Hey!

You might have seen that I have made a poll about Darkness (my fic) and I have written a chapter that I didn't think was that good so I have deleted it.
Now I have absolutely no idea what I am going to write, its completely black!
So I need your help!
For a moment I considered giving it up.
Give me your ideas of what I am going to write about, just to get me back on track..lol!
And it can be anything!

Hi,Louise! Dont stop writing Darknesit is really good story.But that chapter you deleted,that really was too depressing.I am not sure what you should write about next,maybe something about seth go to trial ?

Yeah I was thinking about that! But I don't know...

Maybe there should just be a small betrayl or something before Seth's trial...like Susan betrays her or something ,.....or maybe that serial killer guy the parents are fighting should be introduced...I dunno, just suggestions...Maybe the srial killer could be someone she knows, but not Micheal or David or anyone like that.

Those are all good ideas Mary, I have thought about that a bit! And I might write something like that...

I think there should be a smaller betrayal, like no more raping, but maybe one of the girls could be talking about her behind her back.

I dont think you really need a betryal, but maybe she could have a bad dream about a betryal and try to push michael away or something. And maybe he'll fight to keep her or maybe he won't depends on how he really feels about her. I do like the new character though, but I don't think he should be a love interest. Maybe he could be the one that opens her eyes and makes her see the Michael really does love her or something. However, I also think she should be going to counsoling. Most people that experience what she did generally go to some sort of consoling. Seth's trial would be good too, and thats why she should be going to consoling so she has the strength to go through with it. Anyway, thats just my opinion.

Yeah I've thought about her going to consoling I have...but I dont know how I'm gonna start now..its like the flaw's gone,dont know about the new character though...
But I might go with Mary's ideas something about the serial killer or Seth, but it might be hard to write about the serial killer since it's only Coll's point of view!

Maybe you change the point of view, but just for the serial killer.

Ohhhhhh thats a great idea!!!!

I think maybe you could have something about the serial killer because if not you may be leaving the whole threatening phone call thing untouched. Also, definetly the trial. Betrayl would be a good idea. Like I said before, the story is amazing. You are very creative. I like your writing. I am with the rest of em saying MORE MORE lolz



Tomboy

Thanx...yeah I think I'm gonna go with the Serial Killer thing...something else for a while..I have to take that up!!!

Yeah that sounds good. You know that I am gonna be spending another 7 hours reading your other stories. They sound really good. David started me and now I am like addicted to your writing.



Tomboy :drool1:

Ohhhhhhhhh thanx...then u can tell me what u think! Hehe..lol

I am telling you so far Louise I LOVe your writing. I am becoming really obsessed. I am probably gonna read a little tomorrow so if I am on but not talking you kow what I am doing lolz


Tomboy
(soon I am just gonna start putting my real name, its becoming a bad habit when I type letters lolz)

Hehe...thanx! Yeah for the moment I am stuck with Darkness so I'm working a bit on my others! But thanx...I just wrote all of this for fun didn't really think that anyone would think that is was good! Lolz...

The serial killer thing is a gr8 idea!