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2legendary4u - October 25, 2003 04:07 PM (GMT)
this is a story of how a young girl named Katie goes on a pokemon journey quite early because of how her parents treat her. Note: not meant to be funny at all. plus you will find out how she is to be the wife of the Chosen One(take one guess). i was going to use my real name, but i thought better not. but i am the narrator, so i will. ok, story starts in 5,4,3,2,1!
Chapter 1: How it all Begins
Katie: please no! don't hurt me!
Adam: come here you little brat! I SAID COME HERE!!!
Katie: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Joanna: Adam, STOP! leave her alone!!!!
Adam: stay out of this Joanna!! *wham*
Katie: MOOOOOOM!!!!
*Katie gets up and runs out of the house*
Adam: FINE!!! WE DON'T WANT YOU ANYWAY!!!!!!
Katie: *shouts back* YOU MEAN YOU DON'T WANT ME!!!
*Katie runs down a cold dark alley while it's rainy quite heavily*
Katie: *whispers* nobody wants me... *starts crying softly, then falls asleep*

[The next morning]
Ash: morning mom!
Delia: good morning honey! did you get a good nights sleep?
Ash: yeah, but i woke up in the middle of the night and heard screaming and yelling coming from down the street.
Delia: i heard it too. i'm not sure what was going on...
Ash: anyway, i'm going to take a walk after breakfast if that is ok with you?
Delia: sure! fine with me.
*Now Ash in this story is quite smart and mature unlike in the Anime*
Ash: *eats his breakfast* thanks mom, that was delicous!
Delia: you're quite welcome!
Ash: in 2 years i can finally start my pokemon journey!
Delia: *thinks* oh they grow up so fast!
Ash: bye mom!
Delia: be careful!
Ash: i will!

[Meanwhile]
Katie: wha? where am i? oh i remember now. i ran away from home... now what am i going to do? *gets up* the first thing i should do is find some breakfast *stomache growls*
*starts to go around the corner and...*
Ash/Katie: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Next chapter: First Meeting




2legendary4u - October 25, 2003 04:20 PM (GMT)
well, what do you think? good, bad, what?

Disaster Absol - October 25, 2003 05:25 PM (GMT)
hey, nice! Continue! I like it :D

2legendary4u - October 25, 2003 05:47 PM (GMT)
thank you! i had something else in mind for this, but it turned out to bethis. i will continue this 2night if i have time.

rayquaza_gurl - October 25, 2003 07:56 PM (GMT)
It looks good so far :D could you explain all the characters, though? And is this also based off the part of the team outrage rpg where you're the chosen one?

2legendary4u - October 25, 2003 09:43 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
It looks good so far :D  could you explain all the characters, though? And is this also based off the part of the team outrage rpg where you're the chosen one?
Katie is a girl who is being abused by her father. she runs away in search of a new life, when she bumps into to Ash(who is smart and mature in my story). they hit it off real fast(you will see what i mean). Adam, her father is part of Team Rocket. he absolutly HATES Katie! he kills her mother when she tries to stop him from torturing Katie. and the rest of the story is romance and horror. quite scary if you ask me. you'll see what Katie's father will do, and you won't like it. this story has a sad ending, so prepare to cry.

2legendary4u - October 25, 2003 09:44 PM (GMT)
acually i'm the Chosen One in the RPG, Ash is the Chosen One in the second movie. so he is the Chosen One.

2legendary4u - October 25, 2003 11:05 PM (GMT)
ok, here is chapter 2

Chapter 2: First Meeting
*Katie gets into a defence stance*
Katie: stay away! i mean it!!
Ash: i'm not going to hurt you, i was just going for a walk is all. and i accidentley bumped into you.
Katie: *eases up* whew, i thought you were going to pound me into the ground or something! hehe... silly me... *stomache growls and then she blushes* guess i'm kinds hungry, i haven't ate since yesterday morning!
Ash: well i can't let you starve, why don't you come over to my house and get cleaned up and then we can go out and grab a bite to eat. ok with you?
Katie: yeah! let's go! *grabs and literaly drags Ash back to his house*

