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Title: Poem: Speed


Gym Leader Nigel - July 28, 2005 07:03 PM (GMT)
The adrenalin,
The rush,
The air rushing past
SPEED...

The thrills
The chills
The thought of death, lingering in the forefront
SPEED...

The race to the front
The need to beat all
The need to see new boundaries
SPEED...

Comments please- make any suggestions on it, I'm welcome to critisism or praise.

The_Crow - July 28, 2005 07:11 PM (GMT)
Well I must say that it is a very good poem, I see nothing wrong with it, so this post is a praise

Very nicely written, I can feel the emotion within the poem itself and only a few people can do that, so you get a solid :Ghostbusters from me

Purple Ranger 14 - July 28, 2005 08:45 PM (GMT)
:Ghostbusters

Lady Hawk - August 1, 2005 05:06 AM (GMT)
Dude you're nuts & *mowa* another masterpiece. :D




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