little odd. I don't know...it just seems a little off. I think there should be some dark shading on the left side of the shirt, the area that touching the jacket.
- Speaking of the jacket, it seems odd on the bottom-left part. Patch it up will help you.

There you go, keep up the great work.

craig - January 20, 2008 05:52 AM (GMT)
My comment try to make a less drastic change in the shading




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