Thats better,I think since the new pokemon series arent here yet

Hey it's not a copy. Sure the prologue looks like it will, but did you see Cerebii destroying the Lab. No! So far your the only that's said it was a copy. Anyways for those who do care here's the first chap.

Chapter 1-A close encounter

“Look we made it to Lilicove,” said Brock “Finally, I thought we’d never make it,” said May. As they continue through the town they see a familiar face. “Hey Brendan!” said May. “Oh hey guys,” said Brendan, “Where’s your brother May?”

“Oh he’s helping our Dad with the doors at the Gym.”

“Well I’ll see you later, I’m challenging the new gym.”

“Cool, can we come?” asked Ash.

“Sure.” They all head’s toward the gym and Brendan goes in, but the guards blocked off everyone else.

“Sorry,” said the Guards, “Only one trainer at a time.”

“All right. Brendan we’ll see you after the match,” yelled ash.

“OK!” said Brendan. He continues to the trainer box. “I’m Brendan of Littleroot Town. I challenge the Gym leader to a battle for the Nature Badge!”

“I accept,” said the Gym leader standing in shadows, “We’ll have a 3 on 3 match.”

“Fine with me.”

“This is an official 3 on 3 Gym Battle,” said the guards, “No time limit, let the battle begin.”

“Alright,” said the Gym Leader, “My first pokemon shall be Mightyena.”

“Then I choose,” said Brendan, “Swampert!”

“Tackle attack.”

“Use your Hydro Pump!” before the Mightyena could attack; Swampert’s Hydro Pump knocked it out.

“Mightyena Return, go Golbat! Use your wing attack” Golbat’s wings glowed and hit Swampert.

“Go Swampert use your Surf.” Swampert raised a mighty wave that knocked out Golbat.”

“Golbat return. You have done well,” he walks into the light revealing his face. It was Flarny! “but this time I’ll use my most powerful pokemon, and you may use as many pokemon out at a time.”

“Really, Well you asked for. Come out everybody.” He threw out the rest of his Pokeballs revealing an Aggron, a Gardevoir, a Gyrados, a Pelliper, and a Torkoal.”

“Go Pokeball.” Out of the Pokeball came Cerebii.

“What is that.” He points his Pokedex at Cerebii.

“Unknown pokemon, no Data,” said Dex.

“No data!” said Brendan

“Go!” said Flarny. Cerebii’s eyes started glowing and vines held down all the pokemon.

“No!”

“Now Solarbeam.” A powerful Solarbeam blasts all of Brendan’s pokemon knocking them out.

To be continued…

This is my first pokemon Fanfic. Enjoy.

Cerebii
Prologue-The birth of Cerebii

Deep in the Ilex forest a group of scientists are on an expedition to a temple recently found on satellite. They finally reach their destination and enter and see an altar in the middle of the room with a carving of Celebi in the background. They walk up to the altar and see a Celebi wing.

*****

Later in a laboratory we see the wing on a monitor, plus test tubes everywhere. Then we see the scientist from the forest watching a pokemon in one of the tubes. The pokemon resembles a Celebi only bigger and more humanoid, plus its wings are angle like and yellow. “What a wonderful specimen,” said a shady figure, “Prepare to let it out, there’s a lot more brain activity meaning it’s waking-up”. Then the pokemon’s eyes open suddenly. “Let him out!” said the figure.

The liquid in the tube drains, then the wires connected to the pokemon let go, and the tube opens.

“What’s going on,” said the pokemon in psychic form.

“Hello,” said the figure while he steps into the light revealing his green suit and hat that has a big yellow F on it, “My name is Flarny and yours is Cerebii.”

“Cerebii?”

“Yes. You have just been cloned from the pokemon Celebi, a time traveling fairy.”

“A clone.”

“A super clone actually. Like Mewtwo.”

“Mewtwo?”

“Team Rocket cloned him from a Mew, but you are probably more powerful than him. Now if you’ll follow me…”

seriously if you are just rewriting the first Pokemon movie im going to close this. in fact this could be considered plagiarism.

why?,it's just an follow-up in anothr movie

are you friggin serious? you dont see that its exactly like the first Pokemon movie with Mewtwo changed to Celebi?

he didnt have to blow up the lab to show that it is plagiarism. and i cant believe you have the nerve to continue your story with yet another copy, this time from the episode "Battle of the Badge". if you dont start getting more original im going to have to close this thread.

now I agree with you,bunnygirl,maybe its better if you close the thread.....

