Title: Feeling Lonely
Description: A New Poem
Purple Ranger 14 - July 26, 2004 06:34 AM (GMT)
Feeling Lonely
Loneliness is something I regularly feel.
So much in fact that it's like I can't heal.
My heart's been shattered by my friends
And it seems to have no end.
I often feel like a freak
Almost every week.
Often I usually dread the coming weekends
Because I wish I had some true friends.
I've been alone for what seems all my life
But I have managed to take it in strife.
TheBookerMan - July 26, 2004 06:39 AM (GMT)
Great poem my man. Awwww I know how your life is. You do such a good job of being a friend and don't you let anyone tell you differently. You're a great guy and you write such great poems and stories. Keep up the good work. You're a very talented writer. :)
Purple Ranger 14 - July 26, 2004 06:41 AM (GMT)
First poem I've written in quite some time.
Optimusprime81 - July 26, 2004 12:23 PM (GMT)
But still bobby dude very well done.
Purple Ranger 14 - July 27, 2004 04:30 AM (GMT)
brandy - July 27, 2004 06:58 AM (GMT)
I liked it alot. YOu wrote what you think and thats all that people can ask of you
brandy
Purple Ranger 14 - July 27, 2004 07:00 AM (GMT)
Writing is one thing. Speaking it is a different matter.
Ville Valo - August 14, 2004 11:01 AM (GMT)
Nice Poem Bro... I never thought that you had it in you (writhing Poem's I mean)
Purple Ranger 14 - August 15, 2004 04:44 AM (GMT)
I've written A LOT of poems. The first one I ever wrote was back in the 5th Grade.
carebearmel151 - August 16, 2004 12:21 AM (GMT)
I suck at writing period but still Bobby you write very well and don't let anyone tell you otherwise!!! ~M :D
Forte.exe - August 16, 2004 04:14 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Purple Ranger 14 @ Jul 27 2004, 02:00 AM) |
| Writing is one thing. Speaking it is a different matter. |
i hear ya man. everytime i want to talk to this one person i sometimes stutter. i just write to her a lot. everytime i try to talk i panic. but i believe she knows how i feel. so does all her friends :) :wub: :wub: :wub:
Purple Ranger 14 - August 16, 2004 04:49 AM (GMT)
I stutter a lot too. Annoys my folks.
Thanks, Pink Ranger.
Purple Ranger 14 - August 22, 2004 04:50 AM (GMT)
Poetry.com sent me a response about wanting to add it to one of their books.
Ville Valo - September 6, 2004 05:35 PM (GMT)
Purple Ranger 14 - September 7, 2004 04:21 AM (GMT)
Post your poems in this section so that members who haven't joined Clash can see them.
Ville Valo - September 7, 2004 05:02 AM (GMT)
Purple Ranger 14 - September 7, 2004 05:05 AM (GMT)
Just the ones you want. In fact, once I get my zip drive functioning properly again, I am gonna post my old poems. Including one that makes a reference to comic book & real heroes.
carebearmel151 - November 6, 2004 07:04 AM (GMT)
Seriously, you should let Poetry.com publish that poem about feeling lonely.
Purple Ranger 14 - November 6, 2004 07:16 AM (GMT)
I've most likely missed the deadline.
Ville Valo - November 6, 2004 04:53 PM (GMT)
Purple Ranger 14 - November 7, 2004 04:42 AM (GMT)
carebearmel151 - December 12, 2004 07:43 PM (GMT)
That sucks but hey at least they wanted to publish it.
Purple Ranger 14 - December 13, 2004 05:05 AM (GMT)
carebearmel151 - December 19, 2004 04:28 AM (GMT)
I wish I could find my old journal. I wrote the best poem of my life but stupid me lost the journal.
Purple Ranger 14 - December 19, 2004 04:35 AM (GMT)