O.K. this is part of my pokemon fanfic.
Some of the pokemon that feature in this story is also made up. Disciptions of my pokemon will be given at the end of each part.

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His Name is Monty Bullman; he lived in the town of Littleport. He had green eyes, and Short, brown hair. Ever since he watched his brother in the Indigo Plateau battling pokemon on the television he knew what he wanted to do.. His Mum and Dad soon realized that too.

Monty’s Mum soon introduced Monty to Professor Beach, of the Littleports laboratory. She was the region of Stadle, top Pokemon Professor. Monty helped out in the laboratory, sorting out his brother’s spare and retired pokemon, clean out cages, and other minor stuff. She had started up three years before Monty joined, and one of her first trainers was his brother Blackadder. It had been two years since Monty joined.

One day, Professor Beach took Monty aside.
“Now Monty” She started, “Have you been giving your Birthday any thought?”
She pushed her glasses back up her nose.
“You know we really need the help around here?” She twirled her long, brown hair up.

Professor Beach was one of the youngest, female Professors, to graduate. Professor Oak of Kanto had trained her. She originally came from Cambridge. He laboratory she didn’t have a lot of aides to help her. Well more to the point zero, none, not a sausage.
“Well, I’ve really been looking forward to this. Plus My Dad said he would like to come with me, on this adventure…”
The Professor sighed.

“O.K. O.K.” She admitted defeat, “Have you decided on a pokemon yet?”

Monty shook his head; he hadn’t given it a lot of thought. He had two days left to think about what he wanted. He had worked with the Sprubs, A Lion Cub pokemon, and he quite liked their playfulness. He Avoided the Droguin, and he hardly saw the Rabbers.

“Not really, I liked the Sprubs. But, I think Droguin might be helpful in the long run.”
“The Penguin Chick, yeah. I think a lot of people have been talking about that Fire gym, beening very hard.”
“O.K. I’ve got to clean the Rattata cages out.”
“Rather you, then me.” Commented Prof Beach.

And she walked off to her Lab; Monty started to think as he cleaned the cages out. I am myself; I shouldn’t get one pokemon if I like another more. I should only get pokemon I like not pokemon, which should benefit me at a later date.
He struggled his thoughts about for a while. He looked at the clock. Wow! He overworked. Very unlike him. He released the Rattatas back into their cage.
Professor Beach and his Dad walked in, just as he was about to walk out.

“There you are!” Cried The Professor. “Quickly A Tauros got into a Widight field.”

“The Widights have it trapped,” commented his Dad.
They ran to the field, Monty picked up some rocks along the way. They passed a person sitting on a fence. A Leather Hat, and a Leather Coat, covered most of the persons body, Monty’s Dad said hello to him as they passed. Monty

Monty climbed over the fence into the Widight field. Widights are Poisonous Spider pokemon. Monty saw the Mob of Widights and the surrounded Tauros. He threw a rock a one Widight, but missed.

“Hey, Widights leave that Tauros alone.” He yelled.

Monty’s Dad went around the side of the Pokemon, Monty threw another rock, and it hit one on the head. All the Widights turned around and screeched at Monty, and

“Quick, Monty run.” Shouted Professor Beach.

The Mob of Widights started to charge at Monty, he turned and ran. Monty’s Dad quickly went in, and got the Tauros. Monty ran towards the fence and the professor.
The Mysterious person who Monty’s Dad said Hello too, got on the fence.

“Reach for my hand” Commanded a Young Male Voice.

Monty kept on running, the Widights slowly started to catch up to him. Monty reached his arm out for the Strange mans. As soon as Monty grabbed the person’s hand, he was lifted clear over the fence.

The Widights hissed at there defeat, and scattered off. Monty fell on the ground breathing heavily. The strange man jumped of the fence his leather coat, fluttering about.

“Are you alright Monty?” Professor Beach asked as she bent down next to Monty.
“Wow, talk about adrenaline rush!” He commented quickly. “Thanks you sir for helping me.” Monty told he strange person.

He lifted off this hat showing a fairly, young man. His Eyes were crystal blue, and his hair, short, spiky and blonde.

“Hey, I know you.” The professor gasped, “You’re the guy who’s leaving on the same day as Monty here.”

The man nodded, and smiled.

“That’s right, I’m to guess that you’re Professor Beach.” He raised his hand to shake hers. “And your name was Monty.”
“That’s right. Monty Bullman.” Monty replied. “How did you know my Dad?”
“He gave me a lift, this morning, oh yes. My name is Nomyt.”

Monty’s Dad ran over to them. They all said “see you later” and walked off to their homes, expect for Nomyt, who went to the Professors.

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More A week wednesday.

Sprub, Lion Cub Pokemon, Grass type starter. Dex info: This Pokemon like to play fight, with everything. Even grass can become an opponent.
Droguin, Penguin Chick Pokemon, Water type Starter. Dex Info: This pokemon will never leave it's parents side. If it does it will screech very loudly.
Rabbers, Rabbit Pokemon, Fire type Starter. Dex info: This Pokemon usually hides in holes, called Dens, made by it's parents.
Widight, Black Widdow Spider, Dark/Posion. Dex Info: It's posion can knock out large pokemon very quickly. A Tauros would take 1 mintue.