Iv never seen the movie, or any pokemon episodes to be exact :lol: , so it’s all new stuff to me lol.

that doesnt change the fact that it was copied from the movie..

how dare you tell him how to write. if it's a fan fiction chances are it's going to be close to the original. just because he's writing a story with a similar plot to the movie, it does not make it plagiarism. plagiarism is copying something directly from a source and calling it your own.

excuse me miss, but only being around 12-years-old and not knowing anything about copyright issues (which was evident a while ago) you dont have any right to butt in.
if this was some sort of parody, where Mew10 was making fun of the movie or something, that would be fine. or if he was making a completely different version, that would be fine also. but this is basically just writing the movie with 'Mewtwo' replaced with 'Celebi'.
so, im going to close this, i was going to give Mew10 another chance as you can see in one of my above posts, but of course you have to come around and get me in a bad mood.

**edit** im going to give Mew10 another chance.

I don't know who you think you are but I'm certainly not 12 years old. If you'd like to think that, far be it for me to stop you. but the joke would be on you.

well you sure dont act any older...*cough*...

anyway ill put the pressure on you, LadySuicune. Mew10, im indeed giving you another chance, i mean i re-opened the thread to let you continue your story. however, LadySuicune used this oppurtunity to argue (not surprising actually). if LS makes one more comment im closing this again. so dont blame it on me, Mew10.

Alright here's the next chap. and LadySuicune, not to be rude but if you have any other comments to Bunnygirl, tell her in a pm.

Chapter 2-The Hospital

Ash and co. are still waiting for Brendan to finish when the gym doors open. “Help…Pokemon…stronger… than…the rest.” said Brendan as he falls to the ground.

*****

When Brendan woke up he was in a hospital room. “Brendan,” said a voice that was very familiar to Brendan. “Mom?” said Brendan. “He’s awake,” she yelled into the hallway. “Hey man,” said Ash when he, and May walked in, “feeling better.”

“A little,” said Brendan, “What happened?”

“We were hopping you could tell us, the leader of the gym ran off. Officer Jenny and the Pokemon League president decided to close down the Lilicove gym. Meaning I can’t when that badge!”

“It doesn’t matter. You couldn’t win. He had a really strong Pokemon that no ones seen before.”

“Why dose that sound so familiar?”

“What about my Pokemon.”

“Brock took them to the Pokemon center,” said May, “I should make sure he’s not bothering Nurse Joy. See ya.”

As she left Brendan told them what happened.

*****

Later they were walking down to the Pokemon center, after Brendan got better, to pick up his Pokemon. Then a mechanical arm grabbed Pikachu. “Ah hahahaha.” Laughed some familiar voices. “Great its them,” said Ash.

“Prepare for trouble,” said Jessie.

“And make it double,” said James.

“To protect the world from devastation.”

“To unite all peoples within our nation.”

“To denounce the evils of truth and love.”

“To extend our reach to the stars above.”

“Jessie.”

“James.”

“Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light.”

“Surrender now or prepare to fight.”

“Meowth that’s right,” said Meowth.

“What do want now?” said Ash.

“We want Pikachu of course.”

“Fine I choose Grovyle.”

“Go Dustox,” said Jessie, “use you confusion.”

“Grovyle Leaf Blade.”

Before any of the Pokemon could attack a net fell on Grovyle. “Huh. What’s going on?” asked Ash. Then two figures where green suits and hats that had yellow Fs on them and a Poochyena jump out.
To be continued...

Yeah I figured to put it in Hoenn since They're about to go to the Johto League Silver Conference. By the way yesterday I made a picture of Cerebii on my Computer. You can see it in my Avatar. And finnally here's the next chap.

Chapter 3-Team Flora

“Who are you!” yelled Ash.

“Prepare for trouble,” said the girl.

“And make it double,” said the boy.

“What did ya’ll say!” yelled Jessie and James at the same time.

“To protect the forests from deforestation,” said the girl.

“To unite the trees within are nation,” said the boy.

“To protect the plants from fire and darkness.”

”To extend our reach across the world.”

”Laura.”

”Ryan.”

”Team Flora, growing at the speed of light!”

”Surrender now, or you’ll lose the fight!”

"Pooooch,” said the Poochyena.

