Drowning in your tears

"The love in 1's eye can change 1 mind
The eternal pain of 1 soul shall die, and fade away
like the Fire washed away by water
But tears can empty the heart, making the sorrow unbarable to bare
in 1 men's life...
A grim smile shows the pain in your heart
and you still don't know we suffer the same
No raining day shall wash away your pain
And no sunny day can put a smile on your face
1 man's tears can drown a man in joy and happiness
Love is found again inside your heart yeah
But pain of sadness and sorrow, can't kill any-one
It only let you drowning in your tears
only let you drown in your own tears
Oh it seems that happiness is killing you
but I am here to whipe away your tears
And I always share your pain until our death
1 word shall leave my mouth which is... love"

great poem bro

It is. Sounds like something your fave group could use.

Well... to be honest... that Poem is actually a song I wrothe a few month's ago and yes... it would be nice if HIM would use my poem for their next Album

It's normal for Poems to be turned into songs. "Unpretty" by TLC started out that way.

Dude... The Poem started as a song... I just removed a few thing's and their was the Poem

My bad.

No big problem Bro

Here is 1 I wrote after I'd returned from the Czech Republic

Joy, Happiness and Sorrow

Death is only something we share
my love you don't have to be afraid
cause I am here with you my darling
just save your Happiness for tomorrow
cause today we drown in your tears
1 drop of our blood shall taste like wine today
I see the Horror in your Beautiful Eyes
and yet you show no fear, that's why I love you
In this dying world we live in
and our love keeps us together
in Joy and Sorrow we believe
as 1 drop of your blood taste like Life tomorrow
and your tears are like venom
that has poisoned my heart
1 drop of my blood taste like death for the Day after tomorrow
In this Joy we where born and in Happiness we have found each other
And in the Sorrow we Die - tonight

The End

It's like something music from an action movie.

Lovely poem/song lyrics Ville Valo. Make a great deaf metal song. B)

You mean Death Metal Song's Miss Lady Hawk and thanks

The first Poem is actually a Love-Metal/Dark-Metal cross song. The second Poem is just a poem, but it actually has a song writhen in it which is waithing to get out

Plus for the fact that I am a song lyric writher who's interest lies in death, pain, love, sorrow and grief... With offcourse along the lines of the music from HIM

Maybe I should post my song's as well

Songs go under music.

Sorry! I have trouble spelling. :P
Yeah, I would love to read more of your song lyrics.
I never heard of HIM.
I mostly listen to bands like Clairvoyant, Amethystium, 741, Papa Roach, Rob Zombie, & etc.
Here's something weird. I write songs too. I also play the Guitar (Electric & Acoustic), Recorder, Indian flute, Piano, & Spirit Drum.
I mostly play a mixture of Celtic, Rock, & Silly Songs (Mostly when I'm just goofing off.) :P .
I too love to write songs about pain, misery, death, destruction, & all things that sound like suicide to your ears. :lol: I also love to sing. Was in Chorus for 7 1/2 years both middle & high school. So you know I'm just that good. ;)
Do you play any instruments? ^_^
Are you in a band or just a solo-artist like me? :D
Sorry for so many question. I just love all things music & DEATH METAL. :rolleyes:

No problem at all about asking me all those question's... I will try to answer them

Do I play any instruments??? I am sorry to say that I don't play any kind of instrument. I am however interested in playing the Drum's (no joke), but I sing a lot and I actually write 2

Am I in a band or am I solo artist??? Neither of them. I did however sang in front of a few people who I knew and didn't knew, but I was nervous as hell but I did it and they liked it. From that day on I went on singing until I am dead. I do however have a dream of 1 day starting a Band of my own which will be named HIS (Him's Infernal Sanctuary), The music will be a mix of Hard Rock, some Gothic and a lot of Love Metal in it

For HIM I can recommend to you their official website http://www.heartagram.com and go to music... From their you can listen to samples of their song's as my screen name is the name from the Vocal of the Band and also my Idol

Clairvoyant, Amethystium, 741, Rob Zombie are band's/artist I don't know about... Papa Roach on the other hand... Give me a Shotgun and I shall let HELL come upon you!!! The same goes to Slipknot, Alice Cooper, Metallica, KISS, Iron Maiden, Guns and Roses, Sepultura, koRn, Rammstein, Nightwish, Dimmu Borgir, Children of Bodom, etc... which is also kinda interesting because the Metal Bands from Finland and Norway are the type of music that calm's my soul, expecially HIM

Now for how long are you into Death Metal Music???

B)

I asked that towards Miss Lady Hawk B., not to you

Here is a poem that is sad because of a lost and pain I am dealing with since January

Angel

An Angel she was, an Angel she is
born without hate, lived a live full of love
I'd prayed to God for letting her stay,
but he took her away, laughing in my face
With tears in my eyes I am angry to the world,
but also feeling weird, for she is back to her kind
An Angel she was, an Angel she is
And she will always be in our hearts
as she is watching us, from above...
like a real Angel, she love us & we love her

Einde


In loving Memory to my Aunt: Thea Herni-Nagy

Nice to see a certain word wasn't used. Good poems.