This belongs in the Pokémon section.

Sorry, B.

It was a misunderstanding. I'll create some rules for various sections to ensure this doesn't happen again..

Well I just took the time reading this fanfic and even though I kinda lost my interest in Pokémon, I actually like this fanfic

To Bobby, why in the name of Satan did you put a Fanfic in a Pokémon forum section??? This piece of Art belongs in the Fanfic forum section of this board, not the Pokémon forum section

To Nomytaker, you really should come up for yourself instead of getting pushed around and I am not making a joke either

Because it's a Pokémon story. I figured since we post Power Rangers stories in the Power Rangers section, we should do the same for the other topics that we write stories for.

If you where a bit smarter, you would have simply post your fanfics in theFanfic section on the day you first created this place... Not the other way around...

Yo Nomytaker... When will the next story be up???

I'm too easy going, as long as people read the fanfic, I cool.


Next part sometime next week. I'll try a pull myself away from Emerald.

Oh brother... Looks like I have a lot of work cut out in order to make you as hard as a friend of mine named Mark... He was like you in the beginning before he knew me

I'm too lazy to change my ways.....

Anyway, next part of the story is up. This is part of the story, has no new pokemon of my, It's just to give more background on Nomyt...

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Two days later, on the night before Monty, His Dad and Nomyt left. Monty and his Parents sat around the kitchen table that night; they were having a party, for Monty leaving. They asked the Professor and Nomyt to join them. The Professor joined, but Nomyt declined politely.

“It’s you last chance Monty.” Plead the Professor. She went down on her knees “You can change your mind, and stay here”
“I sorry, Clare, when I saw my brother those five years ago. I wanted to follow in his foot steps.”
“Professor,” Started Monty’s Mum, “Since I’m going to have a bit more time on my hands, I would like to help any way I can.”
“Thank you, Susan.” Replied the Professor

Monty’s mum brought in a leaving cake, on the cake was a picture of an Arcanine, Monty’s favourite Pokemon. He first saw an Arcanine on his Brothers team, it glowed yellowish, instead of the usual red, and won Montys Brother most of the matche. Monty’s room was pretty much covered it Arcanine toys, posters, books, bed covers; even his jacket had an Arcanine on it.

“Professor,” Asked Monty, “Do you know why Mr Taker refused to come?”
“No, he keeps himself to himself, although, when he help out yesterday at the lab. He…..”

She looked quickly out the window, but all she could see was the darkness.

“What is it?” questioned Monty’s Dad.
“Nothing, Bill. Monty you know how the Rabbers hide in the dens of the parents.” Explained Beach.

Monty nodded; he had never really seen Rabbers, only on books and videos.

“Well, Nomyt. Got them out, but he didn’t seem to do anything to get them out; he just stood in front of the holes, knelt. And the came to him.”

Monty sat back in his chair, as he heard this. He had tried everything, when he wanted to see the Rabbers. The Professor had no problem with any pokemon, she could walk in and out of any of the fields the all the Pokemon would ignore her. When Monty came into the fields, the pokemon would go ballistic, and hide, or they would chase him.

“But I tried that with them, on four accounts, five if you count the time that I fainted from heat.” Commented Monty.

The Professor had to go, Monty waved her goodbye, along with his Mum and Dad, before they left, and Monty quickly got a slice of cake and gave it to her.

“Please give this to Mr Taker?” requested Monty, and gave the cake to Beach.

Beach took the slice and walked around the corner, sitting on the fence was Nomyt, and he was looking in the window.

“Excuse me? What are you doing?” Exclaimed Professor Beach.
“Watching, remembering….” He replied calmly.
“Remembering what?” She questioned.
“Family.”
“Yours.”
“Yes, My Mother, My Father, My Sibling, and Myself.” Nomyt replied, “Please walk with me.”

They walked to the southeast edge of the town, Littleport itself was a small fishing village, and the only road went north. The land the made up the entire Stadle region was a giant upside-down U. Littleport was on the Left hand side of the region. They moved along the beach. And Nomyt started to talk.

“It was nine years ago, last Monday. I was just coming up to Ten years of age. A week before I left to come here, from Cambridge, my hometown. My Parents was asked to go on a cruise, they explained that they would be back, before I left.” He cleared his Throat.

He looked down at the sea beside him, and quickly ran to the other side of the Professor.
“They didn’t come back, three days after they were at sea. The ship sink. Nobody knows what caused it.” He looked out towards his hometown, which was in the middle of the Upside down U. Although he could actually see the land, he had a good guess at where it was.

“My sister was two at the time. My Darling Sister, doesn’t know Mother and Father. My Parents were Cambridge’s Fire Gym Leaders. Instead of the Gym being taken over by somebody else. I looked after it with the help of my Auntie. I had to leave my dream of adventuring with Pokemon Trainer on hold, till my sister is as good as what I am.” His eyes looked as if he was going to cry, but he didn’t.

