Ok I wrote this a while ago, I put it up in FF Media...but that place was kinda empty so I'm posting it here! Just want some opinions.

LOST

Cold.
Everything I'm feeling is pain and darkness.
If you could open my heart you would find ice.
If you could found my soul you would find everlasting darkness.
If you could find my thoughts they would lead to
You.




Ok, it's not that good... I'll admit it <_<

Another one...

YOU

When my dreams break, you’re always there
When everybody’s fails me, you’re always by my side
When no one believes one single word I’m saying,
you’re with me with every step I take
When my heart gets crushed, my soul is dying,
when I want to hand back my life - you’re there to give it back.
Over and over again.




:huh: <_< :hi: