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Title: A poem


Wind - January 6, 2006 03:08 AM (GMT)
Im entering this in for my school writing contest. Tell if you like it :happy:

Darkness.
Many fear it.
Some dwell within it.
A few even embrace it.
We try so hard to push it out
Afraid of all the terrible, wicked things
Life to us is a fairy tale, where nothing can corrupt our happiness...
In the end, we have to accept that life has its moments of joy, and its downfalls of sorrow
And that there is no such thing as a life where nothing can go wrong

Swordmaster - January 6, 2006 05:25 AM (GMT)
fairly good if I do say so myself.

However, I don't see much truth in that poem from a scientific optimistic perspective... because for all we know someone can be having a perfect life in THEIR OWN reality. Because you see... just as many people think god created us... others say that we created god, which can also be termed as we created reality, but is it truly reality? No, we perceive it as. Anywho, I don't want to get into philosophy here.




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