I thought you always be their
I thought you'd never go
But now you're gone
And I miss you so
I still can't belive that you're not hear
And I'll always whish you where
I'll never forget you
I'll always remember
Even thoght you're dead
And you'll never come back
I'll always love you dad
Always

It made my mum cry and she think that I should show it to my enghlis teacher. I think it's a pretty okay poem. I'm pretty shore that I made som spelling mistakes thoght..... Anyway what do you think?

Ah, short and sweet. It's a very beautiful poem. But it would be more beautiful without the spelling mistakes, no? Let me see... ah!

I thought you would always be there
I thought you'd never go
But now you're gone
And I miss you so
I still can't believe that you're not here
And I'll always wish you were
I'll never forget you
I'll always remember
Even though you're dead
And you'll never come back
I'll always love you dad
Always.

They're very minor spelling mistakes. You've good english. :biglaugh: How have you been learning? I wish I could learn Spanish, Chinese, or Japanese that well.

Well I learned most of my enghlish by watching Tv and some in School. It's incredabel how much you acculy can learn by watching the Tv.

You make the TV sound like a good thing. :bigblink: Perhaps if you use it right...
I watch chinese soap operas, and I still don't know much. Oh dear, we seem to be going off topic. Is that the only poem you have, Ellie-san?

hm? I thought I posted here? oh well...

regardless, Ellie, that isn't that bad of a poem, aces mine ^^