Hey! I started this before and when I was reading book 29 and 30.This is my first story,so dont laugh.

Loki to Russia with love
Part One

"All right,now weare in Siberia,how are we going to find that hospital where your father is and get him out of here? Jake asked to Gaia."finding it is no problem,I know where it is ,but getting Tom out of here might be harder".We must be quick and careful.Oliver answered.Later on ,inside in the hospital,yhey heard voices somewhere verynear,two men men was speaking in RUssian,but Gaia and Oliver understood everything."I assume that prisoner is still reclutant to cooperae.Is he where he is supposed to be and not trying to escape?" one man asked.Yes he was sleeping ,but is awake now I guess sedatives are wearing off,another men answered.Tom Moore sure is troublemaker.always has been,just like his twin.He tried escape,that fool.Where he thinks heis going to go,even if he did escape here.He is strong and stubborn,not easy to persuaside.Now we just wait that Gaia cwill come here.She is compulsive savior,she will came to save his father."Oliver listened and wonderer.Who the hell is that anotner man,he sounds familiar,almost like...But it cant be,he is dead.OLiver was thinking.
They searched and finally find a small room in end of the corridor.They heard voice inside,someone was walking back and forth in the room.There he is,Oliver said."i have to get out of here,but how? I tried to escape ,but they got me.Now i have broken ribs,bruises,and Iam so tired.Besides, i dont even know where I am.Tom was thinking.
The door opened and Tom turner to look,alert,expecting to see aguard.However,what he did see,he could not understand or believe."Gaia and ...Loki...here? Together? Impossible.Loki is braindead,or at least in acoma,right? Right! This must be a nigtmre or Iam hallucinating,But i thought that sedativea was wearing off.Tom wondered
That all for now.Tell what you like,I continue if you like it.

It's a good , but you should do more paragraphs, it's hard to read when you don't have enough paragraphs. Another Loki fan, hmm? Welcome to the darkness! :ph43r: :ph43r: :bond:

Hey! Thanks to reply,Mary.Lokis fan? I dont know,I love to hate him,he is so bad,that it is good,if you get what i mean. ;) I am little new about this writingin net things,as you can see.Well, I continue story little.

Loki to Russia with love
Part Two


"Dad ,are you okay? Me and Uncle Oliver and Jake come to rescue you".Gaia said."this is one bizarre nightmare or I have finally lost my and hallucinating,"Tom answered."No,Tom is real,Its me Oliver,your brother,I came here to help you."
Loki said.
Tom stared at him,angry and in disbelief." if I wasnt sure that sure I am losingit berofe,now I am.Tom said and laughted wryly."You..Loki here and want to help me!? Yeah,right.When pigs fly and hell freeze over! Or did it already? Why dont you go to look,such a hell expert you are,Loki,because i sure dont want you anywhere near me,Tom said sarcastically.

Loki stepped across room and touched Toms shoulder."Look,you can hate as much you want,but we must leave here now"he said.Tom jumped back and puched him in the jaw and the chest,oliver staggered backward."i am not going anywhere with you,after what you have done to me, I wish you were dead.Get lost! Tom said.

Oliver get up,now he was in fighting stance and his ice blue eyes flashed dangerously.What I have done to you,what about what you have done to me? You stole both my work and my love,Oliver seethed."What I am doing here? If tom Doesnt want to be saved,then he can stay here and rot away,for I care.I am starting to remember why didnt get along.Five minute listening that self-righteous,hypocrite fool brother of mine and I would like to strangle him.Loki was thinking. He think is always right in everything,and I am always wrong.Well,I want always get throug my will,too,I guess we are more identical than I thought.

Tom was trying to hit him again,this time Loki ducked and hit him hard in the face.Now it was Toms turn turn stumble and fall sitting in the floor."Oliver,no! You should at be calm one here,what are you doing? Gaia asked.Or is it Oliver? Gaia think,worried and angry.
"Oh,crap,this save is not going well.I thought Oliver should save your father,not hurt him.What does Tom spoke about Loki,and Oliver said that Tom was stolen his work and woman? Jake wonderer at gaia.Long story,You dont want to know,Gaia answered.T
That all for tonight,continue later.

good job, keep going. ^_^ Loki is my favorite character....Tom not as much.

thats really good. keep going! eh, i for some reason always like loki better than tom.

