hey. i wrote a story, i hope you like it, i have no clue what to write after this chapter, so pleez gimmie ideas. thnx.

She stepped into a freezing cold room.it reminded her of a hospital, painted a bright white color with fluorescent lighting.
"H...Hello?" she said, breaking the silence, "i...is anyone here?" she looked around the room and saw a chair, a window and a painting. she walked over to the painting, it was of a young man, about 27, she guessed, he had a nice squared jaw and ice blue eyes. She cautiously reached out and touched his cheek. A hand was placed on her shoulder and shivers ran down her spine. she turned around quickly grabbing the hand and twisting it. She saw ice blue eyes.


"Ohmigod!" Crissy Kerner screamed. Jade laughed.
"stop laughing, you know i can't take your horror stories, Jade!" Crissy said slapping jade's arm playfully and smiling.
"Can i finish?" Jade asked.
"no, you can wait 'till i fall asleep. then tell everyone else your story!" Crissy said, crossing her arms.
"OK,ok, i can wait." Jade answered, smiling proudly. The door bell rang.
"PIZZA!" everyone screamed in unison. Jade's sister, Gia, hopped up and ran to the door at top speed, she quickly pulled the door open and smiled at the delivery boy.
"Hi, Ed" she said dreamily.
"Hi Gia" he said in the same dreamy tone. Gia kissed him on the cheek shyly.
"ok, ok, you two love bird have fun, as long as i get free pizza out of it" Jade laughed, grabbing the warm pizza out of Ed's hands. she raised it up high and dropped it hard on the floor near everyone's feet.
"dig in" she declared. Ed and Gia walked in with their hands all over each other and staring into each others eyes.
"ahh, young love" Crissy laughed. as they walked by Gia kicked her shin. "HEY" she screamed, then she turned around and made kissing noises. Jade put her hands over her mouth and tried not to laugh as crissy continued kissing a pillow, it didnt work though, jade cracked up laughing anyway.
"ok, ok, everyone just chill out and step away from the pillows!" Ed interrupted. Jade put her hands back over her mouth laughing under her breath. "oh, so you think its funny, eh?" He continued, "May I?" he asked Gia. Gia put her hands up,
"be my guest" she answered. Ed pounced on jade and tickled her fiercely, jade picked up a pillow and started hitting him with it,
"g...get..o..off!" she said between laughs. crissy put down her pillow and started laughing infectiously. then she got up and jumped onto them, pinning down Ed. Jade and crissy looked at each other, and then they grabbed pillows and pounded him with them. Gia fell on the floor laughing
"Ed got beat up by two little girls!" she screamed, giggling.
"hey we aren't little!" Crissy demanded.
"ATTACK!" Jade screamed, jumping off of ed and tackling Gia.
"not fair, not fair!" gia screamed from somewhere in the mess. Ed laughed more.
A young girl named Raven came out of the bathroom upstairs, seeing the mess, a hint of a smile appeared on her face. She came down quietly and sat down on the couch. Jade looked up at her.
"You leave for 3 minutes and all hell breaks loose, huh?" Jade smiled at her. a smirked flashed on Ravens face, but went away before anyone else noticed it. Raven was 14, younger than the rest of the girls, but she had lived more than any of them. She lived in a small, run-down house, and she was orphan, she had a younger brother, Kyle and an older sister, Tara, she never talked, she never smiled, if a teacher called on her in school, she would just glare at her. Teachers soon learned that there was no getting through to her. Even though it wasn't known to many people, she was very smart, but the kids at her school just thought she was a snob. she had jet black hair, and resembled an older version of Wendy from the Addams Family.
Jade and Gia's mother came in,
"ok,ok, you can stop now, you are going to roll over the pizza, or hurt someone!" she said with a smile. She looked over at Raven, who was biting her nails. Raven looked up quickly and stopped biting her nails, she blinked. Jade's mom smiled, nodded her head slightly and walked out of the room. Jade sat up, breathing heavily, holding her side, and laughing,
"it....it hurts to breath!" she declared, laughing. Jade got up and sat next to Raven, putting her arm around her. crissy sat on the other side of her, breathing more heavy than jade, and laughing harder. The door bell rang again.
"hey mom, did you order more pizza?" Jade yelled.
"no, dear" came the answer. Jade shrugged and got up, answering the door.
"hey, Ed here?" Two guys asked. Jade smirked.
"Ed, why did you invite THEM?" she asked turning around pointing with her thumb. Ed hopped up and came to the door.
"hey!" he said, "come on in."
"you this is our house." Jade said.
"oh come on, Jade, you know you love us!" one of the guys said. It was Kurt, he had a playfull nature and had a smile that could lighten up any mood. Even Raven's, sometimes. He had nice brown hair that was highlighted blonde at the top, it was usually messed up. The other guy was Kirby, Kurt's twin brother. Kirby looked a lot like him but some things were different. Kirby's nature was different, he was playful, but he usually just kept to himself, he did what Kurt did, followed Kurt's lead. Kirby had beautiful brown eyes, and Kurt had blue ones. Kirby was more of a romantic than Kurt.
Raven blushed as she looked up at them. Crissy jumped up and messed up Kurt's hair.
"of course she loves you!" Crissy laughed, "who doesn't?" she said more quiet, blushing and staring up at his eyes. Kurt smirked and pried her off of his arm. Ed sat down beside Gia, and put his arm around her, she snuggled comfortably into his chest. Kurt sat down between jade and crissy, cracking jokes and laughing crazily. Kirby sat down quietly next to raven. Raven blushed and hid her red cheeks with her hair.
"OHMIGOD!" Crissy screamed when Kurt continued to say jokes "thats SOOOOO funny!"
Crissy wasn't a prep, and she was only ditzy around boys, but around only jade and raven and sometimes gia, she was serious and kept any secrets, she was a good friend.
Crissy was 15 and she was darn proud, Jade had just turned 15, and Gia was 16. Raven, as was said earlier, is 14, Kurt and Kirby are both 16, and Ed had just turned 17.
As Ed and Gia were flirting, Kirby and Raven exchanged blushes, and Kurt made jade and Crissy giggle, the power went out. Crissy screamed and clung to Kurt. Raven almost grabbed Kirby's hand but then she stopped herself. Jade jumped up and ran to her room to get a flash light. Gia fake-gasped and used it as a great excuse to cling to Ed. Jade came down with a flashlight and several glow sticks and candles. Jade's mom ran into the room with several flashlights, too.

