hi1 I try does this work.Timeline begins somewhere alias second season and Fearless book 18 whereabout.

Chapter one
"criminals in both coast"

L.A. march 2001
in Cia headquarters

"I got this message few days ago.Its from agent Moore from east coast.He try to stop Loki and need help.i got few messages before that,he wanted me to help figure out what Loki might up to this time.Now he would like me and Sydney help him in new york.Jack said to sydney and other.
"Hold on,who agent Moore and who is Loki? you may have spoke to them sometimes,but i dont remember what.Sydney wondered.
"i have heard about Loki,and agent Moore,loki is a terrorist,dangerous criminal in worst kind.Atleast as dangerous as sloane,maybe even worst.And Agent moore is spcialized anti covert terrorist agent,know crime syndicates too.he is genius with codes,so i have heard.how you know him,Jack?
michael Vaughn asked.

"i met him in mission few years back,he helped me once.We have sort of helped each others after that,we have similar problems and same kind of working area.

Most we sent messages,not meet.and Loki,he is verydangerous criminal,he have his own crime syndicate, its called Organisation.Basically its like alliance,Loki has run that now maybe twelwe year,before that is has Russian leader.
Russians founded that back in was that in seventies? i dont remember that for sure.they said that Oliver Moore was in Cia before he turned criminals way.Jack said.
"Another sloane and another alliance,that all we needed! how we could help Agent Moore,we have our crime syndicate problem i this coast.Sydney said.

"Tom Moore has a daughter that you might like,she a lot like you itelligent,and martial art master.She needs help,althoght she dont admit it.i dont know,how could help him.I have met Loki only once,and he scared even me .That guy is so evil,and crel.Jack said.
Gotta stop for today.Tell me what do liked about,mary and Louise.Bye fornow.

Very good job! interesting first chapter! :hi:

Yeah that sure was interesting, very good though! ;)

Hi1 Thanks,Mary and louise.it may take some time update both my stories,though.i guess in turn,when I have time.I just watched Alias episode Breakingpoint .That was really good.Jack is so ,i dontknow,I have seen everythigh,nothigh suprise me anymore,but i am not as tough as I pretend to be-charter,kind of Tom and Lokis charachters halfway.Does thisforum has Alias tread?.I shouldnt surf in net so much,but this is kind of addictive,lot more interesting than my school works,my thesis and other homework.Can you be Fearless and Alias addict? LOL!
Gotta stop soon for tonight.

I'm a fearless and Alias addict.. :lol: Oh yeah, and where did Jack meet Loki?

Hi,Mary! Jack met Loki in sometime when he was pretending to for work for SD-6 and Allliance,Alliance made bisnes with loki,I write about that in next chapter.

Cool. Could you write a flashback to when Jack met Loki? Please wrtite th enext chapter soon! :hi:

Yeah this is really good! :hi:

Hi,Louise and Mary My story seems to interesting you,thats good.I havent thought how exactly Jack met Loki,and what happened,only in general.I try to continue,lets see where it goes.

Chapter 2
"Loki and alliance,rivals incrime"

How did you met Loki,isnt he do his crime in east coast and not here in L.A?
Vauhgn wondeder.
I was in some SD-6 gig,how else.Loki and Allliance has allways rival,they barely get alone,both sides think,that is has one crime syndicate too many.Idea both has similar,make money spy intellige,weapons,drugs and terrorist,every kind crime.Both have ex agents that has change side.But they benefit each other,sell intelligence and weapons each other,so they stand each others.Alliance made bisnes with Organisation already back in eighties when leader was Yuri something,or so Sloane told,i dont remember that good,expect they got better along with him than Loki.Even Irina Derevko might have something to with Organisation and Yuri back then.