“My Sister beat me this year, and I have confidence that she can capably look after the gym.” He said as he nodded, “Mother and Father would be proud of her. She looks almost like Mother”

Nomyt started walking back into the Village. The Professor sat down on the Beach, and thought.

Interesting story... So Nomyt Taker was a Fire Gym leader? Nice... This looks very original to be honest... Oh and if you want Nomy, you can take 1 of my made up Pokémon's like SeeSaw... You can find info on the little guy in the Make your own Pokémon thread from my old username

Thanks I'll keep that in mind.....

Also this is a call out for anybody here, I need trainners to radomly pop into my fanfic, so far I have a few that will be making a few apperances now and again. But I need more, if anybody wants too appear, please tell me the name you want to be, pokemon types that you want to use, tell me by PM or post on here.

Well if it isn't much of a trouble, I would like to pop up in your little fanfic

My favorite Pokémon's are the Dragon and Dark types... And if possible, I want SeeSaw as my first Pokémon (SeeSaw is kinda like Pikachu with the exception of SeeSaw being in his pokéball)

The name would by Eric Nagy (the trainer I mean... You can also use me as a Gym Leader)

My gym leaders are all filled, I have there names and pokes next to me *pats pile*, I'll try and get you into the fic at some point.

Now the Story really starts
Really

It was a warm Friday morning, at Nine O’clock. Monty lay in his bed; it was the last time that he would sleep in that bed. His Eyes opened quickly, and he shot up. Was it today that he would leave? Wait he thought. He struggled to get out of his bed, and in the panic he tripped and fell out of his bed.
His Dad, knocked on the door, and opened it. Monty’s Dad had green eyes, and black short. He was dressing in beige, multiple pocketed, jacket, and a dark green T-shirt could be seen under it, he also had a black trousers on.

“What on Earth was that noise?” He commented, trying not to laugh.
“Um… tripped, get out to see what day was on the Calendar. Where are you going?” Asked Monty.
“Hopefully with you, if you get to the Professors in time.” Came the reply.

It was the day that Monty had hoped for. He was going to go on his quest to be the Best Trainer that anybody has ever seen.

“I’ll wait for you down stairs, oh and you got a parcel.”

A parcel, Monty thought. Who would send him a parcel? He got changed quickly into a grey t-shirt, and blue jeans. Then the donned his Arcanine Jacket. The first time he had it on since he tried it in the shop. He rubbed the Arcanine that sat on the Top right hand shoulder.

“Let’s Go Arca.” He said to the Arcanine.

He walked down the stairs; he sat down at the dinning table opposite his father. On the table was the parcel. Monty’s Mum soon came in a placed breakfast in front of them. Monty looked at the Parcel. It was fairly small; a letter seemed to be attached to it.

“Why don’t you open it?” Commented Monty’s Dad Bill.
“Dad, You said always eat your breakfast first before opening parcels!” Exclaimed Monty
“No, that was you mum, she told me to say that.”
“William!” Monty’s Mum replied. “I think Monty dear. Since your leaving today….”

Monty pushed his plate aside, and pulled the Letter off first and read it out loud.

“To Monty. A gift to you, my little brother use it well. From Blackadder Bullman.”

Wow, he had never heard nor seen his brother since the Indigo Plateau those five years ago. He had seemed to disappear after that.

“I’d guess you’d better open that present.” Commented his Father.

Monty mum came into the room, as Monty opened the parcel.

A yellow and red striped Pokedex sat inside. A Pokedex is a small electrical device, which records and tells information on Pokemon. And they’re very expensive. Monty thanked his brother inside his head.

After he had finished his breakfast, Monty and his Dad. Walked to the Laboratory, as they got nearer they saw Nomyt sitting on a fence, surrounding the Laboratory.

“Good Morning, Mr Taker,” Commented Monty’s Dad.
“Hello Bill, and Monty I think you’re late a bit, one pokemon remains up there.” He said as he showed Monty his Pokeball.

Monty ran up the path to the Laboratory. While Monty’s Dad stayed and spoke to Nomyt.

Monty busted into the Laboratory, he saw Professor Beach sitting at the computer.

“I take it your still going….”
“Yes” replied Monty, “I’ve come to collect my pokemon. I’ve heard there is one left.”
“What this one?” She picked up the remaining pokeball.
“If that is the last one, yes. Please give me the last pokemon?”
“Did you ever decided on what you wear going to pick?” Asked the Professor, she started to wind Monty up.
“Err…. The Sprub, but it doesn’t matter if there is only one left, I’ll have it.” He started to get annoyed.
“No,” She remarked, “It’s Mine.”

She pocketed it, and then Monty saw her smile quickly. Then released she was wind him up.

“Professor Please?” Monty looked at her.

She nodded. “Okay, just be careful, the last one left is a Sprub”

She passed the Pokeball to Monty. Monty threw the ball in the air.

“Sprub, come out.” He commanded

“Spru..ub” The Sprub said, as it came out.