Gooooooooooooood! That was so good, u have to keep writing! I loved it, and I AM updating my fic hopefully today!!!!
Keep going with your story! :hi:

i think its cute, plz keep going

sry, but im changing it into a semi- horror story, but not yet heres the next chapter:

"ok, everyone can relax." Jade anounced. She handed out flashlights and glowsticks to everyone.
"you know, you can get off of him now" she said to Crissy about kurt. Jade smiled.
"so...so i got scared...is that agianst the law?" she murmured. Jade laughed a little. Kirby smiled at Raven and she blushed agian.
"is there some romance in the air? jeez am i the only one not love-struck?" Jade teased.
"no, your not the only one, im not love-struck" Kurt said, giving a sympathetic smile toward crissy. He stood up and sat near kirby.
"although i don't think thats the case with my LITTLE brother here." Kurt said, he smiled and nugged kirby. Kirby blushed slightly and looked at raven.
"im 3 minutes younger than him and he wont let me forget it..." he mumbled. Raven's eyes lit up, but she didnt smile, she scooted slightly closer to him.
"Gia! Ed! Why aren't you two talking...?" Kurt asked suspisiocly. he flashed his light on them. "aha! you two naughty kids..."
"what? we aren't doing anything..." Gia said, smiling.
"riiiight, you cant fool me, but whatever..." Jade laughed.
at that moment someone screamed.
"whoa...who was that?"Gia asked. Jade walked into the next room, flashing her flashlight everywhere.
"hello? mom? Are you ok? Did you fall? What happened? Mom?" Jade asked the empty room, but no one answered.
"mom?!" Gia asked walking up behind Jade, "where are you?"

ahhh!! hurry write more its good i wanna find out wat happens

:o What happened to the mom!!?!?!

Gia and Ed.. HAHAH :D

AHHH THE SUSPENCE! great story! EDDY BOI IS IN IT! YEY! And gaia is ALMOST in it lol!

Keep going! I'm looooooving it! :D

lol, sry but u dont find out what happened the mom YET. hehe. anyway, chapter 3 gets a little but more serious, but it won't be serious through the entire story, i want to put some humor in it heres chapter 3....

Raven's eyes widened.
"are you parents really gone?" kurt asked.
"look for a note, maybe they went shoppin, or something..." Crissy said. Jade walked into the room.
"how am i supposed to find the note without light?" she asked. Just then the lights came back on, crissy jumped with surprise.
"looks like your wishes come true, Jade" Kurt said, standing up and walking into the room with them. Jade stopped in her tracks.
"wh--what happened?" she said. Forks and spoons were spread across the floor, plates and glasses were broken, cups were cracked, and food was spread across the floor and smeared on the walls.
"jeez, i didnt hear anything in here, and it would be pretty hard to do all this without making noise, espechially in the dark!" Crissy said, her voice quivering. Ed shot up and stood beside Gia, trying to calm her down.
"I can't believe this...Mom and Dad don't have any big rivials, nobody hates us. at least no one hates us this much...whats happening?" Gia said, ignoring Ed's attempts to sooth her. Kirby got up and walked into the room, ignoring the things spread accross the floor.
"I looked in here, when i heard the screaming, none if this was here...how is this possible?" Jade pondered.
Raven just sat there, her eyes wide, she looked almost scared, like a deer in the headlights, she gulped.
"MOM?!" Gia tried agian. She ran into her parents' room, screaming, "mom!! dad!! where are you?!" Ed followed her. a few seconds later, they walked back into the kitchen, Gia was crying, Ed was holding her tightly.
"It'll be ok, we will find your parents, everythings going to be ok..." Ed was whispering.
"you mean they aren't down there?!" Jade asked, running toward Ed and Gia. Ed shook his head. Jade bit her lip. Raven calmly stood up. She walked into the kitchen, picking up peices of glass and throwing them away.
"wh--what is she doing?" Crissy asked.
"Why is she cleaning, we have more important things to do,like call the police!" Kurt said. Raven turned toward Jade. Jade looked up at her.
"what?" She asked. Raven cleared her throat.
"Don't panic. Everything will be alright. Now it's time for me to calm you down." She said in a clear, but quiet voice. Crissy gasped.
"how can i calm down?! my parents might be dead!" Jade yelled.
"Criminals can smell fear. They like fear. Espechially murderers. No matter what, if your scared of them, they win ,you lose. Game over." Raven said.
Raven turned on her heels but kept talking, "obviously, the criminal is here. in this house. hiding. Let's show him or her how brave we are."
Kirby was the first one to bend down and pick up half of a plate. Then Kurt. Then Jade, her eyes filled with tears. Crissy got out some Windex and started cleaning the food off of everything.
"you ok?" Ed asked Gia. Instead of answering, Gia bent down and picked up a hand full of spoons. Ed followed her, picking up broken glass.

she talked :o wow .. and it seems like Raven knows what shes talking about

Wow, it's soooo good! Keep going! :hi:

lol, thnx, im writing the next part now, it'll be up soon

yay!! its really good and wow raven does seem to know her stuff keep going!!!

That's good Hanna, I'm updating my fic soon too! I have written three chapters now just have to put them up! Though I'm having an essay tomorrow so I don't know if I'm gonna be able to. But I really think your fic is cute...and exciting. :D

thnx! heres the next chapter it'll get pretty interesting sooner or later...lol, here u go:

Everyone, scared and broken, finished cleaning. Jade managed a fake smile.
"What now?" She asked in a high, quivering voice.
"we all have to stay in the same room, we can't split up, i've seen way to many horror movies not to know that. anyone who ventures off alone dies." Cassie said.
"has anyone called the police yet?" Gia asked quietly.
"no, now that we've cleaned, they wouldnt have any evidence or clues or anything." Kurt said, looking at Raven.
"well we can't just sit here and do nothing! my mother is missing!" Gia said, trying not to cry.
"i understand that, but what the hell are we supposed to do?" Kurt said, getting angry.
"wow, i've never seen you mad, Kurt, i don't like it..." Cassie said in a quiet voice. Kurt looked down at his feet.
"There is a kidnapper or something in this house, we have to get out." Jade said, changing the subject.
Raven nodded.
"ok, ill go get some stuff out of my room." Jade said, her and Gia stood up.
"no." raven said suddenly, "not alone at least, we all have to go to your room, like cassie said, we can't split up, not even for a moment." Everyone stood up and headed up to Jade's room first. She grabbed a few of her belongings, she tried to get clothes but raven stopped her.
"we can't bring to much, bring only the essentials. you won't need clothes. we need to go to a house." she said. Jade nodded and took out the stuff in her bag, she got a smaller bag and put a jacket, a toothbrush, a lighter, and a small blanket in it. She put on her tennis shoes, and grabbed her purse, which ahd money, a hairbrush, a small mirror, eyeliner, and chapstick, and gum in it. she put her purse across her chest and swung her small bag over her shoulder.