[Team Rocket's Hideout]
Giovonni: i want you to bring me the Chosen One and his future wife Adam!
Adam: who is the Chosen One sir?
Giovonni: here is a picture of him. *shows Adam the picture*
Adam: that's that kid who lives down the street from me. he should be easy to get!
Giovonni: don't be so sure. his future wife is said to be able to transform into a silver wolf with wings. she can control anything she pleases to.
Adam:*gulp* i guess i better watch out for her huh? but how will i tell it is her?
Giovonni: she has long thick brown blondish hair and goes by the name of... Katie.

[At Ash's House]
Ash: hi mom!
Delia: oh back so soon? who is that?
Ash: her name is Katie. do you mind if she cleans up here? we are going out to get some lunch.
Katie: i havn't eaten anything since yesterday morning and i'm STARVED! so can i?
Delia: well sure! i don't mind one bit!
Ash: thanks mom!
Katie: she is really nice.
Ash: yeah she is, but she makes you do too many chores at once!
Delia: i heard that!
Ash: RUN!!! hahahaha!!

[On the street]
Adam: Katie, i shouldv'e known! i knew i shouldv'e gotten rid of her the day she was born! i will just have to come up with a plan to kill her and that Chosen One! why did i ever marry anyway!? wives, kids, who needs 'em! not me!


Next chapter: Big Suprise! Happy Birthday um, Ash and Katie?

2legendary4u - October 26, 2003 06:49 PM (GMT)
well since no one replied, i'll just go on:

Chapter 3: Big Suprise! Happy Birthday un, Ash and Katie?
Katie: that was a great lunch Ash! thank you for taking me here!
Ash: *blushes* aw, it was nothing really!
Katie: *kisses him on the cheek as a thank you*
Ash: *melts into the floor* duh..duh...duh you're welcome...
*switch to outside*
Adam: ah ha! they're together! perfect! *takes out a rifle* 3, 2, 1 *click* huh? aw da***t!!!! i forgot to reload it! $hit!
*switch to inside*
Ash: well let's pay and go home!
Katie: alright *pays* race you home!
Ash: you're on!

[At the Ketchum Residence]
Delia: here they come. 3, 2, 1.
*door opens*
All: Suprise! happy birthday Ash!
Ash: ah! thanks! this so awsome! huh? what's the matter Katie?
Katie: *looks down at the floor* today's my birthday too...
Delia: i'm so sorry dea-
Katie: i don't need material items Mrs. Ketchum, all i ever wanted for my birthday was love.
*all hug her. Ash got to her first. Katie hugs back*
Katie: thanks you guys, this really makes me happy!
*switch to outside*
Adam: ugh! this makes me sick! one day or another, Ash and Katie are going to fall in love! i think they are already! bleah! i got to get rid of them! stupid rifle! *throws it*

Next chapter: Early Journey, First Pokemon.

2legendary4u - October 26, 2003 07:04 PM (GMT)
is anybody going to read and reply? i like this story. one of my best is you ask me. it will get into the horror parts later on. real scary!

nomekrhi - October 26, 2003 09:12 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (2legendary4u @ Oct 26 2003, 02:04 PM)
is anybody going to read and reply? i like this story. one of my best is you ask me. it will get into the horror parts later on. real scary!

can we read and not reply? :huh:

rayquaza_gurl - October 26, 2003 10:28 PM (GMT)
heh, this is good =)

2legendary4u - October 26, 2003 10:35 PM (GMT)
thanx! Adam may be evil, but he is funny!
here is a little preview of a later chapter:
Katie: wha? what in the world is that?!
Adam: now i have you in my cluches you little *beep*!!!
Katie: ahhhh! let go of me you big metal monster of a dad!!!
Adam: why should i when i am going to have fun squeezing you!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Katie: HEL- *mouth gets covered*
Adam: ah ah ah! i don't think so! HAHAHAHA!!!!
*streams of tears roll down Katie's face*

[Meanwhile]
Ash: where is Katie? mom, have you seen Katie today?
Delia: no dear i haven't, sorry...
Ash: i better go look for her then...

