hey i started a new fanfic!! its about me!! lol well i'm one of the main characterslol
i'm still gonna do what now but i'll post here 2

characters

Raquel Antonietta (me!)
looks: short about 5'1 5'2
hair; light brown almost blonde sometimes . almost waist lenght about to the elbow
eyes; browns sometimes with green specks

Steve ( hope and karen and steph know who i mean)
looks: 5'4 i think
hair: dark brown almost black
eyes: brown
girl friend katie

katie
looks: 5'4 5'3 i donno shes a model
hair: light brown longer than shoulder length
eyes: green
boy friend steve

mike
looks : 5'3 5'4
hair: brown almost black
eyes: green
my neibor and really good friend

the other main characters are all from fearless

cool! lol I can't wait to you post some more!!

oh yes i forgot... three more main characters are also members on this site 2 of them know who they are but .... the rest of u wil have to wait lol

OOO ME ME!! PLEASE BE ME!!! lol :) I WANNA BE IN THE STORY!@!!!

Lol!

;) COME ON RAQUEL...is it ME?!?!?!?! lol :) ^_^ :lol:

yes hope u r in it but shhh the other 2 already know who they are

YAY!!! okay Me shhing :) :ph43r:

Disclaimer: NO i don't own Fearless or any of the characters in it o (though i wish i owned jake haha), nor any of the places in it blah blah blah blaH. all i own is this particular plot line and all of the new chracters Ms. Pascal didn't make up.

chapter 1
ANOTHER GENERATION?

Raquel pov

Losers, they're al pompus spoiled little biznithces. The people who live in this stupid small town. The over priviledged as you could say, everyone here is either rich or very high middle class. They get bran new cars for their 16th birthdays, they all graduate highschool and head off to collage to become just like their parents. Then they come back here to settle down and rais another gereration of spoiled biznitches.

Everyone swears around here, they use words like bitch, ass, who know the whole deal. Biznitches is my word, no one but me understands it son no one else uses it. comes in handy huh?

you might be asking what am i complaining about why am i even bothering with this? you might think it sounds pretty good, its not it sux. well, see i'm diffrent than all the rest..... i'm special. Did that just come ou ludicrisly wrong? i'm not bragging i HATE to brag, ask my bnff Hope. What i meant is.....well...... lets start over here

My name is Raquel Antonietta Antonuchi. i know its weird, no i don't want to explain it. lets leave it at that. I'm 14 years old and i'm a freashmen. The thing that sux about being 14 is that you have tons of responsibility, but barley any freedom. And annoyingly dense people ask how it feels to be a teenager, and if you blow them off they blame it on the sole fact that you are now a teenager.

I'm suppossed to be Italian, but i don't look it, i look nothing like my family. I'm pretty short and i have really light brown hair with blinding blonde natrural; highlights. My so called friends call me blondey, i like to let them think i'm stupid, it amuses me. My skin is pretty light except in the summer when i tan like crazy. My family is dark, they all have olive skin and there hair is almost black. see? nothing alike

What also makes me diffrent is that i have an IQ of 157, i have photographic memory, and i'm never afraid. I mean of course i gfet scared, but its like the fear is abstract, i never feel it. I also think diffently from alot of people.

I sometimes get these sorta video clip memories in my mind. its not like i'm a black belt in karate, i don't speak a zillion languges, i'm no sharp shooter, and i don't wrestle or anything, but in these flashes, i can. I remeber training in karate, studing and learning to read at age of 2, speking at 7 mounths. But none of thes memories fit with my family. in the flashes i have and older sister, she's blonde like the dad and pretty like the mom. My mother is beautiful, she has long honey brown hair and she speaks russian. this can't be right can it ? No. which makes me thing i made it up.

Now back to my first point. i watch my brothers grow up like the same people here they have no problem with it.. but i'm so diffrent. i think it has somthing to do with my past.

one more thing about me , i love to read, especially fearless series its about a girl named gaia acctully shes alot like ths sister i cultivated in my memories. i hate this town i want to get out of here. i want to kick ass in central park. as Gaia once said I AM LOOKING FOR TROBLE

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btw..karen I love your sig! ^_^

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i wil soon these chapters are huge comparied to my other book

k but POST :) yay.

this is great, really creative. more!
KBG

yayayay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! woot~ my 500th post!!

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Congrats!!!

Come on... Post the next chappy!!! :jumpy:

chapter 2

the biznitch capital of the world

Raquel walked into her room after school early friday after noon it had been snowing so much, that school had let out early. Good thing too, she was sick and tired of sitting in the center of all those biznitches and pretending to be one of them. Especilly when Kathy tried to get her to talk about all the latest gossip flying around the school. Her mind instantly filpped to Steve. Steve the only other person who seemed to hate this life as much as she did , although his abilty to hide it was almost as good as hers. Steve was on the football team, he was one of the most popular guys in the 9th grade, and he was daiting none other than kathy herself.
But he and Raquel were actully really good friends. to tell you the truth , Raquel liked him although she would never admit it to herself or anybody for that matter. she almost automaticly fell into a flash.

Raquel pov
My flashes are getting worse now. I zoned out twice in spanish class, and steve had to poke my with his pen to snap me out of it, now i have to worry about ink poisoning or somwthing. I used to be able to control these things like the first time. I remeber it perfectly , I was six and i had just found this picture of a blonde girl about three years older than me in my parents room. She looked so familiar , but i couldn't place her. I concentrated really hard and BOOM! my first flash.
sitting around a table were four people i was one of them , i was sitting in a high chair and we were all eating broshet. The pretty lady was speaking in russian, the blonde girl was laughing at her father who was quizing her on the 12 deadly pressure points. Then it was over i used to be able to pick up another flash by remebering the end of the one before it. But now....... now they come and go as they please. OH GOD! am i going crazy? Is this all real? what about my famil? i have a weird feeling that i'm going to find out soon, and when i do, i jsut know that life as i know it will never be the same agian. Don't ask me why, but i think there might be more to this than an overly active imagination. If i told my parents about this i know they would send me to a shrink in 2 seconds, but i will NOT let that happen ! I WON"T!!!

Raquel ran down the stairs, through the family room and into the kitchen. she got her coat of the bag if a chair and pulled her gloves off the counter. "mom i'm going out!" she yelled down to the basement where her mom was yelling at the maid for not doing the laundry the RIGHT WAY. "ok, but take your cell phone and come back before it gets dark around 5:00" her mom yelled back. "screw you" Raquel retorted under her breath. God could her mother be any more unreasonable? 'is she even really my mother'? Raquel thought as she slamed the door behind her. she jogged down to mike's house 4 houses down. Mike could be an asshole sometimes, but mostly he was an ok guy. He didn't seemm to care much for the biznitch lifestyle thing, but then agian, he wasn't excatly agianst it either. Raquel had known mike since kindergaten when she had chased him under a table and kissed him on the cheek. He loved to joke about it and say that she scared him for life, but they both knew that it was history. Mike was also the only one who knew about her flashes, she had told hin when they were 8 and she spaced out while they were watching the most boring basketball game ever. she smiled when she heard the familiar thumping of his basketball. Mike was ALWAYS shooting hoops, no matter what time or season it was. the only reason that he was popular was that he was on the basket ball team. They both knew that.
"Hey" she breathed " i had another one of those fla-" she stopped short relizing that someone else was shooting hoops with mike. That someone just happened to be steve. "You had what?" steve asked looking from Mike to Raquel with a killer grin that made her stomach practicly go up in knots. "uh..... nothing its not important" she said staring at Mike hopping her expression said what she needed. "Code red" Mike mouthed to her. Translation: ill come over later, stay over, we'll talk about it. she nodded. "ok i guess i'll see you guys later" she said turning to leave. "hold on" steve said giving up on the best friend secret language thing Raquel and Mike were dishing out. "you wanna play? i mean you always say you can take me to school when i brag about my skills". Raquel smiled steve actually knew her. Really knew her. he knew how to make her luagh, he knew exactly what to say to piss her off. Even though they had only meet in september when school started. "you got it" she smirked at him. "you two verus me?" "come on rocky don't get cocky" stee smriked back using her nickname everyone called her. But he only used when he wanted something from her.
They played, first to 50. Half way through Mike's sister stuck her head out the door. "mike mom wants you in here." she yelled. Mike called a time out and went
inside. Raquel and steve sat on the drive way and waited. steve broke the silence "so.... how long have you and Mike been going out?"he asked. Raquel turned to him with wide eyes "huh?!!" she asked startled. "well you two are obvioulsy VERY close." "cuz he's like my best friend. "i've known him since like kindergarden, and belive me we have NEVER gone out." "sorry" steve said and he actually looked sorry , not like every other guy Raquel knew. "don't be" she answered. Just then Mike came back. "hey i gotta go to my aunts house, i forgot all about it" he said "code yellow" translation: i'll be calling in the middle of the night leave your cell on we'll talk about those flash thingies or whatever.steve just looked at the amused. "ok" Raquel answered. "i gotta go anyway" she said glanceing at her watch " you know who queen cruella gets" She and mike both started cracking up, they totally agreed about her mom. Steve and Raquel moved to the side walk as mike's mom pulled out of the drive way. "have fun" Raquel shoughted "thats likely" mike yelled back sarcasticly making a face.
after the car pulled out of the driveway, Raquel turned to steve " listen i really do have to go. see ya later." she started to alk up the street to her house. "wait" steve jogged to catch up to her fast pace walking. "i'll walk with you" she turned her face to fim and smriked "i'm a big girl i can take care of my self" she told him. "don't i know it." he answered rubbing his cheek, refering to the month before when she puched him for calling her princess prissy bitch. "i wanna talk to you any way" he added as an after though. "fine talk away" she answered not looking at him. "whats up with this coode red code yellow thing you and mike were doing?" he asked "secret language" Raquel answered. He laughed "that much i figured, but you wanna tell me what you were saying.?" Raquel smiled "nope" "oh..... i bet you were talking about how hot you think i am" " yea sure thats it" Raquel replied sarcasticly. "hmmmmmmm...... i'm gonna figure you out Antonietta." he was using her middle name, he knew it pissed her off. but she just looked at him, not saying a word. They made it to her house. "i gotta go in" she told him. "yea" steve answered. he reached put and tucked a peice of her hair that had fallen out of her ponytail behind her ear. she raised one perfectly sculpted eyebrow at him before sliping inside.

steve pov
I think i'm falling for this girl. she's the only one who sees through this facade that i have created for myself. she knows that i hate the lifestyle around here. she knows i really don't love kathy, she knows popularity and sports mean nothing to me. she's amazing...but she belivies that i moved here from north carolina, she doesn't know that they sent me here to watch her to protect her. Hell Gaia and jake were rigth she doesn't NEED protection, but Tom and Vance wouldn't hear of it. The girl is not stupid she knows that she is special. And if i'm not mistaken she is remebering her old life more and more everyday. but when she finds out i'm not Steve Romano, i'm Steve Montone, i work for the CIA, and that she is my assingment she is gonna be pissed off as hell. she puched me when i called her princess prissy bitch. Imagine what she's gonna do now. This girl has a dangerous destiny one where only being reunited with her sister Gaia will she get through it. I have to take her to Gaia. I have to revealmy ture identity. But when i do she's gonna hate me and that going to break my heart. I've fallen for this girl. I've fallen and i can't get up.

FINALLY I FINISHED POSTING CHAP 2!!!!!! YAY!!

You better post the rest of it when you get on later! ;) ^_^

yay so good! post post post

yay! this is super. its wierd, in minnesota we use the word biznitch, biotch, biznatch and snatch all interchangalby. its like reading a narrative of my school
KBG

lol thats cool

i have a question. does anyone know what sam does now like his job? i totally forgot i need it for my fanfic

in the last book that i remember he was like a waiter or a busboy. i'm not sure

k thx

i hope it was right. maybe someone else knows... like nance or someone who has all the books

i hav all da books 2 w/e i just said his job but thx a lot ^_^

ok then

OOo THATS GOOD!!!! POST MORE

aagah! write more before i have a stroke!!!
pease?

YES RAQUEL WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?? POST@!!!!

i will pay you in pretend money if you write! here! here is 10,000$, now write, please?

thats goooooooooooood "rocky" lol...

Raquel!!!

hey all! i fisihed posting chap 2!!!!! its back a page but all of its there sry it took so long it was 6 pages of notebook paper. but now its ther so i'll start 3 soon

Whooo! this is a good story! The Steve POV is midly interesting, Jake's brother huh? lol I wanna hook up!! :jumpy:

lol i want him too...yummy...and then gaia can have ed! o yea

actually i was gonna make him jake's cousin but brother is better and no u can't have him he's mine!! lol and he is a real live person 2 and i spend about 3 housrs a school day with him! lol and he is just like how i wrote about him to cuz he did call me pricess prissy bitch and i DID punch him right in the middle of spanish class!!

lol