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Title: WIP: Iota


Iota - January 2, 2007 08:17 PM (GMT)
That's right, me, SPRITING. Hide your children.

I've attempted to use Let as a base. This is my first sprite ever, so be gentle.

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...just kidding. (God, it looks like one of Edge's drawings)


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Okay, shoot. What am I doing wrong here?

Betatronic - January 2, 2007 11:02 PM (GMT)
Aside from the lack of glasses, I like it. It's got all around good shading, and actually looks like your character.

All you need now is more poses.

And perhaps shortening the forearm of the front arm. It looks long...

Iota - January 3, 2007 12:55 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Betatronic @ Jan 2 2007, 03:02 PM)
Aside from the lack of glasses, I like it. It's got all around good shading, and actually looks like your character.

All you need now is more poses.

And perhaps shortening the forearm of the front arm. It looks long...

Lack of glasses? Yeah, he has them. Right below the eyes, see?

Gamemastermz - January 3, 2007 02:00 AM (GMT)
Then, made them more visible. It looks like part of his eye. And, remember that the glasses change the skin color slightly, that is under the glasses, to show transparent of the glasses.

GrooveMan.exe - January 4, 2007 04:44 PM (GMT)
^ That's hard to pull off.

I prefer giving glasses a slight tint. They look different to the skin, and the white of the eyes, so you know they're glasses.

Going by your mugshot, the front bang is too thick, but ignoring your mugshot, it's perfect. >__>

Tenjen Kouken - January 4, 2007 04:53 PM (GMT)
For the stance, the jeans or whichever pants he's wearing, need more creases and tight folds. but that might over complicate it.

His front bang extends out far too much before it finally goes down.

his forearm might be a little too thin as well. Though that might just be the effect from its length

Iota - January 4, 2007 06:34 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (GrooveMan.exe @ Jan 4 2007, 08:44 AM)
^ That's hard to pull off.

I prefer giving glasses a slight tint. They look different to the skin, and the white of the eyes, so you know they're glasses.

Going by your mugshot, the front bang is too thick, but ignoring your mugshot, it's perfect. >__>

I didn't draw my mugshot there. Normally, I draw it bigger. More accurate to the size on the sprite.




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