here it is

Part 1: the quest begins

Long ago in the year 1000 A.D, there was a weapon that can produce massive destruction to any foe. One man has wielded the sword and stopped countless villains. Now 1000 years later that same warrior will wield that same blade, which is now called..the ultima weapon.

Now we see a hamster, wandering with a wounded arm and getting lost on every turn

???-man, why did my human abandon me. What did I do to her

he stops as his wound is getting worse

???-dammit, why did this happen

and at that moment, he fell on the ground

???-Why..did this happen..I wish..I..wasn't..alone.

at that moment, he collapsed.

Meanwhile, bijou was walking around collecting sunflower seeds for the ham- hams

Bijou-hmm..this one looks nice

Then bijou notices something

Bijou-huh.

She goes over to a nearby tree and notices a hamster

Bijou-huh..what happened to you

She found the same wounded hamster that was at the beginning.

To be continued

whaddaya think

well i feel like bashing something

so that's one big as'sed load of sh'it. you suck at writing.



meh that wasn't even a bash

this is just the first part stupid

the rest is here and you'll like it if you know what's good for ya ::FIRE::

Uh......what? I'm not stupid, for one. I've seen some shi'tty "starts" before, but that one is like...one of the most cow pie'tiest.

and....was that a threat? *starts laughing*\

...alright I ALMOST got through the second part, but I was laughing to hard to continue. So I'll just stick withthe fact that this fic sucks.

i've worked forever on that, and i bet you think every fic on that site sucks

No I don't. I haven't even READ every fic. Actually I've read ten or more.. Obviously they were good if I kept reading them. Tard.

TARD???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!THAT'S IT *takes out soul edge* YOU WANNA PIECE OF ME??????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well, which piece? ;) If you "challenge" me you'll be in peices...hehehe..

i'm unstoppable *kills kitsu*

No, because even if you were, you SHOULD know: Kitsu always wins.

whatever, i have the ultamate weapon

So? I can take you down easily weapon or not. ^_^

i am the most unstoppable being in the universe, try to stop me

.......*LAUGHS IRL*

*takes out chigusa* lemme join in ;)

1.) no you can't
and
2.) what the heck is a chigusa

raided ;)

jonouchi......YES I CAN!!!
BTW, your fic sucked!!
Suxx00rz!!!


.....

I am totally NOT gonna tell ya what a chigusa is.....NEVER.
NEVER NEVER NEVER. :D

what did i get through telling kitsu here yesterday

*shrugs* ok, jou, the fic was DISGOODLY. so ST'FU and TAKE THE FACT THAT YOU CAN'T WRITE...

or are you a little girl?

ok you f***ing b***ard, you asked for it

Hey, hey, hey, Kitsu's NOT a b******!!!
She's my friend!!
EVERYBODY STOP THIS FIGHT!!!!!!
I'VE HAD IT!!!!
WHY CAN'T EVERYBODY JUST.....GET OVER IT, THAT'S WHAT I USUALLY DO WHEN MY MOM & DAD FIGHT!!!

And about the fic, that is Kitsu's opinion and she's being honest. You can't change opinions, jon. You can't! It's Kitsu's choice wether she says it fine or wether she says it suxx00rzz. OMFG...... ::die::

she said it's s***

omfg