well here are my poems if u hate them well ... whatever



Love
Love is pain and pain is love.
It’s written in the stars above.
Everyone who has never known
The fixation called love recognize
It’s deepness, it’s obsession, it’s pain
It’s complexity, it’s passion, and it’s bliss.
When it’s gone, your empty and all you have
Is the throbbing ache in your vacant, miserable heart,
And the knowledge that you will forever be apart

Naïve
When you’re your young
And all that you have
Is the need to be cherished
Is the need to be loved
You want it so badly
You know not having anyone
While everyone else has someone
It’s tearing you up inside.
You watch them hug, kiss, adore each other
And it’s killing you because you’re alone.
You put on a brave face
Everyone is deceived by it
Everyone but you and you naïve little heart
That’s telling you, you need to be loved
To be set apart.










Betrayal
He makes you believe you’re prized.
He tells you you’re beautiful in his eyes.
You start to care for him
You fall in love with him
Then once he knows he has you
He goes and back stabs you
It’s called betrayal and it happens all the time
It’s called betrayal and it starts with a line.

God I so Loooooooooooooooove your poems! They're really great! :D :hi:

ur poems r really good, really touches u u know? i love them

THEY SUCK! no no no i'm just kidding! dont worry, i absolutely adore you! i cant write poetry, so yeaaaah, but i loved them! i especially liked betrayle, it made me laugh because of the its called betrayle and it starts with a line lol!

Wow, Raq. Those are pretty good. :D

thats heavy....i can;t write poetry 2 save ne1 life

really good...I can't write poetry either...

thanks ppl theres another one i might add not sure yet... i think u all kinda know what inspired these

Add it Raquel, I love all of them!!!! ;)

Add it Raq... or tell me online :D