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Title: My Own Little World


EdFargosDehSweetie!! - November 15, 2004 03:25 AM (GMT)
Kay, Im not that good at writing poems but this is about a guy, and I was bored while babysitting .. So this comes from a napkin :D

My Own Little World

In my world it either rained or it poured
My soul blocked the light from ever shining through
The constant darkness was sickening
You were my only savior
You removed me from my world
You introduced me to a world I never knew existed
That new world was full of colour and light
I could see and you were the reason for that
Then I was shoved back like something nobody cared about
The colour was gone and once again I was blind
I was alone in my own world without you
The rain soaking through my soul
Blocking out the light once again

Lady_Montone - November 15, 2004 07:09 AM (GMT)
OMG APRIL!!!!! THAT IS SOOOO GOOOOD!!!!!!

Robin - November 15, 2004 10:52 AM (GMT)
Thats really good! :D

Edroxmyworld - November 16, 2004 12:40 AM (GMT)
great job april, i love it

EddieBear2004 - November 16, 2004 02:18 AM (GMT)
nice! ^_^




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