Disaster Absol - October 28, 2003 04:09 PM (GMT)
Continue continue! I wanna see more! Just one question, why is Ash in every fanfic?

nomekrhi - October 28, 2003 10:07 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Disaster Absol @ Oct 28 2003, 11:09 AM)
Continue continue! I wanna see more! Just one question, why is Ash in every fanfic?

that is explained in Chapter 33: Where This Went of The Adventures of Nomekrhi Aurora. besides, Ash is fun to pick on. :lol:

2legendary4u - October 28, 2003 10:19 PM (GMT)
i like Ash! :P

Early Journey, First Pokemon
*That night*
Katie: ugh....*looks out the window and sees her dad staring at her* *gasp* i got to get out of here! *starts packing* goodbye Ash... i hope to see you again... *kisses him on the cheek, then a single tear drops down on his forehead*
Ash: *mumbles* that's fine... just be back before sun-up....
Katie: *sighs* better write a note *scribbles something on a piece of paper and slides it under Ash's hand* *whispers* goodbye...

[That Morning]
Ash: *wakes up and reads note* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Delia comes bursting in*
Delia: what's wrong!? *she looks at her tear stricken son*
Ash: *sobbing* read this note!
Delia: *gasps* i wonder why she left? *hugs Ash* don't worry baby, it'll be alright. shhhh shhhh!

[Out in Viridian Forest]
Katie: I left and i don't know where i'm going... *sighs* but i better catch a pokemon to protect me. and i can train and raise it aswell. *searches around, and finally comes apon a Treeko laying against a tree sleeping* *thinks* while it's sleeping, i can capture it!* *throws a pokeball which she bought while in Viridian City*
*wiggle, wiggle, wiggle, wiggle, ding!*
Katie: YES!!!! i caught a pokemon! and one that i wanted too!

[In the Bushes By Katie]
Adam: ah! so she caught a pokemon did she? well i will finally have a challenge!


Next chapter: Another City, Another Pokemon Captured!

2legendary4u - October 30, 2003 11:21 PM (GMT)
i want to continue this! i need one reply to continue!

nomekrhi - October 30, 2003 11:25 PM (GMT)
you need someone to reply to continue? i've had 2 chapters of no replies and i continued anyway.

2legendary4u - October 30, 2003 11:44 PM (GMT)
well i did continue... i was tired of having no replies so i stopped and asked. now i can continue thanks to you! :D

Another City, Another Pokemon Captured!

Katie: Hey look Woody (she named Treeko Woody like I did in the game! :D ), it's Pewter City!
Woody: Alright! Now I can fight some Rock Pokemon!
*Suddenly a Totodile comes out of nowhere*
Totodile: I want a fight! A fight! A fight! A fight!!!
Katie: <_< Woody, Bullet Seed!
Woody: Right! He is getting on my nerves! *Pow, pow, pow*
Totodile: :wacko: *faints*
Katie: I'm going to regret this but, POKEBALL, GO!
*wiggle, wiggle, wiggle, wiggle, wiggle, ding!*
Katie: Come on, let's get to the Pokemon Center before all the rooms are gone!
Woody: I'm right behind Katie! *salutes*
Katie: You don't have to do that you know... <_<
Woody: B) Sorry, couldn't help it! :lol:
Katie: Ugh... why do I bother!?
*Start running to Pewter City*

[Ketchum Residence]
Delia: Where do you think you're going young man!?
Ash: To find Katie! I miss her! and nothing is going to stop me! *Runs out door*
Delia: ASH SATOSHI KETCHUM GET BACK HERE THIS INSTANT!!!!!!
*It was too late because Ash was gone in a flash (heh, that rhymed)*
Ash: *Thinks* I'm coming Katie, don't worry!

[In Viridian Forest]
Adam: I HATE this forest! I can never find my way out of here! Katie is probably in Pewter already! DA***T!!!!!

