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Title: The Everlasting Dog
Description: staring my character, Elko!


Elko - July 3, 2003 04:20 AM (GMT)
I'm not gonna start it now, but soon. This would be when Elk first meets the Hams. This take place after The Search for Sandy's brother, so it would be ep 15.
Heres a sample:
"Wow! You're the coolest dog ever!" Hamtaro cried happily. "We gotta show you to the others!" and he started over to other side of the road.
"Whoa, hold on there Lightfoot!" said the dog, jumping in front of him. "Why don't I give you lift in case another car cames." She bent down for Hamtaro to climb on her nose.
"OK, good idea."
When they got to the other side, the dog asked, "So, there's more of you?"
"Yeah, 15!"
"F-f-fifteen? Wow."
"Well, 14. One isn't always around." said Hamtaro
"Hmm..." the dog seemed to be thinking about something, "Your name's Hamtaro, right?"
"Yeah, how'd you know? Oh, we're here." He sild down the dog's back. "OK, just stay here, I'll get the others"

So? Interesting? What do you think?

All_Couples - July 3, 2003 04:26 AM (GMT)
Sample, right? It's so cute!

Mono:I like when they said: "Hmm..." the dog seemed to be thinking about something, "Your name's Hamtaro, right?"
"Yeah, how'd you know? Oh, we're here." She alreadly know them haha!

wouldn't she know there's 15?

Elko - July 3, 2003 04:30 AM (GMT)
Well, their in the clubhouse most of the time, not all of 'em are always there, and she hides in the bushes.

Quixotic Muffin - July 3, 2003 05:56 AM (GMT)
hiding in the bushes eh? Is she a russian spy?

Lila - July 3, 2003 07:15 AM (GMT)
*does a fancy Russian jig*

All_Couples - July 3, 2003 04:01 PM (GMT)
She ain't no spy!

Sandtaro - July 3, 2003 04:26 PM (GMT)
I am. Souldn't have said that.

Elko - July 3, 2003 04:37 PM (GMT)
Elko hides in the bushes because she didn't want them to see her until the time is right. And if she was a spy, why would she help them?

Elko - July 3, 2003 06:20 PM (GMT)
The Everlasting Dog
Chap. 1: Near death experince
Hamtaro sat in his cage, and watched Laura get ready for school. She said her class was going to the animal shelter.
'Animal shelter?' thought Hamtaro, 'what that? Maybe Maxwell knows.'
Once Laura left, Hamtaro got out of his cage, ran to the hole in the wall ("Oopah"), slid down the pipe, and landed on Brandy's head.
"Hi Bandy!"Hamtaro greeted. Brandy just yawned. Hamtaro ran to the street, but didn't see the rock in front of him. He trip over it and landed on his head, making him black out.
Meanwhile, a car stop at a red light. A minute later, the light truned green, and the car was heading straight for Hamtaro.

=O Uh oh! So, good? Bad? Shrot I know...

All_Couples - July 3, 2003 06:27 PM (GMT)
Mono: Me like!*grabs a bucket of banana chips (like pocorn)*

Baggs - July 3, 2003 07:03 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Elko @ Jul 3 2003, 01:20 PM)
The Everlasting Dog
Hamtaro sat in his cage, and watched Laura get ready for school. She said her class was going to the animal shelter.
'Animal shelter?' thought Hamtaro, 'what that? Maybe Maxwell knows.'
Once Laura left, Hamtaro got out of his cage, ran to the hole in the wall ("Oopah"), slid down the pipe, and landed on Brandy's head.
"Hi Bandy!"Hamtaro greeted. Brandy just yawned. Hamtaro ran to the street, but didn't see the rock in front of him. He trip over it and landed on his head, making him black out.
Meanwhile, a car stop at a red light. A minute later, the light truned green, and the car was heading straight for Hamtaro.

=O Uh oh! So, good? Bad? Shrot I know...

X-D ROFL

All_Couples - July 3, 2003 07:05 PM (GMT)
Is that a good?

Lila - July 3, 2003 07:06 PM (GMT)
I don't believe I know this Bandy you speak of....

All_Couples - July 3, 2003 07:15 PM (GMT)
Hey Elko"your stupid" :P She meant Brandy, we can't spell (and some times she forgets letters)

Elko - July 3, 2003 07:27 PM (GMT)
Your has bad a speller as me, All_C. I'm up for suggestions of the story. Good suggestions. I won't use bad ones.

All_Couples - July 3, 2003 07:33 PM (GMT)
Sure we get Bs but they give you a list to memorize

Lila - July 3, 2003 09:58 PM (GMT)
I didn't have spelling tests in 8th grade...but we had other tests ><

Elko - July 3, 2003 11:39 PM (GMT)
Give me more posts and I'll write more. It gets funnier when the Hams meet Elko.