“What do you want?” asked Ash.

“We are Team Flora. We’re dedicated to expanding the forests,” said Ryan.

“You mean like Team Magma expanding the land, and Team Aqua expanding the sea?” asked May.

“Don’t insult us. They aren’t as evil as our organization,” said Laura.

“Insult you,” said Jessie, “You stole our motto.”

“We did not!”

“Did to!”

As they continued to fight Ash was able to free Pikachu and Grovyle. “Now Pikachu,” yelled Ash, “Give them a Thunderbolt!” Pikachu fired a bolt of Electricity at Team Rocket and they shot off in the sky.

“Team Rocket’s blasting off again,” yelled Team Rocket.

“Well,” said Laura, “Now that they’re gone we’ll be taking your Grovyle.”

“I don’t think so.” Said Ash, “Pikachu Thundershock, Grovyle Leaf Blade.” Pikachu sent a powerful Thunderbolt and Grovyle sent out sharp leaves at Team Flora causing an explosion sending Team Flora to the sky.

“Looks like Team Flora’s dieing off!” yelled Laura and Ryan.

“Pooooch!” howled the Poochyena.

To be continued…

I think this one's orginal

PS:nice avater

Thanks. Here's the next chap.

Chapter 4-The GS Ball opens

In the Ilex Forest by the shrine Kurt is studying the GS Ball trying to figure out what it’s for. ‘I just can’t figure it out.’ He decides to take a rest and sat the GS Ball on the shrine, and sat down. Then the GS Ball started to glow and the shrine also started to glow startling Kurt as he watched the glowing stop and the GS Ball opened revealing a green fairy that quickly flew away.

*****

At the Pokemon Center after they got Brendan’s Pokemon and pulled Brock away from Nurse Joy when their attention is turned to a poster.

“Hmmm,” said Brock, “looks like the Battle Tower’s open, and the next ferry leaves in one hour.”

“Awesome,” yelled Ash, “We should go…” he is interrupted by a pone call. Ash picks it up and Pro. Oak appears on the screen. “Hey Pro. Oak.”

“Hello Ash,” said Oak, “listen Kurt just called, the GS Ball opened,”

“You mean the one we got from Pro. Ivy.”

“Uh Ash,” said May pointing to Brock who is crouched mumbling.

“That Name!” mumbled Brock.

“Whoops,” said Ash.

“Anyways he saw a green fairy like Pokemon come out,” said Oak.

“Thanks Pro. Oak. We got a go. We have to catch a boat to the Battle Tower.”

“Well then good luck.”

*****

Now they are in line to buy tickets for the S.S. Tidal to the Battle Tower. “So Ash,” said May, “why was Brock acting like that.”

“Well,” said Ash, “Every time someone says that Professor’s name he gets depressed and won’t tell us what happened.” They finally get their tickets and get ready to get aboard when they see a familiar face.

Cool,But could you make up why Brock crumbels in a corner with a dark blue aura too?

Sorry I took so long to post this. I got grounded. Plus I'm back in school. :( <_<

Chapter 5-S.S. Tidal Part I of III

“Wally!” said May.

“Hey guys,” said Wally, “you going to the Battle Tower too.”

“Yeah.”

Then a lady on the Intercom comes on, “Attention, Passengers heading to the Battle Tower, Please get on board now.”

“Well we better go,” said Brock.

*****

Now on the boat we see Team Rocket walking around when James sees Ryan. He decides to follow him. Then Ryan walks by a booth with a guy trying to sell Febass. “Hey boy,” said the guy, “Hey you boy come here.”

“Huh,” said Ryan, “You talking to me.”

“I want you to check out this Pokemon.” He hands him a Febass.

“What do I do with this, eat it.”

“Just between you and me this Pokemon is a goldmine. Every Febass lays 100 eggs. Each one of those lays a hundred more. Pretty soon you’ll have a billion Febass.”

“A billion!”

“I normally charge $400, but for you I’ll include an Egg laying set, and a Pokeball for $300. How ‘bout that.”

“I’ll take it.”

“Humph,” whispered James, “sucker.” After Ryan walks away James heads towards the booth. “Hey do I know you.”

“No.” said the Febass seller.

“Then do you know a Madgicarp seller in the Kanto Region? Cause he swindled me on the S.S. Anne before it went down.”