The Alliance had some promblem with Loki and SD-3 in New york and Sloane sent me with me to find out more about Loki,he thouhgt that if anyone could figure him out,that would be me.Jack said,remembering.

jack vs.Loki,Quite a couple,part one"
It was four years ago when I met Loki,Sloane sent to me to gather intel about him and buy some illegal weapons to afganistan,too Jack was remembering.I already had some infrormation about Oliver Moore,none of it good.Loki had been underground for year,but now he was back.Loki was dangerous,ruthless and cruel,he had used to have his way,and kill anybody who disagree. So,perfect bisnespatner to Alliance ,Jack thouhgt sarcastically,except that he wanted Sd-3 out of New york, or he wanted to buy it. a bought to aliance sell,this was unheard of.That much money even Loki doesnt have,jack thought,or who know.
he met Loki in old warehouse downtown.Jack wacthed at Loki,trying to figure him out. A handsome scandinavish looking men in midforties,that loki was.Handsome,nice to look,but devious and cruel,Jack thought the saga that Oliver had picked up his alias,loki was a shape shifter and liar,name was fitting,allright.
"hello,Jack,so you have sloane right hand,I have heard that you could be a tough guy and brilliant strategist,too.Loki said.he smiled,but eyes were cold as ice.
I have heard a lot about you too,Jack answered.And I didnt like what I heard,Jack thought.
Thats all for now.I know it is little short.To be continued later...

It's goood, plz continue! ;)

Hi! impatient much,Louise,lol.I know that was too short.I will,i just have to think about it first,how i am going to continue,it doesnt goes in five minutes even me.Have you complety ended write your Fearless fanfic,was that last chapter?I would like to read more about it.

Yeah I know...and that wasn't my last chapter! I'm just to lazy to write...I'm focusing on my darkness right now...but I'll have to wríte on Loving You eventually!

hey i love alias...this a great cross over..........carry on

Hey,Fearless Shaz! You havent comment my stories before. Nice to know that there are others alias fan too,well, Mary and Louise are too.What season in Alias they show in England?
I continue story when I have time,gotta go doing my homework soon.

Hey! Mary,i did contienued my story yestarday,but so shortly,thats is hardly woth mentioning.I have to think about flashback scene with Loki and Jack,not sure what it will be yet,but I am going to write it..I write more when I have time,now I am going go to eat dinner somewhere soon,I am hungry like wolf,lol.

well sydney im in england and well alias used to come on but then it swithced of...but luckily on sky dey show alias..im on season 3

Please update

Hey! Mary,I know that my second chapter was too short,did you even saw that? I continue as soon as i can,Mary,dont be impatient.I have whole winter to write stories,while waiting Fearless FBI series,lol.I do have others school work to write,although it seems,at i live in this forum nowadays.Maybe I am netaddict,not good.Here is midnight,I should be sleeping,cant get sleep.Bye,Bye.

:hi: Goood one!

Good job!

Hey! Thanks,Mary.I continue later,someday.

ooooooo that was intense ..more plz

hey! thanks,Shaz,i will continue later sometime.

Hi! I havent wrote my fanfics for few days,I have been too busy in school.I have some ideas about this one,but havent had time to write them here.I tey continue story maybe,tomorrow night,if I have time.Atleast Mary ,Louise and Shaz seemed to like it.

Yes, I love it...

Hi,Louise! Well,atleast you are online now,little slow today.Maybe because Fearless is in last book now,people dont have much to write.
I wonder where superactive newbies david and Tomboy went,I guess starting eagerness is milder.
I have one friend Nina who might like this site,too.She has little Gaia like attitude,dont mess with me,she can some martial arts and is very good in English.She havent read much Fearless books hought,only 12.But i showed her backcover in the books,and she lauughed some of them."Yeah,the good news is ,she found her,but bad new is he is in Siberia.man,that is bad.All right! "
We discussed in Finnish,but that was the idea.Well,I have to ask ,if she would want to join to forum.I have to only find her phone number first,lol.I have been a member almost four months now, time goes fast. I try to continue story tomorow if I have time.Gotta stop for tonight soon.

That sounds cool, I have really gotten in to this writing mode, but I like writing non-fearless more! Its just very fun and I love getting replies..lol!
i will continue my fanfics later though... ;)

please update! :hi:

Hi,Mary Itried to continue story but thn i go back prewious place and its dissappeared,damn it!
New try.

Chapter 4

"would you like something to drink or eat? or should we go right to the bisnes.Loki asked to Jack.
2Nothing for me,thanksLets get down to the bisnes.So,you have machine guns,that you would like to sell. And you also want to buy SD-3 cell.Jack said
I think you are here because SD-3,guns can some body closer to come buy.You want to know why I want to buy SD-3 and convice me,that it is not agood idea. Loki said.He stared at jack challenge in his eyes.

That guy is smart,He is very intelligent,but powerhungry control freak,that allways want more money and power.How I hate this charade! To pretend to be rogue thug,to be double agent,to work for arwin sloane.Someday,I will bring him down,iI will bring Loki down,too. But not today.I play my part to hilt,i allways do,Iam so god good topretend,that sometimes,I dont know who I am.I am not a killer and thug,but i am not all good,either,I am something of between..Jack thougt.gotta stop for tonight.

good job!! :hi:

Yeah, good job Outi! :hi:

Hi!Thanks,Mary and Louise! I try to write this fanfic when I have time.Louise,did you get my PM yesterday? I atleast tried to send it to you,not so sure where it really go,or did it go anywhere.

Yeah i got it...just haven't had the time to answer! I'll update Loving you today though...

Hey! time to continue shortly.

Chapter 5

"you cant buy SD-3.Its not for sale.Jack said to Loki.
Everythign is for sale,only prize is negotiable.Loki answered.

Some of Alliance men has thought about that way,too.Some others said that to loki shouldnt sell any part alliance.
"Even if it is,you dont have afford to buy it.Its worth over 200 million dollars,that much money you dont have".Jack said.
Thats right,I dont,maybe I could buy the quarter of it.Loki said.

Some of Alliance say ,that they dont sell that for anyone,least of you.Some of them hate you.They thouhgt that you are a threat and if you go too far,you should be terminated.Jack said.he stared at Loki,wondering what he might answer.

Loki laughed codly."I just love to way Alliance think,mutual distrust,huh? I dont like all of them and they dont like me.But we bear each other,so far.Eliminate me,not easy thought.
Suddenly Oliver had a gun in his hand.I am pretty good to shoot,he said.And even better to fight,he added.
He dropped the gun and leaped Jack ,trying to kick him to head,but stopped movement before it connected.Like you see,I am pretty fast,he said.
Jack have to admitt that,thought.Hes intel for Loki said that martial arts where one of Olivers stronges skills.He was strong and fast,and could take many men down at his deadly kicks.Unlike Loki martial arts wasnt Jacks strongest point,.He could fight,but more traditional style.I am not nearly as good as Loki is,he thought.
"So i have heard.But I come here to make bisnes ,not to sparring".Jack said.
To be continued later...Gotta go dinner now.

oooooooooh nice..................very nice.i rpefer loki 2 jack..

:D Great chapter!

Hey! Thanks for comments shaz and Mary! did you read last chapter,Louise?I try to continue,but very shortly.

Chapter 6
"another twin"

"Thats right,so lets make bisnes,then."Loki said.He and Jack talked about guns and buying part of Sd-3 some more.Finally.they come to conclusion,that if Loki really was going to buy apart of SD-3,he had a week to get 55 million dollars.That kind of money even Loki doesnt have lying around,Jack thougt. Or who know,anything is possibly with him.
Jack took some guns with him,for a sample,what Loki had.He left and Loki left,too,in another direction.
Little later,on his way out of New York,Jack noticed someone was following him.He tried lost trailers,but couldnt.when they got closer to him,he was puzzled one them look just like loki,but didnt he go another way? why would he be following me,id he know that i am double agent,how could that be?

"pull over right now,the driver in another ordered.Jack didnt want to obey,but he was curious,what was going on.So he did .If you try assassinate me,Loki,I would thought you wouldcome up something little more smarter than this.he said to men that was walking to him.
But he doubted that was to case,this is not Loki,he look to same,but he has different clothes and different men with him.So,this must be Lokis twin,I didnt find much about information about him.
He has many work place,offially he work for UN,he make decoding programs with computer,but I think it isnt true,anymore than that I work for Jenkinns airflight,Jack thought.
To be continued...gotta stop now.

Great update!

Cool chapter. Jack meets Tom!!

Hi! thanks,Mary and Louise!