My friend Jorge died just on Tuesday.... my cousin went out with Jorge and since my cousin Alexandra is my best friend, I got a long with him like if he was my very own brother..... But they found his body early last tuesday.... :( on the middle of the road.... he had been raped and then shot by his own gun in the head 3 times and then 7 times in his chest. It's really sad right now, I've tried to distract myself so much but I can't keep from crying, this litte smiley :( can't express how feel and look right now. But, I'm sure I'll get through, but I made a poem for him anyway.....
Try. Express. Describe. Inside.
Rest in peace my friend,
I wrote this poem,
To try and express,
But no words can describe,
What I feel inside.
My heart is broken,
And my mind is shattered,
I wrote this poem,
To try and express,
But no words can describe,
What I feel inside.
I feel like there’s…
A hollow opening in my chest,
And a rock inside my brains,
I wrote this poem,
To try and express,
But no words can describe,
What I feel inside.
I’m falling down,
My knees are weak,
Tears are going down my cheeks,
I’m sobbing and it’s hurting,
But I want you here with me….
Rest in Peace Jorge
Ohhhh Karen Im soooo sorry, thats so awful! I mean I know that sorry will never be enough but well one of my best friends died in cancer... so i kinda get a part of what you are feeling. Although I can tell that you are a strong person, try to stay strong!
Im really sorry!
And that poem was great! It was awesome and I love it! I have written thousands of poems and they all reflect my soul but yours was just great!
Sorry again... :(
thanks, I've been keeping busy on the computer, trying to ignore some stuff at shcool and everything around him.
im soo sry karen, i dont know how u feel but i hope u feel better over time
i love ur poem (on a lighter note) i love how u repeated it over and over again
karen im so sorry..
i know hw u feel i found out my auntie was shot..
im so sorry sweetie..but there isnt nething u can do..u just gotta live with it...
