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Warbastards: the first Megaversial war
Intro
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Not bad for a Bigginer.
it doesint look that good but
at least the jokes are funny.

What sonic said and if you work hard you can get better. SPRITES IN SIG!

cool welcome to the crew fire well i just added a new comic

I could list everything that is wrong with your comics, but I'm afraid I don't have a few days. So I'll just list a few:

SPELLCHECK! You misspelled about 3 words.

PUNCTUATION! Most comics do not look good with sentances without punctuation.

ahem I COULDNT CARE LESS... so yah if u dont like them then just dont read them

Alright...

1) Needs better spelling and grammar.
2) Needs Punctuation.
3) Needs textboxes, the comic doesn't look good without 'em.
4) And last, read this tutorial on how to make comics in MSPaint.

Well, mike, Gayle was trying to give you a bit of advice. However, he could have said it better himself, as I remember when he first made comics he was making very similar mistakes. But he does have a point, mike. If you aren't willing to make your comics look better, and your only response is 'if you don't like it, don't read it' then you'll get what you want. No one will read. You need to have a certain level of quality before people will take comics seriously.

well i guess ur right but he doesnt need to be a cridic about it like wolf he didnt like say thiers 10000000 things wrong with my comic he just gave me advise just like that.. so yah and im not good with text boxes

Hey if you wanna use me in your comic
sprites are under sig. use bouth sheets pleas.

aight thanks sonic.. people here are actully nice.. unlike the last forum i was at

Yeah unlike most forms we dont try to Kill/Eat
new ppl. we try and healp theam. thean drive em insaine ^_^

to late for the insane part my friend HAHAHAHAHAH well im working on the next comic right now WITH text bubbles

crowed: ooooooooo
EDIT: BAH CANT GET TEXT BUBBLE THING WORKING!! SOME ONE SAVE MIKE!

your on your own with that plus no time to talk!!!! I like to say with alittle help you can become a better spriter and comic maker...Look at me I started like crap i never gave up no sir never did...Well what im saying is that to try hard and do your best with comics sprites, jokes(not saying yours are bad there funny but when they go sour im saying) and you'll do ok...use me if you liek sprites are in the sig( I talk too much...)

Cool Comics Ill Join!1

alright people like it here

i just need work well i may as well make a title page for thre sheer hell of it oh and sparky it sais page not found for yer sprites (heh yer)

*leading a tour group* and here ladies and gentlemen we have mike's TFS comics. They are either signs of intelligence degridation, laziness, or the comic/forum itself is decaying. our experts are working on the answer as we speak....

new comic

and here ladys and gentlemen i make detective lance look like a total jack ass. call me lazy will yah

thanks for the advise and encouragements to every one who took the time to help me

no, you just proved my 4th theory, your bloody insane.
nice facial expressions, by the way

your funny wanna join my comic :lol:

Uhhhhh, actually...

http://invisionfree.com/forums/The_Fallout...showtopic=12139

You don't have to really ask.

As for the forth comic, it isn't bad, but needs more work me thinks.

hmmm :DP: *sip* sure, why not. i enjoy insanity

aight welcome to the nut house

i know wolf i just asked cause it wasnt going so well at first and he may have gotten mad if i didnt ask

no i wouldn't. i'd simply have something happen to you in mine....i'll probably still have something happen, but it wont be as bad.

oh ok well i better get to work on the next one

HILLAROUS YOU GET the last spot in my comic for it main heros!

EDIT: Also use microsoft word (latest version if possible) look for auto-shapes then click it and then use callout and there your texts bubbles! Also might take a bit to get it right it took me about 40 trys beefore i figured out what Wil tutorial was saying and with that i say to him THANK YOU!!!

wat trent said was true! if i respect people and make incredibly funny comics PEOPLE WILL LIKE ME!!! oh and by the way i dont got microsoft word

well what ever i just finished the next comic
AND HERE YA GO

FUNNY! but in one of the panels my eye was ehh...not white just letting you know.

i know.. but black is just so good on you (jokeing around) it was a mistake

Holy crap. The quality isn't supreme but the jokes... made me laugh so hard.
I notice that I get most of the funny lines... HURRAY!

LADYS AND GENTLEMEN THE MAN WHO HELPED ME MAKE THIS WORK OF ART ELLIOT THE FOX

oh yah and for fireyon
check this out

...Hi? Heheheh. Anyways I have some fan stuff.

And if that doesn't show up... ZOMG FAN STUFF

that is awsome dude

Yes! as long as jokes are funny and the quality is poor it still funny!

Edit: And the fan comic.....HILLAROUS!!! *falls back in chair luaghing his arse off*

you guys are gonna hit me for this but ima gonna try and make a few fusion sprites AHH *covers face*

Fu... sion? I'M GONNA LOVE THIS!

*thinks for a moment*

If it invovles me a insane idiot and you fusing i will really WANT TO SEE THIS!!!!

*uncovers face* few okay ill get straight to work

EDIT: well it took me 5 minutes buuuuut

dont say i didnt warn ya

ok.....BUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH THAT IS FUNNY now let see me and you.

im on it


not as good as the last one but meh