Anime Lover - November 1, 2003 12:56 PM (GMT)
cool :lol:

2legendary4u - November 2, 2003 01:05 AM (GMT)
i'm outta ideas for the next chapter <_< i will update the next chapter later...

Disaster Absol - November 2, 2003 10:29 AM (GMT)
Fight, fight! I want some action!

2legendary4u - November 2, 2003 04:43 PM (GMT)
i'm gettin' to it! hold your horses! the next 2 chapters have fighting in them. some dramatic fights too!

2legendary4u - November 4, 2003 11:52 PM (GMT)
ugh! damn writer's block!

Disaster Absol - November 5, 2003 03:47 PM (GMT)
I'm waiting... Done yet?...done yet?...done yet?... <_<

2legendary4u - November 5, 2003 05:30 PM (GMT)
finally! i have an idea!

Showdown With Brock!

Katie: Here we are Woody, Pewter City!
Woody: Finally! I was getting tired of that forest! Hey! How come there was a Totodile in the forest? they're not native around here!
Katie: Mustv'e gotten lost or something, I don't know! Let's get to the Pokemon Center already!
Woody: Race ya there!
*They race towards the Center*


[Meanwhile]
Ash: She must be in Pewter City by now.... and i'm stuck out in this forest without a Pokemon! I knew I shouldv'e stopped at the market to get some Pokeballs...
*Walks further until he sees a Torchic*
Ash: A Torchic! But they're not native to here!
*Looks down at the ground*
Ash: Oh wow! A Pokeball! *Picks it up* How convenient! Alright Torchic, you're mine! *Throws the Pokeball*
*Wiggles 10 times then dings*
Ash: That was easy! Now to find Katie!

[Back at Pewter City]
Katie: Well Woody, here is the gym. Are we ready?
Woody: Most definetly!
Katie: Let's enter.
*Opens doors*
Brock: Welcome to the Pewter City gym. I am Brock and- WHOA! Hubba hubba!
Katie: Lay off Spiky! I'm here for a battle, not a relationship!
Brock: :( Aw man! Oh well, I tried. It will be a 2 on 2 battle. Is that ok with you?
Katie: Yes! That is exactly how many Pokemon I got!
Brock: Alright, I'll choose first. GOOOOO ONIX!
Onix: RWOOOOR!
Katie: GO CRUSH!
Crush: Alright! My first match!
Brock: Hm. This should be easy. Onix, Body Slam!
Katie: Crush! Dodge and use Water Gun!
Onix: Now I gottcha!
Crush: Don't think so! *Dodges the Body Slam*
Onix: Wha?
Crush: Now you're asking for it! *Uses Water Gun*
Onix: RWOOOOORRRRR!!! *Falls over in a dead faint*
Brock: Impossible!!! Onix return!
Katie: *Scratches Crush* Great job Crush! Return!
Brock: Don't think this is over! GO TYRANITAR!
Tyranitar: Finally! A battle!
Katie: You know what to do Woody!
Woody: Yup!
Brock: Tyranitar, Earthquake!
Katie: Woody! Jump on its head!
Woody: Gottcha! *Jumps on Tyranitar's head*
Tyranitar: Get off me you pipsqueak! *Throws Woody across the gym*
Katie: Woody, try a Solarbeam!
Woody: This should be fun! *Charges up for a Solarbeam*
Brock: Tyranitar! Take Down now!
Tyranitar: You're going down punk!
Woody: Yeah right! *Fires Solarbeam before Tyranitar can come close*
Tyranitar: :wacko: ugh..... *Faints*
Brock: This can't be happening! Tyranitar, return! You won fair and square, here is your Boulder Badge.
Katie: *Takes the badge* YES! I won my first battle with a gym leader! I couldn't have done it without my Pokemon!
Woody: Aw, it was nothing!

[Outside The Gym]
Adam: So, she won her first badge eh? This is starting to get interesting! *Evil Laugh*

[Just Outside Viridian Forest]
Ash: Finally! I'm here!
*Runs toward the city*

2legendary4u - November 14, 2003 06:10 PM (GMT)
well? is anyone going to give me a compliment?




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