Monty knelt down to the Sprub, he smiled at it, as it smiled back.

“Sprub, are you ready to go on a great quest with me.”

The Sprub nodded, and danced around Monty, Monty grinned as he got the Pokedex out. He set the Camera of the Dex on his Sprub and the Dex recorded the information.

“Since when did you have a Pokedex Monty?” Asked Beach
“My Brother sent it to me.”

Monty sent Sprub back into the Pokeball, and said good-bye to the Professor Beach, and walked down to His Dad and Nomyt, raising his Pokeball in the air.

“Well what did you get?” Asked Monty’s Dad.
“Watch,” Monty Said, as he released the pokeball in the air.

The Sprub danced about them. Monty’s Dad suggested that they went quickly to show his mum. On the way to the House, Nomyt also asked Monty a Question.

“Monty, do you mind if I tag along with you and your father?”
“Please,” Monty replied.
Back Monty’s House, him and his Dad picked up their Backpacks, and Monty showed his Mum his new pokemon. After a while they walked outside.
Monty kissed his Mum good-bye, and then Monty’s Dad got kissed.

“Would you like a kiss too, Nomyt?” Asked Mrs Bullman.
“I’ll pass thank you.” Nomyt replied, “However thank you for asking.”

They started walking to the first town, and gym. As the reached Littleport forest, Monty looked back.

“From a small seed, great trees are grows. First you make your roots, then you make life happen.” Monty said under his voice.

After a little way into the forest, Monty’s Dad requested that they stop for a while.

“What’s wrong Bill?” Asked Nomyt
“Yeah dad.” Chipped in Monty,
“I forgot my pokemon.” Bill put his fingers in his teeth and whistled.

Nomyt and Monty looked at each other. Bill whistled again. Nomyt went and leaned against a tree, and watched. Bill whistled a third time.

“There he is.” Commented Monty’s Dad

A pokemon flew down; onto Monty’s Dad shoulder it was really big.

Monty pulled out his Pokedex, and aimed it on the new pokemon.

“Elgae, the Eagle pokemon, this Pokemon can spend ages in the air without flapping its wing, this helps it catch prey with its awesome eye sight.” Explained the Pokedex.

“Nice to see you old friend.”
“Elgae”
“Uh, Huh, this is my other son, Monty.” Bill showed Elgae Monty, “And that other one is Nomyt.”
“El Elgae”
Elgae hopped onto the floor as Bill opened his backpack, he got a luxury pokeball, and summoned Elgae into it. Monty stood there stunned.

“Right, let’s go.” Commented Nomyt.
“Yep,” Replied Bill.

They walked off and Monty stood there.

“Elgae!” He said to himself.


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Elgae, The Eagle Pokemon, Fighting/Flying type. Height 4' Weight 80lbs. Information, the longest one has been recorded staying in flight, is over 2 years. Over half that time it never flapped it's wings.

Sure, okay... I'm cool with it... As long as I still have SeeSaw right SeeSaw?

See??? SeeSaw **Jumps around happy**

And well the next chapter is nice, but what kind of Pokémon is a Sprub?

Sprub is at the bottom on the first post, usless your asked for a discription.
In that case I will do one for all featured pokeon up to this point.

Sprub, Is like a Lion Cub, but Light Green in colour. They usually have brown eyes. They have a small, thin brown tail.

Droguin, Looks just like a baby penguin, expect for a dark blue instead of black, and their backs.

Rabbers, A deep red and brown patches cover its body, looks like a rabbit. Brown eyes and white fluffy tail.

Widight, Has larger brown fangs, a big black blob for it's body, thin black and brown striped legs, and Eight Crimison Eyes.

Elgae, Has a tall body, mostly white, but looks as if it has a brown cape, it's wings are a mixer of tan, brown and white feathers. It's Gold talons are shaped like a fist. It head is tan and brownish, with a Gold Beak and dark brown eyes.

Ahaaa, very nice... Thanks

I can't wait for the next part

The First Trainer Battle

The sun had almost started to go down in to the horizon, the suns rays laid on the side of the three guys heads, as the walked out of the forest.

“There is Ely, commented Monty’s Dad, Bill.

Monty looked at the City, two fields from where he stood.
Ely was a big city; there were mountains on the Left side of the City, which were called Victory Mountains. Right at the very top, was a cave that leads towards Stadle Stadium, and the Stadlegance City. On the Right side was a small port.

“Excuse Me.” said a voice, “Are you Nomyt or Monty?”

The three turned around to see a Boy about Monty’s age. He had a blue waistcoat on, white shirt under that, and his Blue Trousers had no crease mark on it. He brushed his brown hair back, before he looked at Monty, and asked again.

“I’m Monty, why do you ask?” came Monty’s Reply.
“I wish to battle all who received a pokemon from Professor Beach. I class them as my arrivals.”
“First tell me you name.”
“Matthew Richard Cloud the third” Matt said in a posh voice.

Monty nodded as he grabbed his pokeball.

“Your on Matt.” He smiled back.

Matt grabbed his Pokeball and threw it.
“Go Droguin.”

