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Title: WIP:Tarx


+Anima - December 25, 2006 06:46 PM (GMT)
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Ok. This is what i have. Used Ken's head, Allen's upperbody., and haru's legs.

i used Allen's cool arm becuase I'm an +Anima and I need some kind of animal bodypart.
tell me what you think

Teepo S.T. - December 25, 2006 09:11 PM (GMT)
You should edit Haru's legs more so they don't look the same as his, or use someone else's legs because a lot of people are using his lately. Another thing, blend the sprites a little more, it has to look like one style.

+Anima - December 25, 2006 09:40 PM (GMT)
The problem for me is, I don't know what legs to use. Any suggestions?

Kaliback - December 26, 2006 11:18 AM (GMT)
Id suggest either Yusuke or Ogre's legs...ogre might need some work though since his legs are all beefy..

btw, ogre comes from the same game haru came out of..

armadilloHD - December 26, 2006 02:52 PM (GMT)
No necK?

+Anima - December 26, 2006 04:34 PM (GMT)
I have a neck. It's just being covered by the shirt/armor.

+Anima - December 26, 2006 05:13 PM (GMT)
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Ok, I tried to use Yusuke's leg's and they looked horrible on him1 Then I edited Kenshin's legs to look like jeans.I got this. Then I added Yusukes's feet cause I like them.


The sprites at the bottom are the final product.
what do you think?

GrooveMan.exe - December 26, 2006 10:09 PM (GMT)
The shading on the hair is horrible. You haven't actually gone over all the shades. Give me a bit, and I'll fix it for you.

Edit: All right, fixed.

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Changed the hair to a more reasonable, less saturated tone. I've kept the pallet, so you can use it. I noticed you didn't acyually edit the body or legs, so I change the top a bit (diagonal zip, crucifix motif, shoulderpad thingy), and removed the far too common chain on the legs.

It's not much, but it looks much cleaner than what it was.

+Anima - December 26, 2006 10:51 PM (GMT)
Thanks! With this i can start to work on the whole sheet.

Delta - December 28, 2006 06:27 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (GrooveMan.exe @ Dec 26 2006, 05:09 PM)
The shading on the hair is horrible. You haven't actually gone over all the shades. Give me a bit, and I'll fix it for you.

Edit: All right, fixed.

user posted image

Changed the hair to a more reasonable, less saturated tone. I've kept the pallet, so you can use it. I noticed you didn't acyually edit the body or legs, so I change the top a bit (diagonal zip, crucifix motif, shoulderpad thingy), and removed the far too common chain on the legs.

It's not much, but it looks much cleaner than what it was.

Looks like an Air Hump to me...>.>

GrooveMan.exe - December 30, 2006 08:11 AM (GMT)
>_> I said it was fixed, not perfect. Blame Haru's legs. I really wasn't in the mood for assembling a new base How 'bout you have a go?

Betatronic - January 5, 2007 11:22 PM (GMT)
^^;;; I kinda liked the way those kenshin edit legs looked. If someone could managed those a bit better, they'd look real good.




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