First off, I hope this is in the right section/actually "legal"

Anyway, A while back, Iota came to me and said, "Hey Edge, lets make a comic. You can be the writter, and I'll be the artist." And I said "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING IN MY BATHROOM IOTA? And put some pants on. God damn."

Anyways, a few days back I finally decided to take him up on his idea. So I gave him a script and he made the pilot for our comic.

Let me just say it again: Iota made all the fancy arts. I just did the script, and he wanted me to post it up here.

TFSU Pilot

The Comics

So, Comments? Suggestions? Anythings?

The art is good, and the scritps are ok. not to say you suck as a writer, it's just that i saw that joke coming, but it's just a pilot i guess.

Ey, Iota, the artist in this equation here. Just backing up what Edge said, somehow felt it necessary...

Right, new comic might be delayed, tomorrow, I'll start work on it, the first page, technically, the only thing though... it probably won't be inked, because tomorrow is Thanksgiving, and all that, and Friday, we recieve our 360, so things get complicated, but by friday, at the latest


-Iota

Come on Iota, we're waiting for those DS's...

Hmmmm, I don't think Mr. O.M.A has hair, but other then that, not bad, not bad at all.

This is great you guys! I was half expecting this kinda thing sooner or later. Thanks for making it, may there be many more! :clap: :clap:

Heheh... It amuses me so... Well done!!

I'd better be teaching the writing classes...
*Swings the Force Hammer* :P

very good job, dude. It made me laugh XD

I'mma say it now, all members are students, the overlords are teachers :P

-Iota

heh, I can see me as the student who skips and hides in the the men's room during class XD

Awww, crush my dreams, why don't you... :P
Ah well, I can still wreak havoc for the rest of them, I suppose... ^_^

What does TFSU mean?

Oh and nice comic.

The Fallout Shelter University
Simple, ne? :eek:

Anyway, what would some of the overlords teach, and what about the moderators... I'd like to see Mewchu try to teach... :D

*raises hand* I must teach computing. That is all. :P

*sits in stall of TFSU's men's room during P.E* I ain't goin' and nomod or overlord is going to say otherwise!

Nice work again, Iota.

I could be the violent, axe wielding, cannibal student every university has.

*points to his above post*

I'm that person that usually just appears out of nowhere...
and then rambles,then obsesses,then finally dissapears again.

The computer classes probably, with, uhh, "assistance" from BOFH and myself.
Note to self: do a self-portrait, no matter how crappy.

... I get to be Touji's teacher's pet, then... :3
Or is that such a good idea...? :naughty:

uh... can I be a student at TFSU taking Art Classes?

Lessee, I would be that guy who never pays attention, yet somehow always manages to pass...

So...may I enter as a Computer Science or Math student?

Feh. Nice job. I'd be the guy that everyone hates and likes at the same time. The one that the teachers hate, the students either tolerate, hate, or accept, and the one that would stay to 'imself. Story of my life. Lone doesn't come from nowhere....*Rant off*

Nice concept and an original idea!

All members are students, eh? Well I guess I'll study science then. I have to say this is an interesting concept, a university with all of the TFS members in it. I look forward to seeing what happens.

TFSU #1

So. TFSU #1. If you couldn't already tell, the guy on the right is me. Iota's not that good at drawing hedgehog based characters, so I said it'd be alright if we made me into a human, since he'd hate to have to draw a hedgey almost every issue. Also, the reason the hair looks like that is because if we made it look sonic style, I'd look too much like Iota, so I have Ichigo hair.

Anyway, we decided on an update schdeule. For now, it's gonna be something like every other day. Lets see if we can keep up with that.

Untill next time!

-Edge (Yeah, I figure I'm gonna sign my name on these updates, even though there's no reason.)

Oh boy... hope this doesn't cause the majority of viewers to go "Screw this" and leave XD

Neither I, nor Edge are taking requests, I said it, it's not a contest, it's nothing like that, it's a comic series that Edge and I are going to control, I'm sorry to anyone we might have mislead, but who's in it it up to Edge here.

Now then...


Here we are, at the start of a new comic series... cool...

To all my nonexistent fans, enjoy!

-Iota

So...no cameo requests?

Understandable. Either way, great start! ^_^

Yeah, I was thinking you might be annoyed at the flood of people saying "OMG IM IN [class] LOL"... and it seems the majority of your fans did leave... sad, really.

I think it looks like an okay comic. I'd like to see it get more strips.

The persona's amuse me so far... I have a good imagination as to how they sound as they're talking... :3

The AIM convo went as follows:

Edge: Yeah, you killed our readership.

Iota: Oops.


-Iota

I'm still reading, regardless..

I didn't know this was here, myself, as I usually ignore things associated with the word "comic" on this message board, but this is actually looking rather well, methinks. Only thing that bothers me is the leading on your speech font and the lack of backgrounds in the frames; otherwise, it looks like it could get interesting as the plot progresses.

TFSU #2

Ah yes, #2. Currently my favorate...of the two. Anyway, I don't have much to say about this, aside from the fact that Iota made it alot better than my original vision of it.

Also, sorry if I sound like a ass or something, but some comments would be nice. At least just put something if you read/like it, even if it's just an "o.o" or a "Epee" or just...something.

And now I must go. EDGEHO SILVER AWAAAAAY!

Those Kindergarden teachers have had it too good for too long...

TO WAR

-Mewchu11

I guess you stuck it to the man, or in this case the woman. Hopefully by sticking to your update schedule you'll get back all those 'readers' that were 'lost.'

'tis the case, Link.

-Iota

It's still Tuesday over here on the west coast, so here's TFSU #3. See, we're still on time.

TFSU #3 - Concrete Words

So, #3. The original script wasn't that funny, but thankfully, Iota was able to make it funnier than it was. I don't really have much else to say, aside from the fact that this comic pretty much came from the comments I got on the last comic. Yeah. I'm out of things to say.

Well, that's about it. Yep. To the few remaining fans, enjoy.

Hah, on time, baby. Excuse the lateness, 360, you know...

-Iota

Remember kids, vengence is FUN, in small careful...
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Aw, who'm I kidding? :P