Hey! Thanks for replys,you like it,so I try continue.


Part Three

While Oliver/Loki and Tom fight, flight higher,Yuri and guard wondered noice.First it sound like Gaia was speaking,then Tom and somebody else...wait a minute,is that Loki? turn to camera on,I want to see,what the hell is going on in there.Yuri said.The mens wacthed while Loki and Tom argued." How Loki can be here,arent he supposed to be in coma.and Gaia?" the guard asked.
I was hoping that we were get ride of Loki for good,but I guess that would have been too easy.What I want to know is who told him that Tom is here? yuri answered.
He watched,amused,Tom first hit Loki,siblings from hell,I hope they knock themselfs out,would save me alot of trouble.Well ,it seems that Loki can still fight better,And Tom is not any condition to fight,two broken ribs and I guess he is little hungry too.
Get other guards,I want them captured,but nobody dont hurt gaia, and dont kill Loki,getting shot is too easy way to die for him,Jake and tom ,you can do you whatever you want to them.
The guard call others,but looked little confused.What! which part of instructions did you not understand? Yuri growled."
Excuse me ,sir but how are we going to get Gaia and Loki captured,Loki harmed but not dead,and Tom and Jake out of way,all same time?`the guard asked,hesitating."well,I guess you may have a point,lets think about,stum guns maybe? Yuri answered.

Bact to gaia and to others

"What is wrong with you,Oliver! You promised to be calm,dont you dare to go back to loki now,or I will personally kick your ass,you better believe I would,Gaia raged.And you,Dad,do you want to getaway here or not? You two can have your sparring match and your eternity feud,who-did- what an to who feud,later,or we are there still next decade."

"Gaia is right,uh-huh,I hear somebody coming.Jake said."
Okay,enough for the night.I hope you like that too.I think Yuri and Loki story right at beginnin with.somebody said that Yuri was not scary enough in Francine Pascals books,I try to fix that,let see how I continue for this.

Good job :hi: Just please don't kill Loki...

Hi,Mary! No, I am not going to kill Loki,but lets put it that way:he is not getting to away unscathed.


Part Four
the escape

Guards assemblin was and going back downstairs took some time,meanwhile downstairs Oliver and others was trying to prepare.Oliver has his own gun in hand,Gaia had one too.Tom stared at them,a little terrified."
Where did Gaia get my gun and who you are going to shot with that,Oliver?"he asked.Not you,you dummy,even if I was Loki,too many witness here.Oliver answered Just kidding,he added,seeing others look.I have one gun you too and Kevlar vest,here,take them.
Ha ha,your sense of humor is sick,you know?"tom said
Oliver, I dont want a gun,I dont like them and I dont wanna kill anybody.
I know you dont,but you can shoot better than I,and that for something.It is good you dont want kill anybody,because when you do,you chance permanently.

The guards arrive before Tom have vest on,Oliver and Gaia handled them well,stum guns hit the vest,and Gaia disarmed some of guards.Oliver was fighting,kicking and punched and shoot some too.The guards was attacking him hard,but fighting than shooting.However all guards did not have stum guns,one bullet hit him in the arm,but it did not done much damage.Jake was holding fine his own,althogh his shoulder was troubling him.Tom was trying to fight ,he get one guard down,but hi got hit at stum gun and fell asleep.Gaia and Oliver take care of rest of guards and only then,Gaia notice,where Tom and Jake left?
They found them,Jake has has take two guars out of game,what hit his head in the wall in process and Tom was fast asleep.Jake was waked and Oliver was checkin up Tom."Damn,the stum gun hit him,how are we going to him out of here,carry him?"
On the other hand,at least he cannot fight with we all the time,Oliver smiled wryly.
They carry Tom out of theprison and escaped.
Yuri,however,was furious at first.Nine guard and you cant capture them,but then he was thinking.I want too many thing same time,capture them and revenge Loki.Then he got idea."well,Loke and Tom are not getting along.Tom hate him and does not belief him chanced.WEll,neither do I.In fact I am going to make sure,at those are not going to reconcile and at same time show Jake how dangerous it is play the spy.
He called the his pilot."Get my plane ready to leave.I am going back to USa,New york.Leaving to night."
"You just wait Loki,by the time I got trough to you,you are going to wish,that you were not born."
To be continued...