Then they went to Gia's room. Gia grabbed a small back pack with a panda on it. She stuffed a toothbrush, a hairbrush, a mirror, and gum in it. then she grabbed her small shoulder purse that had make up, and money in it. she put on her boots and they headed out the door.
"don't look back. That only makes it hard to leave." Raven suggested.
Their life as regular teens were over. Now they had to live a completely different life.

omg whoa, that really sux
keep writing!! i wanna find out wat happens

I already read that lol

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh, Hanna that was so good, keep going! :D

ok, this chapter isnt completely done yet, but i've been over at my friend's house for a couple days, so i decided not to keep you guys waiting:

The gang walked to their cars.
"we will have to split up here, no way am i leaving my car here to get smashed or stolen by some criminal." Kurt said.
"ok, umm... Gia, and I will go in Ed's car...Kirby and Crissy can go with Kurt, and where would that leave Raven?" Jade pondered.
" Jade, you seems to have a handle on this, ill go with Kurt and Kirby" Raven said. Kirby smiled slightly. Jade nodded.

"well...if we are going to drive, where are we gonna drive to?" Kurt said.
"ill direct you, Kurt, i think i can get there without getting lost..." Raven said " and as for you, Ed, just follow us."
"ok." Ed said.
"you THINK you can get WHERE without getting lost?" Crissy said, worried. Raven smirked a bit. They got into their cars and Raven told Kurt to go left.
"ok, there will be a turn up here, go right." Raven said.

"wow, when she said 'follow us' it sounded easier than this!" Ed said, jerking the wheel to the right. Jade smirked a bit.

Kurt's car pulled up to a brown house sitting in the middle of no where. It had a small chimney and didnt have a lot of gras sin the front yard. it was very small.
"Where are we?" Crissy wondered out loud.
"we are at our stopping point. This is my house." Raven said.

It's great, it's awesome, it's cute and I want MOOOORE! Love it, Hanna! :D

write more!! write more plz!!!

ok, not much happens in this chapter but here u go:

A little boy with curly brown hair came out. At first he looked happy when raven came out of the car,but then, seeing all the other people, he looked incredibly frightened and ran to raven, hiding behind her leg.
"It's ok, Kyle. These are my friends." Raven whispered, bending down and putting her arm around his waist. "this is my little brother, Kyle, he's a bit shy." She announced
"must run in the family..." Crissy said under her breath, hearing her, jade jabbed her in her stomach. "ow!" crissy squealed, giving a nasty look to jade.

"My big sister,Tara, will be home from her job soon. Jade and Gia, you two can stay with me, but for the rest of you, if you want to stay here you should really call and tell your parents." Raven said to them.
She led them inside. There was a big messy book shelf made of wood. Across from it was a small couch with no particular color. Beside the bookshelf was a wooden chair, a small table with a green cloth over it, and a black lamp on it. The only thing seperating the kitchen from the living room was that the carpet ended and tile began. In the kitchen was a small table with yet another bright green table cloth on it. there was a small white sink. Ontop of the white counters were brown wooden cabinets. between both of the rooms was a narrow hallway with a brown carpet. there were 3 rooms and one closet back there. on the other side was a small bathroom.

