Name:Oki
Age: 17
Gender:female
Race: 1/2wolf demon, 1/2 dog demon
Class: Swordsman
Stat: Divide 25 points among : Attack 3, Speed 4, Agility 3, Defense 3, Magic 3, Strength 4, Stealth 3.
Weapon: Katana
Attack:35
Speed: 13
Cost: 550
Level Required: 1
Speacial Attack: Choaic Bane: cuases choas
Description: She has long, messy, silver hair that goes down pass her hips, and mysertous gray eyes. She stands 5' 10" and wieghts 130 lbs. She has a very small bust. She usally wears a plain green kimono, but with an fancy pink obi. She has her kanatana tied around her hips.
Personality: She is has a bad tember and is very determinded. She is loyal to her friends. It is hard for her to be kind to strangers. She also is a potty mouth.
Origin: She came from where Osaka is today. Her family is her is all dead. Her father was a wolf demon and her mother was a dog demon. She also had a twin brother. One day when she and her brother where playing in a forest near there home a bear demon came and ate her brother and tried to eat her. She ran away to China for 10 years (she 5 when her brother was killed). Where she learned different types of maritel arts and sword styles. When she returned she found her parents dead. She wander around the area looking for someone to tell her what happened. A few weeks later a wolf demon tribe found her they told her that her parents where killed by demon slayers in the area. At this tears fourmed in her eyes and she vowed she would not do anything till all the demon slayers in the area where killed. After she killed 3 groups of demon slayers. A human told her about a bear demon. She went to the forest she played in as a child. There she met the bear demon who killed her family. She drew her sword and slayed the demon with out much of a fight. After she returned to wolf tribe telling them about what really happened. A wolf demon told her that they used her to get ride of some demon slayers. After she heard that she ran away.
Sample RP: Oki ran to the tree and there she stoped running. She saw a girl be attack by some demons. That was the noises she heard. That is what woke her that night. That girl needed her help, but unarmed there was nothing she could do.
The she had an idea. "I can get a tree branch and poke them with it. It was stupid but it just might work if I do it right" She thought to herself.
"Hey idoits" Oki said. She picked up a stick as she said that. "I don't think you should pick on other people like that". She felt butterflies having a party in her stomach.
The demons looked up. Thier teeth were yellow and roting and thier skin was rotting.
She gasped. "their zombies"
Well, its mostly good, there are only a few problems. You need to add 5 points to your defense stat because your a swordsman. You need to add your special attack's stats and a description of your attack.
Check out the rpg information on the following page, if you haven't already.
http://furyoftetsuiga.tripod.com/Other than that, its a pretty interesting character; although you may want to do a little more for your sample rp. You might want to look at my, Chiriko, or Hisui of Midnight Wolves Character Registration forms. Sorry I can't approve you, I don't have that authority; I'll send a message to seibutsu to ask Kaze to approve you.
Name:Oki
Age: 17
Gender:female
Race: 1/2wolf demon, 1/2 dog demon
Class: Swordsman
Stat: Divide 25 points among : Attack 3, Speed 4, Agility 3, Defense 5, Magic 1,
Strength 4, Stealth 3.
Weapon: Katana
Attack:35
Speed: 13
Cost: 550
Level Required: 1
Speacial Attack: Choaic Bane: A simple attack really, it is a less powerful of the Wind Scar, it also isn't the best attack in a worst case senario.
Attack:20
Speed:5
Cost:
Description: She has long, messy, silver hair that goes down pass her hips, and mysertous gray eyes. She stands 5' 10" and wieghts 130 lbs. She has a very small bust. She usally wears a plain green kimono, but with an fancy pink obi. She has her kanatana tied around her hips.
Personality: She is has a bad tember and is very determinded. She is loyal to her friends. It is hard for her to be kind to strangers. She also a bit mouthy and doesn't think about someone's feelings when she says something.
Origin: She came from where Osaka is today. Her family is her is all dead. Her father was a wolf demon and her mother was a dog demon. She also had a twin brother. One day when she and her brother where playing in a forest near there home a bear demon came and ate her brother and tried to eat her. She ran away to China for 10 years (she 5 when her brother was killed). Where she learned different types of maritel arts and sword styles. When she returned she found her parents dead. She wander around the area looking for someone to tell her what happened. A few weeks later a wolf demon tribe found her they told her that her parents where killed by demon slayers in the area. At this tears fourmed in her eyes and she vowed she would not do anything till all the demon slayers in the area where killed. After she killed 3 groups of demon slayers. A human told her about a bear demon. She went to the forest she played in as a child. There she met the bear demon who killed her family. She drew her sword and slayed the demon with out much of a fight. After she returned to wolf tribe telling them about what really happened. A wolf demon told her that they used her to get ride of some demon slayers. After she heard that she ran away.
Sample RP: Oki ran to the tree and there she stoped running. She saw a girl be attack by some demons. That was the noises she heard. That is what woke her that night. That girl needed her help, but unarmed there was nothing she could do.
The she had an idea. "I can get a tree branch and poke them with it. It was stupid but it just might work if I do it right" She thought to herself.
"Hey idoits" Oki said. She picked up a stick as she said that. "I don't think you should pick on other people like that". She felt butterflies having a party in her stomach.
The demons looked up. Thier teeth were yellow and roting and thier skin was rotting.
She gasped. "their zombies" She drew her sword and screamed "Come and get me, Morrons" the zombies looked her way. She cut off one's arm with a swing of her sword, the flesh was rotten so it was easy to destroy it. The zombie just grabbed the arm and put it back on. "eww" said Oki, not really grossed out, just annoyed.
OOC: I'm confused about the cost ti=hing but um.. okay