You are a Loki fan, aren't you? Has something to do with the title...Yeah, I guess he's the most fun to love to hate. People just hate Yuri altogether.Good chap, keep going, but it gets a little confusing, you need more quote marks when the people talk, sometimes I can't tell if they're talking or thinking. Still good though. :hi: Keep going!!!!!!

Here's an idea: Loki kills Yuri AGAIN. :lol:

Hi again,Mary! I was writing little fast yesterday,forget quotation marks.Loki kill Yuri?well,let see whenI get in the end,this story might take some time.By the way,I like Alias very much too,have seen two season.It is a lot Fearless,does it?Jack.Sloane,Sydney...only it is little better now when Fearless series has go worst way.

Chapter 5
mystery phone call to Jake

Gaia and his father has finally safely back home,but the troubles were far over.Tom and Oliver did not have reunited,in fact quite opposite,Olivers last conversation with Tom after they have come back,has turned a huge fight,physically and fysically.Conclusion was,few more bruises and Oliver told Gaia that at far his was concern,this was enough."This is not going to work,Gaia.American civil war easy compared our family feud.We argued everything possible since before and you were born.Tom is completely impossible,was trying to apologize but he did not listened to me and then I gotmad and we fight.I am going to ster clear of him,as long he cannot be five minute same room with me without hitting me."
"Dad,i think you should see counselor,you are being yourself lately.You are so angry all the time and having nightmares too.Sam has same kind of symptoms and he is seeing one."
"am not being myself,huh? I am not sure who I am anymore,and everything what I do is gone wrong.I have the find my kidnapper soon,or I dont know what I will do.How can Sam be alive,I thoght he was dead?"Tom asked.No,he is alive and counseling might help you"Gaia said.
Meanwhile,in Jakes house.The phone was ringing and jake answered."Stay away from Gaia and his father or you will get hurt .And I would not be so eager to play spy,if I would you.Agents can get themselves killed,not to mention junior wanna be James bond boys.Said ominous voice that Jake did not recognized."Who are you?You dont scare me,I call to police,Jake said angrily.
Jake did call the call the police ,but they cant traced the call
"Moore residence,Tom here.Tom answered the phone."Tom,is Jake,someone just called and threatned me.He want me to stay away from Gaia.Should I take it seriously?"What! here wego again,I have been home only three days and something bad happen again.Cant ever have moment of peace.Tom said.
I just wondered is it Lokiagain,and try to scare you,or who the hell is it? Tom was thinking.
To be continued...

It's Yuri, Jake! :o

Good job again :P

You're very fast at updating, most people don't add on to their stories for weeks.

Sydney78, are you a fan of any Ed, Sam, Jake? I just like to know, usually everyone likes one of the three except me...

Hi,Mary! I am in summer holiday now,so I have time to write stories,but I go back to school next week.Maybe then my story update take longer,too.I am a Sam fan,mostly.Also I like Ed too.He was a good friend of Gaia and a good boyfriend too.But I hope Gaia will be end up with Sam.
Jake is too cocky and arrogant,he might fall high,and I dont mean only my story.At last book,Loki and Jake? He is way over his head with Loki,what ever Loki might up to.See, I am writing a novel again,long answer.Bye for now

Hey! the chapter I just write lost somewhere.Too bad it was good.new try

Chapter 6
"divine and conquer"
Jake and was worried the treathing phone call.But that was only the beginning.A little later Jake got a threating note too."stay away from Gaia or you will be sorry.I am wacthing you"it said.This is getting dangerous.Who is doing that to me and why? Jake wondered.Sounds a lot like Loki.He is doing the same to than did to Sam".Tom answered. You mean oliver? you cant be serious.What did Loki do to Sam? Jake asked.He kidnapped and thretened him,eventually shot him,he survive though. Tom said.Jake was shocked.I cant believe it.Are we speaking to same Oliver here.? "I am not sure anymore",Tom said.
The next day when Jake was walking home from school,he was attacked by group of mens clad black from head to toe.Jake fighted good and get few men down.But then somebody hit him with baseball bat in the side and in the head.Last thing that Jake hear was:Stay away from my niece and something else inrussian,but that Jake did not understand.

good, keep going B)

Hi,Mary! time to continue again.

