I've been working on a new sprite sheet with a Goku base. This was mostly inspired by the Ultimates


Also:

Both weapons were made by me from scratch. The character is a Goku edit, like I said earlier.

You are doing a wonderful job at it. I do have something to say about the hair on the last two ax-wielding sprite, though. Those hair looks a little odd and the raise part of his hair seems a little unusually deform. His whole bang should rise and not just one part. Nevertheless, I like it and I have to give you the two thumb-up!

The weapons I like as well, but I have some complaint with my praise. The ax should be a little darker and slightly less flat. And the same poses, that I have complaining about the hair, make the ax seems longer than it should be (and the spot of the ax where he holding it seems weird as well). The sword is a little different...the outline needs to slightly blend more with the inside colors, though not much. I love how you did the marking on the sword!

Thanks for the advice. I'll try to fix the deformed bang and the hands holding the axe. What do you mean by the sword's "outline" though?

I don't think the sword itself may need it (after some thinking), but the bone need to be a little more dark grey than black. Also...you welcome! :)

I tried to fix the bang and the grip.

Look somewhat better, but it need some more work...it might help to make the whole hair less flat and more define as well (the two seems odd compare to the other three). Also, you need to rise the other part of the bang that is closer to the eye.

As for the ax, you need to raise the position of the ax upward on the last two, so that bottom base shows up, like the past three did. The grip spot is corrected now, so you don't have to worry too much about it.

Pretty awesome. You may want to fix the arms, though; they look too muscly for a regular jacket.

I'm back to let you know I'm still working on this.

Anyone else notice how GMZ is pretty much the only one giving crit and comments in this section anymore? xD

That Mjolnir is awesome.

You thinking of spriting Thor's gloves that enabled him to hold Mjolnir? As well as his Belt of Strength?

I wasn't, but I'm officially stealing that idea. I just need to see what the gloves would look like.

Well, they're basically just kickass looking gauntlets. Never were described.

I'm pretty sure kick-ass looking gauntlets is all I needed to know. I'm gonna base the appearance of the belt on Ultimate Thor's belt.

Comments pls.

Perfect. Oh, and don't forget that that belt increases your strength in battle, as it did to Thor.

And those gloves are superheated just to hold Mjolnir, I believe. You're doin' great.

I am liking it myself, though I do have some issues with the ax swing effect. It seems strange to me and need a lot of work. The belt is a nice addition to the sprite, that it does!

It bothers me too, but I'm not sure how to fix it.

I've been thinking of making full sheets for those two.

Those pecs scare me.

It's mostly the arm I'm worried about.

I tweaked a few things here and there.

Fix his pecs in the shirtless one, they look baaaaad. Then the only other problem I see is your ax/hammer swinging effects.

So, uh, does anybody know how to make people look more middle-aged?

Give him some wrinkles, a hunch, and sprites that show him yelling "YOU KIDS GET OFF MY LAWN!"

He's only supposed to be 48. And in good shape for his age.

Well, I've started another project:


Comments, criticism, and suggestions welcome.

Poses I'm working on:


Also, I polished up my sprite sheet, and added a new section to it labeled "Jacketless."

You probably misread that the first time through. No point in denying it.