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Mettic - September 23, 2007 12:27 AM (GMT)
Comics
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TFS comic #1=PAIN!
TFS comic #2= ZOMBIE!
TFS comic #3= Spoilers?
TFS comic #4= No title for you!
TFS comic # 5= YAY! 5th Issue
TFS Comic number si- WTF
TFS comic #7= Burnanation
TFS comic #8= Again with the zombies...
TFS comic #9= A plot? OH NOES!
TFS comic #10= Pokemon horror
My TFS comic #11= PWNED
*12th comic missing due to suckyness*
TFS comic #13= Halting the plots.
TFS comic #14= Plot holes
TFS comic #15=Endless SUCK.
TFS comic #16= OLIMAR IS TEH WIN.


Picommenrty
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#1= IT'S TO DAMN CUTE!
#2= INTERNET!
#3= AWESOMENSS.

Sprite sheets
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Mettic sprite sheet
Boomey sprite sheet
Mini-Boomey sprite sheet

Fillers (They will all most likely be around Halo)
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Oh noes

I'll try to get has many comics has I can in but most likely I won't post on school days cause their just hectic for me.

Kelax - September 23, 2007 01:07 AM (GMT)
Scapegoat sidekick? Brilliant!

It's actually pretty easy to tell which sprites need permission, as it will say right next to it.

Btw, welcome to tfs.

Himo Galanodel - September 23, 2007 01:09 AM (GMT)
Not a bad first comic, though you must stop using bitmap and jpeg, immediately.

Wise_Idiot - September 23, 2007 01:24 AM (GMT)
Awesome first comic XD

But Himo's right. Save your comics in .PNG. It'll look better.

Mettic - September 23, 2007 01:27 AM (GMT)
Well I don't know how, I use MSpaint and photobucket, Is that the problem?

Brian J - September 23, 2007 01:33 AM (GMT)
Good first comic, but like everyone has said, save in .PNG.

When you save your comic, under where you enter the name, it says "Save as Type". Change it to .PNG. The comic will look a lot...what's the word I'm looking for...sharper. They will be a lot sharper.

craig - September 23, 2007 03:52 AM (GMT)
I would just be beating a dead horse if i gave you advice also try to make your comic three panels wide that should fix the photobucket problem. other than that welcome to the fallout shelter don't to... I mean touch mikes radio its fun. ^_^

Mettic - September 23, 2007 12:32 PM (GMT)
Ok I turned the comic into a .PNG file, Also I might put in a new comic today

Mettic - September 23, 2007 03:29 PM (GMT)
Like I said before, I'd try to get a new comic in, AND I DID!
Surprising though, Two comics and their's already a plot

Zhilo - September 23, 2007 03:56 PM (GMT)
Well, I liked the design of your character, and It certainly is more than just a knuckles recolor. I'll give you some advice:

- You grammar: It will sound elitist, but proper grammar and punctuation MATTERS. "Their's" isn't "There's" and keep an eye out for the odd typo that may appear when you're writing the text bubbles, it happens to everyone.

-The background shouldn't be the biggest thing on the panel: Something most people overlook, is that your characters should be big in every pabel. It looks better. You CAN resize things in MS Paint, just make a selection with the scissors, press ctrl + W and you can select the new size, easy as that. The characters are the most important thing on the comic (Unless a specific joke requires a panoramic view, of course), and should be caling everyone's attention. To see an example of thisyou can see my most recent comics. Dont use the full body of your sprite in every panel, try resizing everything so only your upper body appears in the panel. It'll look diferent and more ineresting.

Other than those details, the humor is relative. Hope you put this advice to use, as they will improve the quality of your comic.

Mettic - September 23, 2007 04:07 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Zhilo @ Sep 23 2007, 10:56 AM)
Well, I liked the design of your character, and It certainly is more than just a knuckles recolor. I'll give you some advice:

- You grammar: It will sound elitist, but proper grammar and punctuation MATTERS. "Their's" isn't "There's" and keep an eye out for the odd typo that may appear when you're writing the text bubbles, it happens to everyone.