“Uh, I got to go!” He quickly packs up and runs away.

*****

At the Team Flora’s secret laboratory, Flarny watches a screen that shows video of what is going on at the S.S. Tidal.

keep typing i want to know whatll happen next :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

the smiles are my rating. your story is real good

Its really good! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Thats my rating!

WILL YOU PEOPLE PLEASE STOP FLAMING EACH OTHER! WHO CARES HOW OLD YOU ARE YOU CAN STILL KNOW ABOUT THE LAW AND IF WE WERE USING COPYRIGHT LAWS THE WE COULDNT EVEN USE THE WORD POKEMON! I think iv made myself clear! And i like the story so please continue...

Man, 'bout time someone posted. I posted that chapter weeks ago.

Chapter 6-S.S. Tidal Part II of III

On the boat trainers were having practice battles and Ash was finishing up his. He was battling a 2 on 2 battle against a Plusle and Minum with his Pikachu and Grovyle. “Pikachu Thunder, Grovyle Solarbeam!” Pikachu sends a bolt of lightning and Grovyle sends a powerful Solarbeam at the two electric rodents, which ended the battle.

“Wow,” said Wally, “You got much stronger since I last saw you.”

“Thanks.”

Behind them in a corner Ryan is talking to Laura. “You idiot return that now!” yelled Laura.

“OK,” said Ryan.

*****

Meanwhile back at the Team Flora Secret Laboratory. Flarny turns to Cerebii. “Begin,” he said. Cerebii raised his hand and it starts glowing…

*****

The curtains and the doors close on the S.S. Tidal. “Ash the Ship’s going off course,” said May.

Over at the booths Ryan is walking around. “Hey,” he said, “Mandré I want…my money back.”

Suddenly Laura pulled him away and yelled, “Are you crazy!”

“But I.”

“We got work to do!” all the Tem Flora members take of their fake waiter uniforms and Laura, Ryan, and their Poochyena.

“Prepare for trouble.”

“And make it double.”

“To protect the forests from deforestation.”

“To unite the trees within are nation.”

“To protect the plants from fire and darkness.”

“To extend our reach across the world.”

“Laura.”

“Ryan.”

“Team Flora, growing at the speed of light!”

“Surrender now, or you’ll lose the fight!”

“Poooch!”

“Team Flora!” said Ash

“Pi, Pi, Kachu,” said Pikachu.

“We have taken over the ship,” said Laura, “and we’re heading towards a new destination.”

To be continued…

this is old i guess im the archeoligist here digging up stuff forgotten

Thanks for bringing it back. Actually I just came back. My computer crashed a couple of weeks ago and even stoped writing the fic, but now my computer works again and I'm back.

Chapter 7-S.S. Tidal Part III of III

“We are heading to Mirage Island,” said Laura, “were you’ll battle the most powerful Pokemon in the world.”

‘It’s probably the Pokemon I fought at the Lilicove Gym,’ thought Brandon.

“You won’t get away with this,” said Ash, “Go Pikachu, use Thunderbolt!”

“Pikachuuuuuu!” said Pikachu as it attacked with thunderbolt at Team Flora, which convinced everyone else to send out his or her Pokemon to stop Team Flora. Everywhere Pokemon were sending out attacks.

Over in the corner Team Rocket watches. “Now!” yelled Jessie as the other Team Rocket members tear off their disguises.

“What’s going on,” said a trainer.

“Prepare for more trouble,” said Jessie.

“And make it double,” said James.

“To protect the world from devastation.”

“To unite all peoples within our nation.”

“To denounce the evils of truth and love.”

“To extend our reach to the stars above.”

“Jessie.”

“James.”

“Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light.”

“Surrender now or prepare to fight.”

“Meowth that’s right,” said Meowth.

“Oh boy,” muttered Wally, “Go Gardevoir use Psychic!” his Gardevoir came out and gave Team Rocket a Psychic attack, and this continued throught the boat till the captain came on the intercom.

“Hello,” said the captain, “we seem to have sprung a leak and we’re sinking. Plus there is no lifeboats, so every man for himself…” That caused a lot of panic as everyone got their water Pokemon out and surfed back to shore.

Brendan and Brock sent out their Swamperts and Brock and Ash got on Brock’s while May, Brendan, and Wally got on Brendan’s. Behind them the S.S. Tidal sank to the bottom of the see.

To be continued…

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