Quixotic Muffin - July 4, 2003 07:04 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Elko @ Jul 3 2003, 11:37 AM)
Elko hides in the bushes because she didn't want them to see her until the time is right. And if she was a spy, why would she help them?

Spies are very secretive. I'm sure there's underlying motives. ;)

Elko - July 4, 2003 07:35 PM (GMT)
Nah, Elko's not a spy.

Elko - July 6, 2003 07:23 PM (GMT)
If I misspell things, don't make such a fuss about it,
Hamtaro came to, but was very dizzy and his head thobbed. He closed his eyes to try and clear the pain. The next thing he knew, he heard a voice yell, "Look out!", and he felt himself being lift in the air. He opened his eyes and looked behind him. A brown dog was holding him up and had a tire mark on her back. She put him down and starting yelling at a car about a foot away.
"What kind of tires are those?! They gotta be like, what, 3 centimeters thick! I'm surprised you can stop!"-she look at the mark on her back-"And you might want to clean 'em- eah, it's not like you can hear me"
She look back at Hamtaro, pick him up in her teeth and droped him on the sidewalk."you ok?" she asked.
"How'd, how'd..."Hamtaro stuttered
"Survive that?" Hamtaro nodded, "I'm everlasting. I can't di'e" she added at the confused look on Hamtaro's face. "I saved a man, and he give me powers"
"Like what?"
"I'm talking to you aren't I?"
"Anything else?"
"Endless. Watch." The dog put her paws together, then pulled them apart and there was a beam of light. She pointed at Brandy's water bowl and it floated a few feet in the air. She let it drop and look at Hamtaro with a slight smirk. "I've got the power"
Hamtaro gasped lightly
"Wow! You're the coolest dog ever!" He cried happily. "We gotta show you to the others!" and he started over to other side of the road.
"Whoa, hold on there Lightfoot!" said the dog, jumping in front of him. "Why don't I give you lift in case another car cames." She bent down for Hamtaro to climb on her nose.
"OK, good idea."
When they got to the other side, the dog asked, "So, there's more of you?"
"Yeah, 15!"
"F-f-fifteen? Wow."
"Well, 14. One isn't always around." said Hamtaro
"Hmm..." the dog seemed to be thinking about something, "Your name's Hamtaro, right?"
"Yeah, how'd you know? Oh, we're here." He sild down the dog's back. "OK, just stay here, I'll get the others" He ran down the tunnel leading to the clubhouse.
"Wow, speedy" said the dog. "Ooo, trees!"

Elko - July 7, 2003 02:42 AM (GMT)
Chap 2:The Hams meet the Everlasting Dog
Hamtaro ran through the tunnel very fast in his excietment. He couldn't believe he met an everlasting dog with endlesspowers! He was was lost in thought when he came to the door.
"Where is Hamtaro?"
The all Hams Hams (but Jingle) were at the Clubhouse and wondering where Hamtaro was.
"I don't know" said Oxnard, "Kana left for school about 10 minutes..." but he stopped when he heard a loud BAM! at the door. Then the door opened and they saw Hamtaro stuck to the door, his muffed voice saying "Guys! Guys!" Boss went over to him and pulled him off the door.
"Oh thanks."
" Whats so imporant that you forget there was a door?" asked Boss, puting Hamtaro down.
"C'mon! Follow me!"
Once they were outside, Hamtaro looked around.
"What ya lookin' for?" asked Howdy.
"When I crossed the street I almost got run over."said Hamtaro, truning to them."But a brown dog saved me and got run over instend."
"What happaned?" asked Sandy (Don't you just love her?! :D )
"She survived. She's got the, um... 'power of everlasting'. And she can talk to us."
"Dogs can't talk to us." said Dexter
"She can!" Hamtaro protested
"And I don't think" said Maxwell, "there's such thing as 'power of everLASTING!!" He and the others had screamed and jumped back. Hamtaro looked behind and for a slipt second saw the dog the color black.
"Oh, sorry, was I black?"she said "I was in the bush. Habit"
"Is that her?" asked Oxnard.
"Hamtaro that was a black dog with red eyes!" said Dexter.
"No, she's nice" said Hamtaro, "she saved me"
The Hams still looked hestist.

Elko - July 7, 2003 11:08 PM (GMT)
"I don't think they like me, Lightfoot." said the dog, bending down to Hamtaro's hight. ("Lightfoot?" asked Hamtaro) "Oh, c'mon guys. Have I hurt you... be..fore...?" she stopped mid sentence and sniffed toward a bush, ingoring the confused looks on the hams faces. She had just swifted her wight to look, when she felt something soft on her leg. She looked down and saw the little yellow ham on her leg.
"Aww, what's your name?" the dog asked.
"Ookyoo." said the ham, happily.
"Ookyoo? Well, that's an interesting name..."
"Acually, her name's Penelope." said Pashmina.
"Oh, that's a nice name." said the dog, wagging her tail.
"Ookyoo"
"Hey! I guess she won't hurt us after all!" said Panda.
"Yeah. If she she won't hurt Penelope, she wouldn't, like, hurt anyone!" said Sandy.
"Told ya." said Hamtaro and the dog in unison.