The little, Dark Blue coloured, Penguin Chick, came out of it’s ball.
“Dro?”

Monty got the Pokedex out in his other hand and focused the Camera on the Droguin.

“Droguin, The Penguin Chick Pokemon. If separated from its Parents, it will screech very loudly, some have shattered glass.

Monty rubbed the Pokeball against the Arcanine that sat on the Top right hand shoulder of his Jacket. Then threw it.

“Go Sprub.” He commanded.
“Sprub rub.” It chipped.

The little, green, Lion Cub bounced playfully towards Droguin.

“Tackled attack Sprub.” Ordered Monty.

The Sprub spring to hit the Droguin.

“Tail whip, Droguin.” Came the command from Matt.

The Droguin’s tail wasn’t tall enough to hit the flying Sprub, and missed its target. Sprub landed straight into the Droguin.

“Ugh, Stand up Droguin.” Matt cheered his pokemon on, “Go for a tackle of your own.”

The Droguin, picked itself up of the floor, just as Sprub turned around the Droguin charged.

“Jump Sprub.” Monty strategically said.
The Droguin missed, as Sprub landed, it turned around and waited for an order.

“Go for a full blown tackle, Sprub” Commanded Monty.
“SSSSprub.” The little cub screamed as it jumped towards the Droguins Back.

THUMP! The Droguin lay on the ground.

“Droguin as been defeated, Flawless Victory” Remarked Nomyt.

“Oh! Get up Droguin.” Cheered Matt, “Come on you can.”

The Droguin remained still.

“O.k. You should rest, you were just weak from catching that new pokemon.” Matt explained to the Droguin as it returned to the pokeball, in his hand.

He switched the ball in his hand for another in his belt.

“Go Spight.” Commanded Matt.

A black spider came out of the pokeball; it was a little smaller than Sprub. It was completely covered in black. Monty once again got his Pokedex out.

“Spight, the Spider Pokemon. It loves to hide in crack in walls, with a few of its legs resting on its web.”

“Growl Sprub.” Ordered Monty.

“Sprubbbbbbb” It growled staring at the small pokemon.

The Spight stood there for a few moments paralysed from the growl.

“Knock it off, Spight. Poison Sting attack.”
“Woah, Sprub evade.”
A poison shot flew out from the Spights Mouth, Sprub just rolled out the way in time.

“Spight String shot attack.” Commanded Matt.
“Tackle attack.” Came Monty’s order.

As the Spight fired a Stream of String Sprub jumped over it towards Spight. The Spight stopped and re-aimed at the Sprub, and caught it mid-air. However, the Spight didn’t have time to move, and got hit.

Both Monty and Matt cheered, their pokemon to get up, Spight got on its eight legs first.

“Poison Sting attack, Spight.” Commanded Matt.

Sprub couldn't move in time, and got hit. To make matters worse the Sting poisoned it as well.

“Sprub has been Defeated, Victory Trainer Matt.” Refereed Nomyt.

Monty returned Sprub to its pokeball. Then walked up to Matt. Monty reached for Matt’s hand.

“Good Battle.” Monty Declared.
“Here, Here.” Replied Matt, “Now if only the other kid came through here, you haven’t seen him or her have you?”

Monty looked at Nomyt.

“Monty you need to get your pokemon, to a Pokemon Centre.” Commented Nomyt.

Monty nodded, as Nomyt started walking towards Ely.

“I’ll see you again, Matt. For a rematch.” Replied Monty.

Monty, his Dad, and Nomyt walked off towards Ely. Leaving Matt waiting for Nomyt, to come through the Forest.

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Info on the Spight and Droguin will be tomorrow. Since it's 10pm, and me need sleep :ph43r: :blink:

Please bring in the next chapter soon, I'm starting to get hooked on this story. *Nomy rules, Nomy rules, Nomy rules* whelp starts chatting.

Nice... Very nice is all that I can say

Ely, The City of First Adventures.
part one

The three of them sat around in the Pokemon Centres dining outlet.

Monty was waiting for the centre to revive his pokemon Sprub. Monty’s Dad, Bill had Elgae out of it’s pokeball, and was feeding it meat, Nomyt sat opposite Monty and Bill.

“Nomyt, why didn’t you take on Matthew?” Asked Monty.
“Because he was assumed that I was going to be your age, anybody could became a pokemon trainer at any age.” Came Nomyts reply.

A Nurse came to the Table with a pokeball in her hand. Elgae watched her carefully.

“Monty Bullman,” Smiled the Nurse, “Here is your pokemon.”

She gave the pokeball to Monty.

“Thank you,” Monty commented as he took the pokeball back.
“Are you guys new to this town?” She asked.

Monty nodded.

“I’ve been here before with my elder son. Does Brian still lead the Gym here?” asked Bill.
“No his son Franics does, although the gym is closed for the night.” The Nurse answered.

The Nurse walked off, Nomyt got up.

