ok i started a whole new story but i am having a tough time with the characters so if you would be so kind as to help me thanks. your character description MUST include the following:

Name
Gender
Age
Height
Hair
Outfit
Personality
Occupation (if old enough to have one)
History
Family
Animal partner

basicly the story is set in the future so the animal partner can be anything you want it to be. also feel free to include any other information on your character that you feel i missed. i need lots of characters and this is a fantasy story so feel free to be as creative as you want to be. when i start the story i will let you know who i decide to include. thanks for all your help!

Name- Aki Hana
Gender-Female
Age-15
Height-4'11
Hair-Midnight blue
Outfit-Black tanktop cut justabove her belly button with baggy black cargo pants
Personality-Loyal,Trusts no one, Will only trust people she knows well, very quiet
Occupation-Bounty Hunter
History- Aki Hana was the smallest of four children. She was only five when thy all were killed in a fire. Since then she hasn't been the same. She went to a bounty hunter training institute. She graduatedwith the titleof their perfect student. Since then she has completed every mission given to her.
Family-All are deceased
Animal partner- has none

thanks for the character Pyro...but since you failed to give her an animal partner i will give her one...hope you don't mind....now i only need *counts on fingers* 12 more characters to help complete my story :D

Alright I'll give her an animal partner...hm...mini griffon named Sora...light blue in color...and you're welcome.

i created a male character...if any, how many of them do you need?

well the story is based on a girl that is on a qest to find 13 others to help her so i need the other 13 characters but with the one that Pyro created i only need 12

i know the story is based on a girl... <_< but does she meet any GUYS along the way?


I am sorry *pushes libby away* Miss. Saphira got up really early this morning and has been looking for Miss. Melissa for about an hour...can you believe it? Miss. Melissa didn't even tell Miss. Saphira that she was leaveing...it is very unlike her...

- Kaze-Maru

yes i know you know how the story is based Saphira...the only point is i need characters and it doesn't matter weather they are male or female...oh and hi Kaze-Maru good to see you are well.....uh just how early was Saphira up this morning??

thank god...


Miss. Saphira got up around 6 am, m'lady...why? is that a bad thing?

- Kaze-Maru

uh....please just call me Shinoco and it is kinda bad....because...well Blackthorn left about that time this morning....Star is still asleep and doesn't know yet but she is going to flip when she finds out.......

Name: Stu
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Height: 5'11"
Hair: Black short spiky hair with Bright pink tips.
Outfit: Red camoflage cargo pants, extremely baggy, Navy blue t-shirt with a picture of Mario(from the video games) on it, Black leather trench-coat. One black combat book(left foot) and one white tennis shoe(right foot)
Personality: A very funny guy, always quick with the witty remarks, but hold a terrible darkness within his soul that is usually well hidden behind a smile, but becomes more than obvious at times.
Occupation: Stand up comedian/Assassin
History: Starting at the age of four his father would molest and beat him on a daily basis. He would retreat to his room and cry at first, but after a few years he just stopped crying and accepted that that was his life. But when he was 10 his mother found out and his father started to beat her when she threatened to call the police and a divorce. Stu had seen him hitting her and as he was watching the savage beating something inside of his souls broke and he went into a rage and blacked out, when he came to he was standing next to his fathers body covered in his blood. His mother, afraid of him at first, soon realized that the boy didn't realize what he had done and they told the cops that it was a burglary gone bad. Then they locked away the past forever, moved away from there and started a new life. Stu showed no signs of even remembering the incident and grew to be a happy fun-loving boy always making everyone laugh. When he was 18 his mother grew sick with cancer and Stu had to support her. He had been doing stand up comedy for a couple of years and was making decent money off of it. But he was making more than a stand up comedian should be making. Little did anyone know, He had started doing side jobs...as a hired killer...it was doing one of these jobs that he met up with a certain...friend
Family: Only his mother, whos is sick with cancer, She is the most important thing to him and he would do anything for her...even Kill to have enough money for her medications.
Animal partner:Fluffy the Emperor Scorpion, (the large black ones) about three feet in length(with tail) hides on Stu's back underneath his trench coat and comes out to assist in assassinations and to help protect Stu when he is in danger
:ph43r:

thanks for the help P-Chan i really appriciate it...now only 11 more to go!

right, m'l-....Shinoco...So Mr. Astoria has left...odd...oh well...Mrs. Saphira (note that it is now Mrs.....one guess why...) is going to e-mail you about 4-5 pictures of characters for your story....even though she's mad at you...