All_Couples - July 7, 2003 11:19 PM (GMT)
Mono: I like it so far! ::YEAAA::

tigrillo(stan) - July 8, 2003 12:18 AM (GMT)
hey, elko, all couples, tell hamtaro beginner that she can post now.

Lila - July 8, 2003 12:19 AM (GMT)
XD

All_Couples - July 8, 2003 12:46 AM (GMT)
I don't think she's coming back, she doesn't like hamtaro as much we all do.I didn't here her, but Elko said she doesn't why she's ever on Hamtopia hmph

tigrillo(stan) - July 8, 2003 12:48 AM (GMT)
oookay.

Elko - July 8, 2003 01:56 AM (GMT)
The hams finally believed that the dog wouldn't hurt them and crowded around her.
"OK, OK." said the dog, " Introdution time."-she looked at Bijou-"Hey! Your that cute little french ham! What your name?"
"Bijou."
"Oh, thats a nice name. I think it mean 'jewel' in french."
"Yeah, hey! How'd you know I was french?"
"Hold that thought." said the dog, holding up a paw."Where's Ookyoo?" She looked around and saw Penelope picking up an acorn by the bush she looked at earlier.
"Ookyoo! Get a way from there!" she said, picking up Penelope and bring her back to the group.
"What's wrong?" Pashmina asked.
"Get in the bush."
"What?"
"Go on, hurry."
Once the hams were safely in a bush, the dog walked up to a bush, and sniffed around, growling. A light brown cat with gray spots jumped out right in front of her.
"You again!" the dog growled. "I thought I taught you a lesson!"
'You again?' thought Hamtaro.
The cat gave a freaked out meow and ran as the dog chased after it. They ran through servel bushes, but when they came out the last ones, the dog didn't come out. The cat and hams looked around. Then the dog dropped down from a tree, and smirked.
"Give me some lovin'!"
She scooped up the cat, bucked and sent it flying. (Yes it was ok.)
"Wowww."
The hams then crowded around the dog again.
"You saved us!" they shouted.
"OK! Too much love! Now let's finish those intros. So there's Hamtaro, Bijou, and Penelope. In the pink scarf, what's your name?"
"Pashmina."
"Your's?" asked the dog.
"Dexter."
"Howdy."
"Boss."
"Oxnard."
"Maxwell"
"OK, hold on." said the dog, counting on her 'fingers'. "So there's Hamtaro, Bijou, Penelope, Pashmina, Dexter, Howdy, Boss, Oxnard, and Maxwell, right? OK, just making sure. Oh, aren't you guys cute!" she said, going over to Sandy and Stan.
"Heh, yeah..."
"What's your name?"
"Stan"
"San..."
"Wait... don't tell me. Sandy."
"Yeah how'd you know?"
"Oh, look, a panda!" said the dog jumping over to Panda. "I bet that's your name."
"Yep."
"OK." said Hamtaro, "now that you know our names, what's yours?"
"Um... I don't... have one."
I'll post more later.

Elko - July 8, 2003 08:58 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
Really wild guess.....Fred Flintstones and George Jetson  ......
Rof? (Heke?)

Baggs - July 8, 2003 09:20 PM (GMT)
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:lol:

Lila - July 8, 2003 09:22 PM (GMT)
You know WHYYYY we know that?! Because we ARE metaphor Monks! *thumbs up with a colouful background like the old batman movies* Everlasting Dog is made from ALL NATURAL ingredience! Like....*runs*

Baggs - July 8, 2003 09:27 PM (GMT)
HYDROGENATED SOY BEAN OIL, BATMAN, WET DOG, FERTILIZER, AND CANNED SOUCE!!!!!!!

Dog never tasted so good.

*elevator music plays and you see a girl on a swing with her wet dog, she is plugging her nose*

Lila - July 8, 2003 09:30 PM (GMT)
OH, MY HYDROGENATED SOY BEAN OIL, BATMAN!!!!!! *dies and gets mixed in with the ingredience*

pokay...sorry for disturb...please ignore us and get on with the story...(pretty cool story, though)

Elko - July 8, 2003 11:25 PM (GMT)
:lol: Thanks I'll start chap. 3 in a minute.

