Im feeling so damm good
Cause right now Im in a lyrical Mood

As im sitting here listening to Common
Listening to him talking about life and the world trade Bombing

I got a great lyrical status
Cause in carnarsie, my rhymes is one of the best

If u dont know life tough
U dont know, nothing about being rough

All my life I been waiting for Messiah
People thiking he can fufill your hearts desire

I wanna be free like those who left
Like Malcolm X, and my grandfather, who both left through death

Its Jesus who b waitin 4 them
Demons, and the devil was hunting 4 them

But they changed their ways
Thats why they lived through so many good days

Through death u free your spirit
Those dont understand it fear it

Remember Rap is Poetry
I just prove it with my Floetry

I aint saying Im a poet
But when poets see they think, they Know it

Kool! B) I cannot rap, but that rap/poem is Slam'N. ^_^

Nice thanks Im gonna put a new up in a week, by the way Nice Avatar

Thanks! ^_^ Maybe I should try to write a Rap one day. :rolleyes: On second thought I will leave that up to you. ;) I can't Rap no matter how hard I try to. :rolleyes:

Here is my new rhyme

Rap with mad Passion
Carry a gun chrome flashing
I stay with ma thug faith
I roll out of da shadows like a wraith

Im a straight Ghost Rider
I stay ready, cause Im a fight
I wonder if some of these wack n***** reliaze they wack
If they dont soon they gonna killed, or even get f****** jack
Soon they gonna reliaze
That a rap star on the rize

I roll thrught with ma girl Arielle
While yall roll through with some old lady saying Marry Adelle
Might as well throw out a gangsta stand Amthem
So dont test me, I yall dont want to deal with Yung D da phantom

It looks like cupid hit me with arrow
Im a god on earth to my girl like the Pharoh
I stay with her 4 good
She need me Im a roll through in the hood

Im may be young, but Im still breathen
But I v seen alot, but at least Im alive when Im leaving
So now Im a end this
With some dis like the one done by Jadakiss

Im a desttroy u D-Lock
Dont test me b4 I hit u with ma glock

Looks good. I programed the forum to automatically censor the F word.

Actually I sensored them myself :P

The forum can fix it in case you forget.

Oh okay I understand

I like it! :D I had to read it a few times to get it. :huh: I thought my dyslexia was getting the best of me again, but then I realized that is how you had it worded. One word that you labeled as "rize" took me a second to see that you spell it in slang. :lol:

This is a new rhyme i wrote

this one is it out to all those I come to offend
This my apology, as hard as it can be I have to repremend
In My Life I have made a ton of mistakes
and Im a reconcile no matter how long it takes

I have have said things I have come to regret
But this is my chance to fix them, and make em correct
Im probably one of the most hated
f*** its probably just understated

I bet most of them wanted to be rid of me
If I needed a transplant, they would give me a kidney
This a apology from somebody who was grimey
those who don’t want to accept it know where to find me

Now let me say to sorr specifically first to Jannel
Sorry I called u ugly, its my bad I know I was save by the bell
Next up is Kyle bf Kya
Sorry for calling you b****, I cant say u didn’t gas my head up cause I aint a liar

Now I have grown
I like a bird who for the first time has just flown
Im never gonna grease again as a retailiation
Cause things no longer faze me, cause I have made a self evaliation

From now Im ever gonna falter
Cause now I stand by the alter
Now Im Nazereths Emcee forestarter
and Im as confident as Jesus is the he can walk on water

Wow! That would make a great lyrical rap. Give Eminem a run for his money. ;)

thanks lady hawk

You're welcome! ^_^

Your Probably real good at poetry

Yup! But I suck when it come to writing raps. :rolleyes:

if u can rap u can do poetry cause thats what rap is basically

Yeah, but I sound like a country hick when I tried to rap. :lol: