Wow, I have finally typed enough on my computer to post my fics. One of them anyways. Its called Shattered Darkness. Hope you like!

Sheniqua walked through the door of her house and came across the usual yelling of her parents and went upstairs.
“I’m not going to take this shit anymore!” she heard her mom, Alex, yelled. Sheniqua heard loud footsteps and the front door slammed.
“Ya bitch!” her dad yelled at the top of his lungs and heard loud footsteps coming up the stairs.
“Joy, my turn...” she thought.
Her door slammed open and hit the wall so hard the house started shaking.
“See what you did? Ya no good bitch!” he yelled at her. “What the hell did I do?” Sheniqua yelled back.
“What did you? Stop acting like your stupid ass mother! What is this?”
He held up Sheniqua’s history test from last week which had a huge big F written on it.
“I did not raise my daughter to get grades like this!” he yelled at the top of his lungs.
“No wonder I turned out so bad, I’m following his footsteps,” she whispered under her breath.
“What did you say?” he asked.
“Nothing.”
“YOU BITCH!” He clenched his fists and took a fast swing right at her and hit her right in the jaw and Sheniqua fell backwards out of the room.
“Perfect,” she thought.
Her dad started coming straight towards her and Sheniqua kicked the door and slammed her dad right in the face. She quickly got up and ran downstairs with blood trailing behind her. Micheal opened the bedroom door and looked angry as ever.

wow............... is Michael her dad? it seems so sad, but good lol, I wanna know what happens next...!!!

yea. i have it written up, but not typed. ill type some of it now. thanks!

Sheniqua kept running and running until she ran out of her breath.
She stopped. She leaned against an alley wall and fell to the ground. She closed her eyes.
Sheniqua was 13 when it all started. Her mom was a psychiatrist. Her dad was a surgeon. They lived in a nice neighborhood in southern California.
It seem like any other normal January day. Sheniqua was doing her homework in the kitchen and Alex was cooking dinner.
The front door slammed open. Michael staggered in the kitchen with a Bud Light in his hands. “Michael?” Alex asked. “You’re home early.”
“BITCHES! GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!” he screamed. “Honey, what’s wrong?” Alex said in a somewhat calm voice.
“Shut the hell up!” the drunk man yelled and punched Alex in the face. She fell to the ground.
Michael started coming after Sheniqua. She got up from the table and backed away.
“Where the hell do you think you’re going?”
He pushed all of Sheniqua’s homework and books off the table and slammed the end of his Bud Light on the table.
Michael started coming after Sheniqua bottle forward.
Sheniqua ran. Michael barely missed her. She got a cut on her arm and blood was gushing out.
“OOMPF!”
Michael fell on the floor. Alex was standing behind him with a bloody nose and a frying pan in her hands.
Alex dropped and grabbed Sheniqua’s hands, grabbed their coats and ran out the front door.

theres more. im typing more now

wow!!!! (that's really all I can say)

do you really like it? i want to see if im good at this story then ill post my other one.

Sheniqua opened her eyes as tears ran down her cheeks. Her arm was bleeding then, her mouth was bleeding now. She closed her eyes again.
After Michael’s first attack, Sheniqua and her mother moved to San Francisco. They stayed there peacefully for about 2 years.
The evening of April 5, 2003, Sheniqua and her mom were eating dinner. The doorbell rang. Alex looked at Sheniqua. “Expecting anyone?”
Sheniqua shook her head.
Alex got up and went to answer the door.
Sheniqua heard her mom talking to someone. Someone familiar. The voices got louder and louder, and they eventually turned into shouts. That’s when she realized who it was. She grabbed the phone. She heard a scream.
She ran out the back door and went to the front of the house. She looked through the window. Her mom was on the floor with a bloody nose.
Sheniqua sneaked in and helped her mom up. She heard distant footsteps getting louder and louder. “Mom, mom,” she whispered. “Get up.”
The door to the hallway opened.

wow.... I like it, I really do, you should keep posting.

Michael looked around the foyer. Nothing. He screamed and rammed his fist into the wall mirror.
Sheniqua heard something crash inside the house as she stood in the dark alleyway next to her house. The front door opened. She hid herself and her mom in the shadows.
Michael walked down the front steps and walked towards Sheniqua and Alex. Sheniqua pilled herself and her mother further back as he walked past them.
She waited a few minutes and laid her mom on the ground and went to see if her father was anywhere to be found.
He was talking to their neighbor, Mr. Smith. She pulled back quickly.
Alex’s eyes jerked open and she lunged up. “Mom,” Sheniqua said coming over to her. “Are you ok?” she whispered.
“I’m fine. Are you ok?”
Sheniqua nodded.
“Where’s Michael?” Alex asked.
“Talking to Mr. Smith.”
“Probably telling him what he’s telling everyone else. That I abuse you and that he should be on a look out for me.”
“Where to?” Sheniqua sighed.
“I’m sorry honey, but for your protection and mine, we have to leave the state this time.”
“Where?”
“Somewhere far and big. Let’s try Chicago for a bit and see how that turns

cool. :)

Good story.But really dark and sad.

yea well, its supposed to be

Oh no....this is sad :(

its supposed to be. let me say this here. I am leaving ff. i may come in occasionally. the only place i am going to post mainly is prolly here to post my stories and maybe to new to the place to welcome people.

This is a great fic.... :D

whoa..wait a minute..ur leaving FF?

:(

thank you mary. and yea im leaving FF. like i said, ill post here to update my story and add more stories just cuz i need to know if theyre good cuz im using htem to get into honors english and i need editors! and i need to know if theyre good. and ill post new to the place area. and ill say what i think on the last book. but i really dont want to stay here anymore just cuz now i know what people think of me so id rather not take their bullshit. i have more to type up. ill post as soon as i can.