“I’m just off for a wonder.” Commented Nomyt.
“Dad, what Pokemon does this gym use?” Questioned Monty to his Father.
“If it’s the same as his father Rock types, Brian’s rock types came from different lands too.”
“Different lands…” Monty repeated.
“Yeah, Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, places like that.” Explained his father.

Monty sat and looked out the window, His father fed the Elgae, some more food.

“You know you can go look around town,” Commented Bill, “You are old enough to look after yourself.”
“I know, I’ll see you in a bit.”

And saying that Monty got up and walked outside, he thought that the City looked bigger than what it actually did. He had never been more than a few yards from his own town. To him, Monty felt like a needle in a haystack.
He soon found his way to the Pokemon Gym. He read the sign out loud.

“Ely City Gym. Time to Rock and Roll, with Gym Leader Francis Rocky.”

An old, female voice came from behind him.

“He father was always the better, if you ask me dearie.”

Monty jumped when she first spoke, he turned to meet and old lady, she had a cane in one hand. He wore a long skirt, and purple cardigan. She came forwards and looked at the gym.

“Every year, I use to take on Brian, about this time. I use to be a good trainer in my time. A very good trainer indeed, but Brian use to take me down, brilliant leader he was.”
“I take it Francis, isn’t up to your standard.” Questioned Monty.
“Not really, no dear.” She replied, “It’s not that he’s not good, he just doesn’t have the same special thing that Brian had. Five in the Morning Brian use to be up at. Five in the Morning, he’d jog to Victory road at the top of Victory Mountain, and back. He have Breakfast, then come here, and be dominant. All at Five in the Morning.”
“Francis doesn’t.”
“Not really, gets up, comes here, trains here, goes home. Not at Five in the Morning. Anyway dearie, I’m off.”
And she started shuffling off. Monty looked back at the gym. The Gym took up a lot of space; the sized of it could easy take up two football pitches. Suddenly a noise distracted Monty.

“Hey out the way, Grandma.”

Two kids on some bikes rushed past the old lady towards Monty, nearly knocking the old woman over.

“Hey stop, and see if the old lady is alright. You hooligans!” Monty shouted at them as they went past him.

Monty ran to the woman.

“Are you alright?” He asked her.

As she said yes, the two kids cycled back. They braked sharp sending some dirt flying over Monty, and the Old Woman. One was a girl and the other was a boy.

“Hey kid, what did you say to us?” Inquired the Girl.
“You nearly knocked the lady over, you should have stopped and seen if she was alright first.” Replied Monty.
“Nobody tells us what to do.” Snapped the Boy.
“We see that you have a pokeball.” Commented the Girl.
“Two on one battle now.” Demanded the Boy.

Monty looked at the two as they sat on their bikes. A two on one battle, heaven help him. He had already lost his first one on one battle.

“How about it, kid?” Asked the girl.

Before he could open his mouth, a voice from behind he said.

“Monty looks like you’re in a spot of bother.”

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Very interesting Nomytaker, but 1 little word of advice (and this is not bashing, but giving helpful advice)... Work a little bit on your grammar for instance: Monty sat and looked out the window, His father fed the Elgae, some more food.

This should actually be: Monty sat and looked out the window, His father fed the Elgae some more food.

But never the less, not a bad part of this fic

Part Two.

Monty turned around to see a familiar Coat, Hat, and Person.

“Nomyt!” Monty gasped, “How long have you been there for?”
“Since the “Five Years” bit on Brian.” Nomyt replied, he turned to the two bikers, “Two on Two.”

The two kids looked at each other.

“Your on.” They said as they drew their pokeballs out.

Nomyt pulled his coat back and grabbed his pokeball; Monty rubbed the Acranine on his shoulder, and grabbed the Sprubs Pokeball.

“Go, Sprub!” Shouted Monty, as he threw the ball.
“Go, Rabber!” Ordered Nomyt, as he threw his pokeball.
“Go, Spight!” Ordered The Boy, as he threw one of the two pokeballs in his hands.
“Go, Catric!” Demanded the Girl, as she threw her pokeball.

Monty got the Pokedex out, as pointed first on Nomyt’s Rabber.
“Rabber, the Fire Rabbit Pokemon. This pokemon is rarely seen in the wild, it will run into its den at the slightest sound.”

So, Nomyt did choose the Fire starter, thought Monty. Then he pointed the Pokedex on Catric.
“Catric, The Electric Cat pokemon. It’s tail looks like a plug, this is so it can charge itself up, by wall sockets.”

“Spight, Poison Sting attack on the Sprub.” commanded the Boy.
“Catric, Fury Swipes on that Rabber.” Ordered the girl.
“Sprub! Jump over the Poison sting, and tackle it.” Monty demanded.
“Rabber, Evade the Fury Swipes.

The Spight shot a poison Sting towards Sprub, as it sailed through the air Monty’s Sprub ran towards it, and jumped over it. As the Sprub came down it tackled the Spight.

“Spigh…..t” It cried as it fell backwards.
“Sprub, tackle again.” Monty ordered.

“Tric. Tric. Cat. Tric.” The Catric went with every swipe, but each time, the Rabber. Dodged, Ducked, Jumped, out of the way.