Chapter 6
"ghoust in the past,part one

Jake was taken in the hospital."Patient found in alley near Seventy-second street,is unconsicous,ID in the vallet say he is Jake Montone,the paramedic say to doctor."We tried the wake him,did not respond." The doctor examinen him.The pupils are dilated,his has a concussion,one broken ribs,lot of bruises.Was that a rob or what happened.The police and parents must informer.
Jake come to half hour later.ugh,my head hurt really bad and I feel sick.Do you want me tocontact someone, we are trying to find your dad right now.Call Tom Moore,i really needhim help now,although its a litte late right now.
"Later the police and Tom was talking."Mr.Montone said that he was attacked by mob,they told him to stay away from someone.I guess is FBI case,but how he got in this mess? the Detektive Burke asked."Leave this case to me,I am spelicialized this sort of cases.Are from the From FBI? yes.Tom said
After Tom was speaking to Jake he visited Loki.With a few gollegue.What the hell have you done!? Jake is in the hospital with bad concussion,and he claim that mens said they worked to you.
" What are you talking about.I would never hurt to Jake.You sure send him to threats earlier."They were writed at your computer.Said who? I have not done anything,something is very wrong here."Yeah ,you just explain,the evidence are maybe a little circumtancial,but we are keeping eye on you.
Tom said.
.Later even Tom got one threat,this one was coded,tom take awhile figure this out.
Oliver was scared.What is going on in here? Somebody try toset me up,this is scary.It was also very familiar.This is like Organisation manual,if it had one.Divine and conquer,intimidate,set up....
But who is it?
Oliver was thinking times,that he did not want to remember,the beginin of his time in Organisation.When Nikolai got me that day."where are youtaking me? What is he going to do to me?.I dont know exactly,torture you." oh,no .the Siberian banished were treating better than I was.Oliver remembered.
To be continued..,

good job...and poor Olly. Kidnapped by the Organization when he was 20... :( Kind of like Sam. The fanfiction forum is kind of slow these days...only this fic is updated almost every day. :)

Hi,Mary!

Chapter 7
"ghouts in the past,part two"
Oliver continued remembering.Those first days and weeks in the Organisation...it was terrible time..Yuri was torturing me,beating me,all kind of bad thinks.He relly hated me for what I have done Katia,i Guess he has a reason to,but he wasnt any better,what he has done terrified Katia too.I was more scared then than I have ever been after that,but i was young and my trainign in the Cia helped me,not that there was that much practice in torturing
.I survive ,but my chracter chanced more evil and harder all long time.At my first mission in Usa,I go the see Gaia,se was seven months old.Bact that time consiredeing turn my self in the Cia,going back home.But I couldnt do it,Iam not sure which was more terrifing,Yuri or going to prison,i guess they were in tie.I get the message to come back in Russia or else....
So I stay in the Organisation and five years later it was too late,I was as becoming cruel and evil as Yuri back then. Why I am remembering that now? Maybe because someone is trying to distroy me very Yuri like way. But he is dead,that I am sure about,I dont believe in vengeful ghouhts.I have to try to find out ,what is going on.Loki called one of his men. "someone is trying the takeover the The Organisation.Find out all what you can about him.I want answer as son as possible,tomorrow mornign at latest."Will do ,sir,the operative answered.

in meantime,back in the Agency,Tom and other agents were confused."Something weird is going on,I dont understand it.Couple of the mens tryed the shot me on my way her,lucky I had vest on.I lost them.I dont know were they trying to kill me or intimidate me,either way its worked.Too many assaults lately.And this message I got.Someone has seen some trouble in coding it ,it take me hours to solve.
And contest,some it was a threat,that I would end in the dead and some was cryptic nonsense how I would have to beginnin the find the end.I dont get it.Loki doing this,so I first thougt,I am not sure anymore.I mean sincewhen hi has done so complicated plot,Sending code message,kidnapping me, getting Jake to hospital? what he or somebody else is trying the accomplish?
" Tom wondered.It does not make sense the loki doing this.But who else that could be? Agent Rodriques asaid.If somebody is trying set Loki up,he want to revenge him and me too.Divine and conquer,its oldest trick in the book.But who can that be.Organisition russian part? this does not exict anymore.Nikoli,Yuri,Anatoli..all they are dead or work with Loki.Go to begining? The tactic seems like Yuri,but dead mens dont do crimes."Tom said
to be continued...

good job B) :hi: And especially with Loki's character, you think the same thing as me, that he wasn't competely bad until the end of BG, until after all that Yuri stuff. <_<
I love this fic ^_^

Hi,Mary! time to continue

Chapter 8
"Phase Two"
the operative came tell to Loki,the result of his invesigation,they were not good.
"the Organisation is divined.Some of the mens are still loyally to you,but most of them work the other now.some of them have not been lojalto you in years.In years!? Loki repeated,both angryand terried."are you saying that some of mens have been double agents all along ? Who does they work for?
that still is unclear.Some says that is russian operative.He is cruel,ruthless and smart.a master manipulator,who does anything to get what he want,inlucluding torture and murder.Someone killed one of your men three weeks ago.We never find out who or why."a russian operator spelialiazing torture and murder.Sounds familiar.I am almost starting to believen ghost now"Loki muttered,mostly himself.You dont have any idea of his identity?
he asked."i dont know if this have somethingto do about it ave been followed Gaia and Sam lately.They spoke about some russian man name Dimitri I guess Sam live in his place for awhile."Dimitri who? where dos he came from?"Loki asked trying to find out that,but I think he is been in city only short time,three or four weeks.the operative said." Keep looking for information.I try to find some answers myself.Loki said.
Sam Moon and some russian Organition operative? Does he hate me so much that he gang up with enemy to get bact to me? And what about Jake+ Surely Sam cant be that be jealous to him that he would try the hurt him.can he?
Oliver could ned Sam conversation with Dmitri,something a lonng lines like this."Loki is back again,that guy just dont get out of the picture.Like he was immortal,as he alias.Soonhe will be hurting m and everybody else again.And that Jake! March in Gaias live,take her right out under my nose and act like he was the hottest guy after Ben Affect or somethign.what would sayif i ell you that you dont have to worry about loki again? And Jake might just have ben tranfers to west coast,Diitri answered.
Wow,I sure have lively imagination,Oliver thought.That cant be like that,Sam is not me,after all.he is good guy,smart too.although he can fooled.

Well.One way the find out.Oliver called to Sam.SAm,this is oliver Moore.I have question toyou.OLiver,i told you dont want tospoke to you,not ever.Sam said,hostile."tell me about Dimitri,loki said.Dmitri? i dont have to tell you anyng what i dont want,Sam said."just answer the question,will you,damn it! Loki snapped.No, I dont think we should continue this conversation,Sam said.No,Sam.dont hang up,this is important.Dmitri might be a dangerous man.just tell me,what do you know abot him,please.Dangerous? Only one dangerous around here is you.Dmitri Gagari should know that better i inceou shot him and kept him captured for years."what I dont have any prison likethat,shot him? oh,No.not him,plese,i have avery bad feeling about this? loki thougt.What does he look like? he asked.An old man,clear blue eyes,now that i think about it,he looks a bit like Gaia.same eyes,and chin.Sam said.nNo,no! loki said .That cant behim.Oliver was feeling dizzy wih terror.Listen to me,Sam,dmitri is not what he sems.He is evil and cruel.His name isnot Dmitri,it is Yuri .Tell Tom hesame that you told me,Loki said,terried.What the hell are you babbling about? Sam asked.
I see,evething goes like it is suppose to.Loki is figuring me out.It is time for Phase Two.Yuri said.
to be continued..

Good job, keep going!

Hi,Mary! I heard that you are writing fanfic too,looking forward to read it.Iread your first fan fic,that was very good Loki and Yuri story,maybe even better than mine.Although youcould have make it longer.Cant write more now,some one else want to use computer.I continue my story later.

Loki is so cool. He's such a smart biatch, agree?

And yes, i'm making a new fanfic. It should be out Wendesday, I'm still fine tuning the first three chapters.

Hey,Mary! Loki is smart what?biacth? I have couple of hour break in study.Continue story a little.