After 2 years of living in Chicago, Sheniqua got her license. Her mom went to work as usual and Sheniqua went to school.
One afternoon after coming home from school, the phone rang.
"Hello?" she picked up.
"Yes, is this Sheniqua? Mrs. Alex Ford's daughter?" the other line replied.
"Um, yea"
"This is Dr. Black from the Chicago Hospital. I need you to come down right away."
"Ok. What is it about?"
"It's about your mother. She's been in an accident."
"What kind of accident?"
"I will let you know when you get here"
Sheniqua dropped the phone and ran out the door.
When she got to Chicago Hospital, she asked to see Dr. Ford. A nurse took her down a long bright hallway. They've been walking for a while until they finally reached his office.
Sheniqua stepped in the room. A fat bald man was sitting being an oak desk. He put down a manilla folder .
"Ah, you must be Sheniqua. Please have a seat." he said.
"Yea." she sat down. "Can I ask what's wrong?"
"Your mom was in an accident."
"Well I know that, what happened?"
"Your father came down to your mother's office, and he and your mother started talking."
"Talking about what?"
"Custody of you. Your father implies that your mother is abusive and a drug addict and shouldn't have you. Your mother argued and your father got mad. Brought out a knife and stabbed her several times in the arm. No major injury occured, so your mom will be ok."
"Custody of me? Drug addict? Can I see my mom?"
"Of course."
Sheniqua got up and left.
She asked the front desk lady to take her to her mom.
As they were walking down the long, white hallway, Sheniqua noticed something. There was barely any patients there. There were no operitories. All there was were offices after offices. Sheniqua looked over the nurse's shoulder and looked at the clipboard she was holding. It read:
Patient: Alex Ford BOD:3/7/73 Spouse: Micheal Ford. Room: 7. Reason: Stabbed in arm several times. Not to be released under Micheal Ford's request.
"Not to be released under Michael Ford's request? What?" she thought. Of the many times Sheniqua's been to the hospital and as many times she's filled out forms for hospitals, this one looked nothing like a form you would fill out at a regular hospital. Where was the insurance number? Address? Phone number? Nothing.
They finally came to a door which had the number 7 on it. Sheniqua looked around. There were 9 other doors with numbers on them. The nurse opened the door and let her in.

i love your story. its very relastic! im sad that your leaving, but that is your descion. but im glad that your coming by occansily. keep the good stuff up!

yeah, I love this fic, it's so good! :jumpy:

thanks you guys. yea, ill be on once in a while but not so much as i did when i first joined

that's too bad.... :(

um, yea.

i have writiers block. i have to finish this entire fic before febuary 21. that includes being edited and crap. so i need your help. uh, i dont know what to do. i mean i know whats going to happen but i dont know how to get there but i dont want to give out spoilers to everyone. so if you have an idea, not matter what it is, post it. or if you really can help me, PM and ill let you know whats going to happen!

joshita, this is a great fic!! i love it!! im very sad that u r leaving :( but i guess it is ur choice but its good ur coming occasionally, keep writing!! i hate writers block by the way

yea, i know, i hate it too. but i love ff and i love you guys! you guys are the best!

"Mom!" Sheniqua ran over to her mother. "Sweetheart," she replied wearily. Sheniqua stopped dead in her tracks. "What's going on?" she asked.
"What do you mean what's going on? Your father wants custody of you and wants me dead or in jail."
"No, not that, the hospital."
"What about it?"
"Something's weird. What information did you give to them?"
"Well, just my name. I passed out before I got a chance to tell them what happened, where I live and insurance stuff. Why?"
"Well, they have your insurance number, and they know what happened."
"Well, they might, since I've been at this hospital and they might know what happened 'cause they're doctors. They inspected it and found out what happened."
"How would they know that Dad wants custody of me and the fact it was Dad. And why won't they release you without his permission?"
"What are you talking about?"
"Well the doctor said everything in percision. Meaning, he knows what happened, why it happened, when it happened and so on. And the nurse's form said not to release you without Dad's concent."
"Well your Dad's a doctor. They would listen to him."
"He stabbed you! ITS FRICKEN ATTEMPTED MURDER! HE SHOULD BE IN JAIL. Or at least lose his job and not be able to tell them if they should release you or not."
"Honey, you're in shock, I think you're imangining what you saw."
"WHY WON'T YOU BELIEVE ME?"
"Sweetheart, calm down, even though its attempted murder, he's still a doctor. He wants what's best."
"Best? For us? He wants you DEAD Mom. He abuses us constantly and almost stabbed me with a beer bottle when I was 13. He stabbed you almost to death a few hours ago and you're siding with him? What the hell is wrong with you?"
"Don't say such nonsense. He never tried stabbing you."
"Mom! What's wrong with you? Wake up! What did they do to you?"
"Do what sweetie?"
"Oh my God! I'm leaving! I'm not taking your bull anymore."
Just as Sheniqua was about to leave the Dr. Black came in with a needle in his hands and grabbed her. He got a hold of Sheniqua and put her arms around her back. He inserted the shot in the neck. Sheniqua tried screaming. It wouldn't work. Nothing came out. She slowly, slowly passed out.

great chapter!!

yea but im changing it. i read it, and the end sounds alot liek fearless. big no no

Dont change to chapter.Is good as it is.Is does remind little Fearless,but it is okay.

the chapter is great!

it's not too much like fearless...

yea i know, but if i do it, it going to prevent on whats going to happen. cuz its part one of a trilogy

ok...

well i have it, but im not going to type anything up till im done with it unless im really bored so its going to be awhile before i post again cuz im going repost EVERYTHING. again. im almost done with it so it wont be long