The Sprub ran at the Spight, to tackle it.

“Spight, Sting Shot to safety.” Order the Boy.

However for his Spight, it was too late, Sprub landed another tackle on it. Spight didn’t get up.

“Gah, Spight is knocked out. Spight return!” Ordered the Boy to his Pokemon. He held the Pokeball aloft as the red beam came out, and sucked the Pokemon back to it home.

“Catric. Tric. Cat. Tric” The Catric stopped swiping, it was out of breath.
“Rabber, use Scratch Attack.” Commanded Nomyt.
“Rabber,” Replied as it nodded.

Rabber lifted its small paw up, and little claws came out. It swiped the Catric across the body. As it sat regaining it breathe.

“Catricccccc.” It squealed.
“Rabber, Scratch attack again.”

The Boy looked on, he placed both his Pokeballs in his pocket.
He turned to the Monty.

“I’ll spare you from my other Pokemon.” He said nastily.

Monty returned the Sprub to its Pokeball, and watched the Catric and the Rabber.

Rabber lifted it paw for another Scratch, just as its paw came down, the Catric rolled out the way.

“Catric, use Tail Whip.” Ordered the Girl.
Catric’s Plug like tail, spun around, and flew towards the Rabber.

“Jump Rabber” Commanded Nomyt, “Now.”

Rabber jumped over the Catric’s Tail. The tail flew around and hit the Catric in the face.

“Jumping Scratch attack, Rabber.” Nomyt commanded.

The Rabber jumped with its claw out, and slashed the Catric along the face. The Catric fell sideways.

“Catric has been defeated.” Commented Nomyt, “Game over.”

The Girl returned her Catric to the Pokeball.

“Come on, Sis.” Commented her Brother, “Let’s get out of here.”
“Are you not forgetting something?” Reminded Nomyt.

The Boy and the Girl looked at Nomyt in disgust, but Nomyt’s cold stare, reduce them to shivers. They turned to the Old Lady.

“We’re sorry.” They said to the Old Woman, then they cycled off quickly.

The Old Woman smiled, as she turned to Nomyt.

“Your good, haven’t I seen you somewhere before?” She asked him.
“Nope.” Nomyt replied quietly, he turned to Monty. “I’ll see you back at the Pokemon Centre, Monty.”

Nomyt walked off with the Rabber along side him.

“He reminds me so much of Brain.” Remarked the Old Lady to Monty.

Monty looked at the Gym once more, before he walked off.

Word of advice: Trim the size of your posts in this thread. It looks very close to Window Freeze. Break your story into more replies to keep it from happening.

I thought that was happening to you. I'll trim it down into two pages at a time (Each part of my story so far is made from three pages of Mircosoft Word.)

It hasn't yet but I check threads with multiple long posts just to be on the safe side.

Other then Bobby's neverending going off-topic post's talk, I must say that the latest Pokémon fanfic epi was very nice, although it gave me some question mark's... Oh well, I hope that it will get explained in future episodes and I wonder what will Nomyt's new Pokémon be

Time To Rock ‘N’ Roll
Part One

Monty finished speaking to his Mum on the Videophone, in the Pokemon Centre. He looked at his Dad, who was speaking to some bird trainer. He walked over to them.

“Elgae has Flying and Fighting types, which means he’s near enough invincible to most types.” Explained William, to the Bird Trainer.
“Seems you know what your doing. Shall I see you at Haddenham, Bill?” Asked the Man.
“Maybe?” William looked at Monty. “You ready to go?”

Monty nodded. He wasn’t quite sure, if he was or not. It was going to be his first Gym battle, he lost his first battle, and half won his second battle. How could he even count his Tag Battle as a real battle? Maybe the Gym wasn’t as hard as everyone had made it out to be? No, that would be stupid. Gym Leaders are hard trainers.

Monty shook his head.

“No, I’m going to do this!” He demanded himself.

Monty and his Dad walked outside. They saw Nomyt he beckoned them over.

“Monty, can I see you Sprub please?” Asked Nomyt.
“Uh… Sure” “ Monty replied as he release the Sprub from the Pokeball.

Nomyt knelt down at the Sprub, and spoke to it in a low voice, which Monty or his Dad couldn’t hear. Nomyt stood up, and nodded to Monty.

“You can go first at the Gym, I’ve got some stuff to do. If you ever go into trouble in the Gym, tell you Sprub to do what I said. O.K.” Commented Nomyt.
“O.K.” Replied Monty.

Monty and Bill walked to the Gym; the Old Lady was there from the Evening before.

“Oh, hello young man, the other one is not with you today?” She asked Monty.
“I think he might later on today.” Monty replied to her.
“Very well.” She replied, “You don’t mind if I come in and watch?”
“You very welcome too.” Replied Monty.

The Three walked into the Gym, there was a narrow corridor. The walls were stone grey; right at the opposite end were two big wooden double doors. On the left side were pictures on people and pokemon. Monty read some of the Caption under them.

