I'll post the beginning of it here, and I want to know what you think, and if you would want to read the rest!
Heres the beginning of it:
Lumina, and Umbra were both standing next to eachother in front of a lake, surrounded by beautiful lively tree's. The sun shining down apon them, they were interrupted. A man walked up to them, "What do you want Hellith?" Lumina asked.
"Why is it Lumina every time you see me it's straight away you think i'm up to my usual evil?" Hellith replied, very so quickly, he smirked slightly.
"Because every time we see you, you are up to your usual evil!" Umbra started to talk in with the conversation.
The smirk whiped off of Hellith's face,"Well I am here to help you out, you see. When you, and Lumina are together a very bad Aura forms in the Universe- "Why should we trust you?" Umbra rudely cut in.
"Ahh, for you see if this Aura destroyed the universe there is nothing for me to take over!" Hellith answered Umbra's rude question.
"How do we stop this Aura from forming?" Lumina continued her questioning.
"You both need to get as far away from eachother as possible, I suggest you go to opposite sides of the universe, and never see eachother again for obvious reasons." Hellith replied so quickly he was hanging on just a last bit of breath.
Yes it is true that when Lumina, and Umbra were together it cause an Aura to form in the universe. But now Hellith had convinced them enough to seperate the Aura was forming even faster..
For starters, you can put this in the right forum.
Moving.
Who the hell....? I'd best not ask.