-The background shouldn't be the biggest thing on the panel: Something most people overlook, is that your characters should be big in every pabel. It looks better. You CAN resize things in MS Paint, just make a selection with the scissors, press ctrl + W and you can select the new size, easy as that. The characters are the most important thing on the comic (Unless a specific joke requires a panoramic view, of course), and should be caling everyone's attention. To see an example of thisyou can see my most recent comics. Dont use the full body of your sprite in every panel, try resizing everything so only your upper body appears in the panel. It'll look diferent and more ineresting.

Other than those details, the humor is relative. Hope you put this advice to use, as they will improve the quality of your comic.


Character: Thanks, I worked hard on it.

Grammar:I f***ing hate grammar.

Character sizes: I know about the character sizes thing, But sometimes I fear that the characters will get too big.

Now... I search for something to do.

craig - September 23, 2007 04:13 PM (GMT)
well it looks like you going to get initiated after all and now theres someone who feels my pain don't worry everyone makes fun of my grammar. Also you might want to join the The TFS Comic Makers Union the details are on the page.

Kelax - September 24, 2007 02:30 AM (GMT)
You're off to a good start. It took me until comic 3 to get my first plot started.

Wise_Idiot - September 24, 2007 02:34 AM (GMT)
FOOLS! I TOLD YOU ZOMBIES WOULD TRY TO TAKE OVER! BUT YOU DIDN'T BELIEVE ME! I WAS RIGHT ALL ALONG- *tranq'd by MW and dragged away*

Cador_2004 - September 24, 2007 03:16 AM (GMT)
Hm... I have to agree with Zhilo, and I don't think robotic creatures breath anyway. and you need to switch your sprite sheets to png. Now.

Jefu - September 24, 2007 09:25 PM (GMT)
The comics aren't too bad. Theirs some mistakes but they are easily fixable. Comics pretty funny, and the plots caught my attention in a way.

Mettic - September 24, 2007 09:55 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cador_2004 @ Sep 23 2007, 10:16 PM)
I don't think robotic creatures breath anyway.

Well I have a ansear (Spelling) for that. You see, I have a air filter (I know I'm talking sprite wise right now) the carries though what we would call a "mouth" to stop the body from over heating.Couse unlike me, Boomey does have a air filter but it's in a different place...A horrible place... It's also the reason why this comic isn't going to have any fart jokes.

SSBFreak - September 25, 2007 02:32 AM (GMT)
Your comics are definately good for starters. ^_^ Keep it up.

Mettic - September 25, 2007 10:04 PM (GMT)
No update but their is something I want to release.
THE.WAR.TO.END.ALL.WARS.
Halo: The TFS wars
With the release of Halo 3 I disisded to make about it. Also ,where do you get sprites of vehicles?

Cador_2004 - September 25, 2007 10:25 PM (GMT)
... May I be the first to say: PREPARE FOR THE RVB PARODY OF THIS!!!!


(Lol Wise can be Caboose.)

craig - September 25, 2007 10:41 PM (GMT)
no fair i want to be... hold on if hes caboose then who am I?

Cador_2004 - September 25, 2007 10:44 PM (GMT)
Good point Craig, you're about as intellegent as Caboose, so you'll be him.

Mettic - September 25, 2007 10:57 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cador_2004 @ Sep 25 2007, 05:25 PM)
... May I be the first to say: PREPARE FOR THE RVB PARODY OF THIS!!!!


(Lol Wise can be Caboose.)

No, this is not parody of RVB, besides I'm still a bit depressed that it ended... No it's more like people from TFS playing halo online, just so much crazier. Their will be EXPLOSIONS!,BULLETS!,GUNS!,VEHICLES!,ROMANCE!(Not really.).

Himo Galanodel - September 26, 2007 04:01 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Mettic @ Sep 25 2007, 04:57 PM)
QUOTE (Cador_2004 @ Sep 25 2007, 05:25 PM)
... May I be the first to say: PREPARE FOR THE RVB PARODY OF THIS!!!!


(Lol Wise can be Caboose.)