"wow. i've never been here before. it's very homey." Jade said politley. Just then they heard a car pull up on the unpathed driveway.
"sissy" Kyle said, pulling on Raven's shirt sleeve. "Tara is home." he whispered to her.
Tara walked in but then backed up a step in surprise when she saw all the people sitting around the house.
"why didn't you tell me we were going to have guests over RAVEN? the house is a mess!" Tara said. Raven took tara into a seperate room and told her what had happened.
"so they really need our help. you remember how it was...so confused and lost, and trying not to show it." Raven ended. Tara's eyes had filled with tears, but none had fallen. It was from remembering, and still feeling the pain.
" of course i remember, Raven. And of course i'll let them stay. But what about the ones with parents... we don't have enough room for them, and thier parents must be worried sick about them. I know i am about you." Tara said, stroking Raven's hair.

"So...can we stay? If not that's ok, i mean, i'm sure...i'm sure we can stay somewhere else." Gia offered.
" no! of course you can stay here!" Tara said.

Veeeery good as always ;)

I've read all that to! lol

omg thats soo sad
write more plz!!! plz!!

next chapter:

Everyone decided to stay the night with them. After midnight, Raven came in to check on Gia and Jade, having a feeling that they weren't asleep. She slowly opened the door, making sure she wasn't making any noise. Gia was curled up in a tight ball, underneath Ed's arm and directly beside Jade. She was crying, and Jade had her hand on her shoulder trying to comfort her. Ed was looking down at her with sad eyes, saying "shhh, everything's going to be ok." Raven walked in slowly and sat beside the group of them, not saying a word. Jade looked up at her with sympathetic eyes. Raven half-smiled and mouthed "i remember."

In the morning, Kyle brought everyone toast, eggs and a glass of orange juice for breakfast.
"thank you." Gia and Jade said in unison, Gia's eyes were red from crying. Tara sat down between Gia and Crissy.
"The first night is the hardest, but your parents aren't gone. we can still get them back to you. we WILL get them back to you." She whispered, half-smiling but with sad eyes. A little later, Kurt confronted Tara alone.
"how can you say that we will? all of us were sad, crissy cried, Gia cried, everyone cried at one point or another. Even if they won't admit it. We have no clues, we have no suspects, he have nothing." Kurt said, gulping.
Tara looked at the ground. "That doesn't mean we should crush their last bit of hope." She said and walked away.

Kurt walked in with the others and sat down between Crissy and Kirby. Ed was clinging to Gia and Gia was clinging to Ed, as if they were each other's life line. Jade was hugging her knees and leaning agianst crissy. Crissy just sat there, staring into space, as if she were empty of emotions. Kurt put his arm lightley around Crissy's shoulders, in attempt to wake her up. Kirby was sitting like a shy love-struck boy next to Raven, but he also looked almost empty. Raven was hugging Kyle and Kyle was looking up at Tara as she paced back and forth, trying to figure a plan.
"I've got it!" Tara anounced, breaking the silence.

Very Very Very Gooood! :D

ooooo more! more!!

very good .. WHATS THE IDEA?!

sry that i havent updated lately, but everything has just piled up on top of me and i didnt get around to it. Anyway here is a chapter:

"you have an idea?!" Crissy squealed, "yay, what is it?" She scooted forward and was now sitting near Tara's feet, looking up anciosly like a small child in a toy store. Jade's eyes filled with hope and Gia looked up.


They ran under street lights and through forests. Past signs that read "no trespasing", and ducked under branches in the pale moonlight. They knew where the kids were hidding and they were'nt going to let them get away that easily. The man had raw anger and rage burning up inside of him. he grabbed the mother.
"do you recongnize me" He snarled, "You may not remember me, but, oh, believe me i rememeber ALL about you..." He raised his hand and slapped her with the back of his hand. She let out a small scream and fell to the ground.
"Stop it, we must go now and get the children out of hiding." A young woman said walking into view from the shadow of the trees. She grabbed the bulky man's wrist and twisted it.
"You will get your chance, but not now..." she said, "and you will not torcher her any longer." She twisted it agian, "Understand?!" The man snarled agian but said,
"yes Ma'am" in a low, quiet tone.
"good." she said and let go of his arm. They continued to run, and walk through the forest. They were determind.

Its gooood..keep it up! Im having time updating cause I'm having trouble with updating cause I have trouble with finding the time to type it all down ;)

yay u updated!! hurry write more!! i wanna find out wat happens

whats going to happen!?! I need more, i just caught myself up on the couple chaps I missed, and now im very much needing more

Me too...come on hanna! :D