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Title: Brain Fart
Description: my mind is dead...


annie-chan - November 3, 2003 01:26 AM (GMT)
ok, for this story im writing, what would be a good reason for you to come up from the dead and steal souls?

kitsune_yurei - November 3, 2003 03:09 AM (GMT)
uh...yeah. its put on a lot in anime *coughcoughkikyocoughcough*

hanyou-kagome - November 3, 2003 03:18 AM (GMT)
umm how about an evil witch steals your ashes, tries to resurrect you to become an evil slave for her, but it doesn't work because you already have a reincarnation that by some freak accident is in your time, anyways the evil witch kidnapps the reincarnation and tries to steal her soul, but the reincarnation holds out, than an old lover comes and tries to save the reincarnation, but he/she sees you and says your name, which releases your soul from the reincarnation, and blasts it into you, you on the other hand kill the witch and tell your old lover that he betrayed you, you were never supposed to meet again, and try to kill him, than some stuff happens, and your soul winds up splitting basically, half going to your reincarnation, while the other half stays with you, well less than half stays with you, and more than half goes to your reincarnation, thus you fall off a cliff making everybody think you're really gone, but you survived by the pure hatred you have for your ex-lover, but to remain alive you have to steal souls............it might just be me, but this sounds vaguely familiar.......hmmmmm

Siri - November 4, 2003 01:22 AM (GMT)
uhm...HK strange as that may seem...That's from InuYasha...ring any bells? It's a really good idea, until you realize that it's already been done and copyrighted. And as for me...sorry but i can't think of anything to help you right now...come back to ya later. But I gave all my ideas to HK.

hanyou-kagome - November 4, 2003 01:57 AM (GMT)
haha, sorry, I know I sound mean, but really, why else would you come to life and steal souls right? anyways, sorry, but I seriously can't help!

Kago - November 4, 2003 02:14 AM (GMT)
'Cuz your bored and need an interesting and "unique" hobby.

hanyou-kagome - November 4, 2003 02:32 AM (GMT)
hmmm some "unique" hobby..... :rolleyes:

kiaraiskiara - November 4, 2003 09:14 PM (GMT)
uh oh... >>hears song of impending doom in the background<< KAGO! To shame! SPAWNER OF ONE LINERS!!! BAD KAGO! BAAAAD!
:lol:Lmfao...

Pyro-girl - January 31, 2004 12:42 AM (GMT)
Uh...hm...hold on I need to try and use my head...uh....WELL! You could be a lost soul that needs more to become a fully living human again...people can see you but they can't touch you...sounds original to me but if it's been done before tell me please!

Yukino-sama - July 6, 2004 10:24 PM (GMT)
Or you do it this way....

The main character kills a girl by stabbing her heart, and then they abandoned her and left because they though she was dead, except one day, she's still alive, and instead, she's a mononoke, and she keeps herself alive by killingdemons , and stealing their souls!

Hey... THAT'S MY IDEA! DON'T STEAL IT! I didn't know what I was doing.... but it was my idea, I was gonna make a anime show... and I was using it....

annie-chan - July 11, 2004 02:32 PM (GMT)
uh-huh....thanks guys.... if you want to read this story, i finally have the first two chapters up, and i'm working on the third. its at fictionpress, you can look it up as the title Gravekeeper Kira, or by author, Mew_Lettuce

Kallie - December 14, 2004 04:39 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (annie-chan @ Nov 2 2003, 06:26 PM)
ok, for this story im writing, what would be a good reason for you to come up from the dead and steal souls?

euh....revenge possibly? punishment for the human race for being so insolent and for taking things for granted?
*shrugs*

kikyo kicks ass..

Samsus - May 8, 2005 06:52 PM (GMT)
Drama plays a good part in stories and can add more emotions to it. Then, when people are done reading your story, they'll be all like crying and saying,"That was a good one."


...or something like that...





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