No, this is not parody of RVB, besides I'm still a bit depressed that it ended... No it's more like people from TFS playing halo online, just so much crazier. Their will be EXPLOSIONS!,BULLETS!,GUNS!,VEHICLES!,ROMANCE!(Not really.).

Yeah, that's totally not going to be an RvB parody

...

I call Church!

I don't make spelling errors dangit! The computer has a mind of its own!

Wise_Idiot - September 26, 2007 04:06 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cador_2004 @ Sep 25 2007, 05:25 PM)
... May I be the first to say: PREPARE FOR THE RVB PARODY OF THIS!!!!


(Lol Wise can be Caboose.)

Don't make me get the Spartan Laser...

Zhilo - September 26, 2007 04:26 AM (GMT)
.... I would probably attach a beam sword to the end of a stick to make an axe.
Never been particulary good at halo 2 however, i just joke around with plasma grenades, trying to stick them on people from far, far away. It's always hilarious when i manage to peg someone on the head with one.

craig - September 26, 2007 05:47 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cador_2004 @ Sep 25 2007, 02:44 PM)
Good point Craig, you're about as intellegent as Caboose, so you'll be him.

you know a guy can take that the wrong way cador.
But I don't really care.

Yay im caboose.

Mettic - September 27, 2007 01:07 AM (GMT)
I had a lot of time on my hands today, so I made a new comic
Also it begins to show some hints upon Boomey's and Mettic's (Character) past...

Himo Galanodel - September 27, 2007 01:37 AM (GMT)
looks like you're still having problems with quality or something.

Mettic - September 27, 2007 01:39 AM (GMT)
Wired... I'll try growing the comics size.

craig - September 27, 2007 04:15 AM (GMT)
I probably know that your not a zombie. I just like to join in mob beatings.

Mettic - September 27, 2007 07:40 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (craig @ Sep 26 2007, 11:15 PM)
I probably know that your not a zombie. I just like to join in mob beatings.

Thanks for the support you little basCENSOR!

craig - September 27, 2007 08:23 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Mettic @ Sep 27 2007, 11:40 AM)
Thanks for the support you little basCENSOR!

Any time "mate."

Gamemastermz - September 27, 2007 08:32 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
I probably know that your not a zombie. I just like to join in mob beatings.

QUOTE
Thanks for the support you little basCENSOR!
Heh, it is nobody fault except your. If you just gotten the thing over with, you would only have one or two person (I got it over with myself by letting Akuma hitting me with his Raging Demon without resistance for free). Now, you got a mob after you, thinking you are some type of Zombie. So, again I must state, there is nobody to blame but yourself.

craig - September 27, 2007 08:33 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Gamemastermz @ Sep 27 2007, 12:32 PM)
Heh, it is nobody fault except your. If you just gotten the thing over with, you would only have one or two person (I got it over with myself by letting Akuma hitting me with his Raging Demon without resistance for free). Now, you got a mob after you, thinking you are some type of Zombie. So, again I must state, there is nobody to blame but yourself.

YAY someone is on my side.

Gamemastermz - September 27, 2007 08:40 PM (GMT)
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YAY someone is on my side.
Well-l-l, I wouldn't say that entirely...he was asking for it, true, but you should've told the other that he wasn't a zombie. So, don't think I'm entirely on your side.

Zhilo - September 27, 2007 09:30 PM (GMT)
So.... are we killing the zombie or not?. I cannot have people eatng people. that's just not right!

Turkey T. - September 27, 2007 09:41 PM (GMT)
Um, isn't he metallic?
if he is, just take the burning.

....zombies are neat anyways...if they didn't scare me so much.

Gamemastermz - September 27, 2007 09:54 PM (GMT)
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So.... are we killing the zombie or not?. I cannot have people eatng people. that's just not right!
...O-o-okay, hearing him say that is like hearing the greatest ironic statement in the world! ...Heh, my guess is that you just afraid zombies will steal your meals from you. Is that so, Zhilo?

Mettic - September 29, 2007 12:36 AM (GMT)
MY GOD.
Just look.




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