Drums good choice. :D

I guess you can say since High School. That was when I went through my violent teenage years. When I really started to rave havoc. :mellow:

Yet, as for heavy metal/rock bands I always been into them since I can remember. That & in High School I was also known as Carrie, because I busted this one guy in the face. ^_^ He really pissed me off. I told everyone around me that he started it first. Which is true? :huh: He hit me first & I just finished it. Sweet, shy, violent, vindictive, & pretty. I had it all & never got sent to the principal's office. *hee hee* :lol: Suckers! :D

I was a hell razor back then. Not going to lie. In my youth I was somewhat sweet, but also a very violent child. I got into trouble every chance I could, but nothing too major. Unless you think that putting your little bro. on the spin cycle of the washing machine was a bit extreme.

I am not too violent anymore. The only reason that I was violent before was my Da, kids at school picking on me, & etc.. Yet, I am only violent when I have to be. I don't ever choose to be.

Na, it was when my world that came crashing down I turn to heavy/death metal or rock for comfort. To hear my emotions being expressed by those bands lyrics. That was also when I began writing musick. ;) :)

I was rarely violent in school.

What a wonderful poem. Your Aunt Thea Herni-Nagy would be very proud. ^_^ May she see the Lady & Lord, and always know love, peace, & hope. :D

So true.

I was only violent when the other person would start it. I hate fighting, but my modo in life with me. Don't dish out what you cannot take. The guy I was talking about slapped me in the face for no reason. So, I gave him a dose of his own medicine.

Wouldn't you, if you were me? :mellow:

You're talking to someone who was traumatized by his high school experience.

Isn't it a butt. Why do kids have to be so cruel? Other than things might be going horrible at home for them too. And they might feel like that they have to pick on others in order to gain kool points or something of that sort. :(

Even certain faculty members hated me.

That sucks.

Oh, Michael! I forgot to tell you that I just heard a song from HIM. Yet, it kept skipping on me. <_< From what I heard I think you found yourself another HIM fan. :P I love that song Burned Alive By Love. Do you know another site where I can listen to HIM without it skipping on me? :mellow:

I asked my sister to look up songs by that group for me. She hasn't.

You mean Buried Alive By Love and those song's are sample's... If you want to hear the entire song you better go download them from either Kazaa or Winmx

And it is Michel like in Michelle (And NO... I am not a girl, but a guy)

But I will send you a PM when or if I find a good HIM site on which you can simply listen to the song's... But have you tried http://www.himonline.tv/ yet??? As far as I know it is the best site of HIM next to their official website

-Ville Valo

P.S.

Thanks for the praise on the poem "Angel"... I wish that she never died...

Excuse me... I am going to cry in a little corner :unsure: :( :( :(

I hardly ever ask anyone to do things for me, because half the time they forget or just won't do it. <_<

Oh sorry! I am so use to spelling Michael, "MICHAEL." Because I have another friend with the same name. That & I am not use to spelling it, "MICHEL." I will do my best next time to remember that Michel. :D

I didn't know that those songs where just sample songs. As soon as I get up some cash instead of just downloading the songs. I will buy the CD. :P

You're welcome! If it makes any difference. I don't believe that death is an ending. Only the beginning of a new life, in a new world in which we need no body. Just our love & like a circle we will all meet again someday. ^_^

Here *Teddy Bear Hugs* I thought that you may need hug. ^_^ Chin up. Tomorrow might be a brighter day. Misery is shared by all & I definately share yours. :( :)

When it comes to me EVERYONE FORGETS and that pisses me off.

I try not to forget, but ever since my concussion my memory has been real bad. If I do. I don't mean to. :(

I accidentally gave my cousin a concussion when he was a toddler over TEN YEARS AGO. My relatives don't trust me to be alone with my young cousins. He's okay but a LIVE WIRE!!!

My "tomorrow" was like going trough the gates from hell

And yes, I also believe that their is a life after death but their are 2 different places to go to namely Heaven and Hell... Just pray that you go to Heaven because Hell is everything but nice and plezant believe me

And Bobby... If you think that I am ignoring you or anything, THINK AGAIN!!!

I don't think you are, dude.

Sorry to hear that Mr. Michel. I pray that tomorrow is a brighter day for all of us here at PUAO. :D

I believe that there is an Otherworld (aka. Heaven), Underworld (Hell), & Middleworld (Where spirits get trapped & it's hard for them to be set free.). ^_^

As for me going to Heaven. I refuse to go without my beloved. Without him Heaven will be nothing, but a sad place for me. :(

Purgatory.

Po-tat-o. Po-ta-to. Means the same thing. :P :lol: I just put it in Wiccan terms.

The area between Heaven & Hell is called Purgatory.

In my religion (Paganism) Purgatory can also be know as the Middleworld. Depends on who you ask. Most don't know this, but there are many different forms of Paganism. EX: Neo-Paganism, Norse, Egyptian, Shamanism & etc. :)