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Title: Poem for a mate


Ashes_Of_Fire - January 10, 2006 12:02 AM (GMT)
I know it's not like me to write a poem, i'm not much of a poetic writer, but i gave it my shot to do a poem about a friends Girl friend that recently suicided.

You always wish to shed a tear,
For those of who that could not be here
The days go by, as you wonder why,
How could they possibly want to die?
They were not close, they were not far,
They were not a shining star.
Why'd you leave?
Now we greive
The loss of a human Soul.

I gave it my bet shot.

Elephande - January 10, 2006 03:29 AM (GMT)
I liked it. Simple, yet emotional.

Ashes_Of_Fire - January 10, 2006 03:53 AM (GMT)
Thankyou, since I don't really write them much, it's sad for me, I hardly knew her, but I could have done something that could have helped.




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