Title: My Wonderful Sunshine
Description: Song/Poem
Lady Hawk - September 17, 2005 08:32 AM (GMT)
My Wonderful Sunshine
written by: Rua
Don’t...
Don’t stand there,
And do,
Nothing as always.
Stop...
Stop howling out,
The rain will soon fall,
In your hands,
Dim...
Dimmer and shadow extinguishes the light.
Dark...
Darkness replaces my existence.
And here,
In my miserable life,
And here,
In my gloom laid the crimson knight
And here,
Take away... my... sun...shine.
Don’t...
Don’t hold back on me,
And watch as I,
Fade away.
Stop...
Stop listening for answers,
You won’t find them,
Until you close your eyes.
Faint...
Faint hint of a glowing flame.
Radiance...
Radiance casting beams on her face.
And here,
Is my whole world looking me in the eye?
And here,
Is my ideal paradise?
And here,
She hands me heaven... as... my... love... for her shines.
Here...
Here is my star,
And boy does she shine. The_Crow - September 17, 2005 09:59 AM (GMT)
you never stop amazing me with your poetry sweet Nicole...
And I must say that while reading your new poem, I also started humming a bit to discover the Love-Metal styled song hidden within it, you already have the song finished (but if you allow me, I'll turn this wonderful piece of poetry art into a Love-Metal shaped song text like Ville Valo did before me... I think)
so I'll give you infinity for this beautiful wonder of poetry art and music
Lady Hawk - September 25, 2005 04:33 AM (GMT)
Thank! :) Um Hell, it's already a Love Metal song. :huh: I wish that I could record it on my computer & let you have a listen. Yet, my computer has gone to shit. <_<
The_Crow - September 25, 2005 03:17 PM (GMT)
I see... My mistake Rua
and yeah, I really wish that I could hear you sing my Angel
And yeah, it really IS a good Love-Metal styled song/poem
almost forgotten... visit HIM's official website
http://www.heartagram.com for tour info for the USA
Lady Hawk - September 28, 2005 04:55 AM (GMT)
Sh*t! <_< The one around my hometown already came & leave. Heck there is always next year. :P
The_Crow - September 28, 2005 05:15 PM (GMT)
yeah, and I know how you feel with missing/finding out to late about a HIM concert, went trough the same thing, now I have to wait 1 year again
About your song, I shall wait until the day comes that you can upload it
Lady Hawk - October 21, 2005 07:40 AM (GMT)
You're going to be waiting a pretty long time. Sure you can wait that long? :huh:
The_Crow - October 21, 2005 04:49 PM (GMT)
yes I can, I will even wait until the Apocalypse come to hear this song from you
Lady Hawk - October 26, 2005 06:23 AM (GMT)