- Kaze-Maru

Is he adequate for the story?? If you need more information or anything, , just let me know what you need ;) :ph43r:

P-Chan your character is fine and thanks again for letting me use him because besides the evil demon man (who still doesn't have a name) your character is the only male in the story so it's fine.....oh and Kaze-Maru why is Saphira mad at me??

ehhh....i'll help! and...you will be in serious need of male characters...maybe my concious will make a character. maybe.

Name: Rina
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Height: 4'9"
Hair: dark brown with blonde streaks. Shoulder length.
Outfit: Blue tanktop over a white long sleeved shirt, jean shorts, and black sneakers.
Personality:simple minded, slow on certain things, but her *cuteness* covers up most of it. still, she is smart and can go high on pudding.
Occupation: Student
History:her real parents died when she was 2, and afterwards she was adopted by many (5) families.
Family: Father, mother, sister who died on year ago in a car crash
Animal partner: A ferret that has really sharp claws. its name is Puff.

jeez...how many girls are you people gonna create?

Name: Kalutika (Kal-u-tie-ka)
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Height: 7' 9"
Hair: green and black (?)
Outfit: oh god..i don't what it's called...but he dresses like an egyption...
Personality: forsaken, mysterious, set back...etc.
Occupation: none...he's a wanderer
History: little is known except that he used to work for the demons until they betrayed him by killing his family...now he's out to get revenge...
Family: none (dead)
Animal Partner: ice and wind Jackle

(i'll e-mail you the pictures)

ok thanks for your character but i do need a name for his animal partner if you would please be so kind...

Name:Akemi
Gender:Female
Age:16
Height:5"0'
Hair:Long lavendar hair, some of it covers her left eye
Outfit:(the future? You can do her outfit anyway you like... i'd rather have it in the past though...)
Personality:Calm, mostly shows no emotion, and she's sometimes nice...
Occupation:Can it be a demon?
History:History? I don't really know what to put here...
Family:she has 10 sisters
Animal partner:Dragon(If it's okay)
the dragon's named Sarah

I'm generous enough to let you use my Samsus. He's a good boy;don't hurt his personality or characteristics, please.

Name:Samsus
gender:male
age:500(looks 16)
height:5 foot 7
hair:One spike of hair splits his head in half;dark side and light side. His hair is midnight black, and spikes to the right of his head.
Outfit:Left side:Shoulder armor with spike on it, torn and tattered long sleeve(white) tattered, ripped pants, black tights under that. Right side:short sleeve goes over black sleeve. Same pants like on left side, no shoulder armor. Whole:Has leather straps which hold his black dark sword.
Personality:Samsus was what the people of Azarath called "The Next Great Leader", but he hates to admit it. Samsus is very serious, but his mental state gets out of wack when he is under deep stress. Samsus is very stressful, because of his horrible past. He served in the Azarath army before he finally became recognized by all as the Great Leader. He has led armies for awhile, so he expects respect from others most of the time. Samsus never laughs, only sarcastically, but he also has a soft side in himself. When aggravated so much, his only visible eye flashes a white color. In battle, this is a sign of strength, and this anger causes Samsus to be stronger.
History:(wow, there's too much...500 years of discussion here)
Family:Samsus' parents died when he was 4 years old, and he has no family.]
Animal Partner:Gella, a demon bird with a temper, but love for Samsus.

If still needed...

Name Prototype 4

Gender Female

Age 24

Height 6'2"

Hair Light brown and always worn in a long braid reaching her waist.

Outfit White tank top, Blue denim vest, Denim shorts, green, knee-high army boots, and a spiked collar around her neck. Also, a metal left arm capable of transforming into almost any weapon needed and two metal eyes able to act as high quality sensors.

Personality She's almost always silent, as she prefers to stay inside her own head rather than face the real world. She's quick to act in cases of danger, but refuses help from anyone, as she hates the thought of being indebted to people.

Occupation Mercenary in the loosest sense, as she's usually stuck doing petty theft and warning kills for powerful corporations.

History She was experimented on for many years by a small, independant, and not entirely legal robotics lab for the first twenty years of her life. When the lab was destroyed by an anonymous terrorist group, she lost all of her memories and found herself on the streets with unexplainable metal limbs and a taste for revenge.

Family She doesn't remember having any family, and was most likely from a poor, large family that sold her to the lab for extra money.

Animal partner Her constant companion is the lab's only other survivor, Seven, a stray dog that had been completely altered. He is now fully robotic and has computer-like intellegence. However, the lab was destroyed before he was given speech capabilities, but he possesses a telepathic sensor for some communication.