Sandtarola - July 9, 2003 02:37 AM (GMT)
those chapters in your story are really good Elko! luv

Elko - July 9, 2003 05:24 AM (GMT)
Chap. 3:The One and only Ham Dog
"You don't have one?" the hams repeated. The dog nodded.
"Let's deal with the name later." said Boss. "I wonna see this everlasting-thing."
"Yes! One special commin' up! (yes)" She climbed the tallest tree, jumped off ("Wha Yhoo!"), fliped over, and landed hard on her back. (If you tried that, *shudder* Nuff said.)
The hams just looked dumbfounded.
"Yep. One of my favorite ways to di'e, next to gettin' run over. Just feels good.
*********
Later that day, the hams brought out the little tables and chairs (don't ask.) and sat around it, wondering what to with the dog, while she played with Penelope. The biggest problem was the clubhouse.
"Even if she were to stay," said Boss, "how's she gonna fit?"
"Yeah," said Howdy, "she hits the 'woof!' Get it? Woof! Har Har!"
The hams sighed, but they heard someone laughing.
"Haha, that is so true!"said the dog. "Good one"
(the way the story is writen will change to make look better in certain places.)
Hamtaro:"She laughed!"
Dexter:"That's astounding!"
Cappy:"Wow"
Howdy:"Yeah, I like her! Can we keep her!"
"Hey, Lightfoot!" the dog called. "You said there were 14 of you!"
"He's inside."Hamtaro replied.
"Why does she keep calling you 'Lightfoot'?" Bjiou asked him.
"'Cause I fell." said Hamtaro, drooping his ears.
"Atually," said the dog, coming over with Penelope on her back, "it's because your speedy. Ain't that right, Frenchie?" she added looking at Bijou then walking around.
"Frenchie?" said Bijou.
"She still needs a name." said Boss.
"Well, it should be a pretty name." said Stan, shaking his macaras. "She's almost as pretty as Pashmina!"
"I had to put my ribbon away." said Sandy, sarcsictly. (I can't spell for beans.)
"You ain't got no change with me, Flirt."
"Flirt? Hey, is that a shot?"
"Nope." said the dog, going back.
"Ookyoo!"
"Any ideas." asked Boss
"Stan."
"Stan, she's a girl." said Sandy.
"So?"
Sandy gruoned and put her head on the table.
"Anything else?" said Boss, as Sandy started banging her head on the table.
The hams thought for a while, Sandy still banging her head.
"Sandy? Sandy, stop before you hurt yourself!' said Maxwell, who was sitting next to her.
"Huh? Oh, sorry." said Sandy.
"*gasp* Lightblub!" said Bijou. "Remember when our owners did zose American reports?"
"Uhhh... yeah."
"Well Maria got a state called 'Nevada', and one of ze county and county seats was called 'Elko'. What about zat?" (That really is where I got her name. We had to do county and county seats.)
"Hey that's a great name!" said Hamtaro. "All in favor?"
Everyone raised their paw.
"Good!"
Suddenly, the dog had come over sniffing around.
"Someone's gota crush over here." she said, smirking. (Boss and Bijou tensed up.)
"Hmm... yes." she stopped at Maxwell and Sandy. "It's you two!"
"Ha, busted!" Stan laughed. "You guys are, like, so red!"
"And someone who has lots of crushes" said the dog, making him shut up immeadiaty. (Again, I can't spell for beans.) "I knew I smelled a crush that day!" she truned back to Sandy and Maxwell.
"You were there?" Maxwell and Sandy said in unsion.
"I was in the bush!"
"You could smell their cursh all the way over there?" said Boss, pointing to where she was earilar. "Whoa."
"Miss dog?" said Hamtaro. "We think we have a name for you."
"What is it? What is it?"
"Elko."
"Elko?... I like it! Elko the Everlasting dog!"
"Now about you inthe bush. Could you go over there, in those bushes?"
"Sure."
Elko let Penelope down, then walked over to the bushes, with the hams following her, and back in to them."Like this?" she asked
"I know this might sound stupid, but can you turn black?" Asked Hamtaro.
"No, not stupid at all!" With that she turned an inky black and her eyes turned red.
"*gasp* It you!"
Oooo cliffhanger :D Now Elko's got a name. *does happy dance*

Baggs - July 9, 2003 05:33 PM (GMT)
Ooooooooooooooohhh! Cool!

Yoosh. please dun mind us!!!!! We just like the name....... :D

...AND NOW WITH A NEW CAR DOOR! KEEP THOSE MOOCHERS AWAY FROM YOUR EVERLASTING DOG!!!


Elko - July 9, 2003 06:17 PM (GMT)
Yeah, you and Lila do those when I stop. They're funny.

Lila - July 9, 2003 07:04 PM (GMT)
*climbs out of the ingredience dressed as a news reporter* Annnnnd...YOU'RE ON!!!! Thank you, we will be honoured to do the commercials in your story...*beats some moochers with the new CAR DOOR™*




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