“Brian Rocky II, Gym Leader from two years ago. Brian Rocky I, Gym Leader from fifteen years ago. Samuel Rocky, Gym Leader from thirty years ago.”

“All of them were Father and Son.” Commented the Old Lady.

One of the double doors open, and a man walked and leaned against one door. He wore a Grey Baseball cap, a striped Brown and Grey t-shirt, and Blue Jeans, and Black leather shoes. At the back of his Baseball cap a little ponytail could be seen.

“I’m Francis Rocky. Gym Leader of… Oh! Hi Auntie Marble” He smiled to the Old Lady.
“This young man has come to battle you.” She said as she pushed Monty forwards. “ And Hi Francis.”
“And what be your name?” Francis asked Monty.
“Monty Bullman, from Littleport. I wish to battle for a gym badge.”
“Come right in,” commented Francis, as he pushed the other door open.

Monty, his Father, and Marble walked in.

more, more, more. Please write more.

Meanwhile, Nomyt had gone back towards Littleport. Matthew was sitting by a tree.

“Still waiting for the other trainer, Matt?” commented Nomyt.
“Yes, I am. Your Monty’s Brother isn’t you?” Asked Matthew.
“On two accounts you have been wrong,” Explained Nomyt, “Account one, I’m not Monty’s brother. I’m Nomyt Taker, Ex-gym leader of Cambridge. Account two; I’m the other trainer that has acquired a pokemon from Professor Beach. You still wish to battle?”

Matthew looked at Nomyt dumbfounded. Matthew shook his head.

“How can you…”
“Never mind, how’s?” Nomyt interrupted, “Are you still willing to battle?”

Nomyt looked at Matthew coldly. Matthew nodded.

“Yes Nomyt, I’ll accept. Go Droguin.” Command Matthew.

Nomyt reach for his pokeball, and then stopped. He looked side on at the Droguin. He smiled slightly to himself.

“Go Rabber!” Nomyt order. He knelt down next to his pokemon, and whispered something to it. The Rabber nodded in replied to something he said.

“Go for it, Matthew.”
“Droguin, Bubble.” Matthew gave the order.

Little bubble spewed out of Droguin’s beak towards Rabber. Rabber rolled out the way, just in time.

“Droguin, we nearly had it.” Matthew said excitedly, “Bubble again.”

Once more Droguin used bubble on Rabber, who just evaded the attack.
“Ugh, Droguin bubble again.”

Again the Droguin bubbled at Rabber. The attack missed by seconds.

“O.K.” Nomyt commanded the Rabber, “Now tackle attack.”

The Rabber sprang forward more quickly the Matthew or his Droguin had thought. A full tackle attack had landed on Droguin.

“Droooooooo!” Screamed Droguin.

The Droguin fainted, Matthew tried calling it to its feet, but it was no use.

“You haven’t even took him to a pokemon centre have you? Even though it has been nearly twelve hours since Monty’s Battle with it. You haven’t even given him proper treatment. He was breathing heavily, before he had attacked. He wasn’t even moving quick enough. The Bubble attack wasn’t even at full scale. You need to buck up you ideas.”

Matthew fell onto the ground, next to the Droguin. Nomyt looked down upon him. Nomyt felt bad about if he walked away from him.

“Come on, let’s get you to a pokemon centre.” Nomyt commented.

Matthew didn’t move, and he started to cry.

“Oh great,” Nomyt said to himself, “Water works.”

Back at Ely’s Gym. Monty looked at the layout of the gym, huge boulders dotted about on the match field. As Francis walked to his side of the field, Bill turned to his son.

“Monty I’m letting you borrow Elgae, for this match, use him only as a last resort.”
“Thanks dad, but I’m going to use Sprub all the way.” Replied Monty.

Francis stood across from Monty. Francis grabbed to pokeballs from his pocket, and placed them on the floor.

“This Match will be a two pokemon contest.” Francis called out.

Monty nodded, and rubbed the Arcanine on his jacket
“Ready to Rock and Roll.” Monty called to Francis.

“Go Sprub,” Demanded Monty.
“Go Easand!” Commanded Rocky.

Easand towered over the small Sprub. It’s huge body and face, made completely from rocks. Small little toes pointed out from the bottom of its body. The slits in its eyes looked down on the Sprub.

“Huh! Easand”, inquired Monty as he aimed the pokedex on it.
“Easand the statue pokemon. In the wild they hardly move, plants have been known to live of the pokemon.” Commented the Dex

“Easand body slam!” Ordered Rocky.
The Rocky Statue fell towards the Sprub, but the Sprub rolled out the way. As Easand landed and the shockwave that it caused knocked over everyone.

“Sprub get up and tackle it.” Monty asked from the floor.

The Sprub sprang to its feet.

“Sprub” It screamed as it charged at the fallen Easand. It landed a hit on the rock statue, but bounced off straight away. As Sprub Staggered away. Easand got itself up, and went to body slam Sprub again. Every time it went to fall on Sprub, Sprub staggered out the way.

Rocky sighed, “This is going nowhere fast.”

Are you going to finish this?

Yeah, give me a chance.