Chapter 9
"Lokis worst nightmare"

"I dont understand.Dmitri is not Dmitri,but Yuri? Yuri who? evil and cruel?Are you sure we speaking the same person? What different that makes if Dmitri Gagari is his alias?
Sam asked."Yuri Petrilova is a bad man.He was a serious threat of United States back eighties.He is,was,I am not sure,killer,and crimal master mind."Oliver answered
."Are you sure you did not discrape yourself back there,Loki?" Sam muttered sarcastically. Dmitri has not done anything to harm me,you on the another hand,have make my live the hell,since day one."Sam said.

Yuri sure has Sam fooled.Loki thought.Makes himself a nice old man,and me the bad guy.Not unlikely than I did a while ago.If that even is Yuri.This cant be happening! How could he has survived the shooting?Oliver thought.
"are you sure he looks like Gaia? he asked.
"I think so.He does have clear blue eyes like Gaia and a little same chin.But that can be a coinside,millions people have blue eyes.I mean,he cant be relative to Gaia? some great uncle or something? Gaia has never spoke about him.Sam said.

Gaia has never spoke to him because he suppouse to be dead.Tell Tom what you just told me.And if he wants to meet you and Gaia somewhere far from here,dont do it.One last question.Where is Dmitri now? Loki asked.
Yeah,like I would tell you that,that you could go there and shot him again?not gonna happen.I dont believe you.Sam said."you should believe me,you can be serious danger. You better give me his address or I will..Loki said.
You will what? beat me? dont you.threat me,or you will end up in jail for rest of your live,this conversation is over.Sam said and hung up.

Well, I find out where Dmitri or Yuri,or what he called himself,live without you.Loki thought.Hopefully Sam does say something to Tom,I would talk to him self,but if start to tell him,about that Yuri is alive,he would sent me to New York psych ward.Oliver thought.
Little later on,Oliver was on his way to the Chinatown,with two men.When he did find to place,he go in and was fighting with at least seven man.Loki was fighting well,until he saw the man he was looking for.Yuri was watching him,smiling cruelly.
"Not so nice to meet again,huh,Loki? You can still fight,ecept you are concentrating enough",he said,when Loki stumbled back,bewilder.Something hit him back of the head,and evetrything went black.
To be continued...

Good job! :P

Hi,Mary! Time to continue little my story.

Chapter 10

"the bad kind deja vu"

Oliver woke up and find that someone was trying to drag him in the car.He fought back and get some punch in,but he was out numbered,he got pinned down."you should calm down or you could hurt yourself,I have some help to that"Yuri said.Now he had syringe and neal in his hand.
Oliver struggler,then felt sting in his arm,and his concicueness faded,oh,no,I must stay awake,oliver thought."sleep well,Loki" he heard and cruel laughter,then nothing.
Much later he woke up in somesort of cell,he did have no idea where he was.I was having a terrible nightmare ,that it was year 1983 again and I was
captured and tortured in Leningrad,but the reality is not much better,expect that I dont think that I am in Russia and I am not being tortured yet
.Oliver thought."I sure won fool of the year price about that,why did I go the looking for Yuri like that,I should have bring more backup men with me,he berated himself.I wonder what he did those two,who were with me,killed them? At least I left Tom the message where I was going,if he believed any of it.I have the get out of here.he thought

Not sure how to continue,was that any good?
I continue later. Bye for now.

it's good, keep going :hi: Poor Loki...oh and you said the year was 1983, but if that were true, Gaia would be 21 now, since it's 2004. Sorry, I know the Super Edition screwed it up...I think it's 1987

Hi,Mary! Time to continue again.By the way,where your fan fic? Still fine tuning it?

Chapter 11
"Too unexpecting and too bad"
Oliver was walking back and forth in his cell.How I am going to escape here? Its not going to be easy,bars in the window and door is heavy.Not to mention a lot of guards,he though
.I still cant believe that Yuri is alive.How the hell he pull that out?I shot him many times,he should be dead.Expect the unexpecting,expect the worst.Two ground principale in espionage,so I learn them years ago.But there must be some limit of it, this is too unexpecting.
What has Yuri done last eleven years,conniving against me?Now he want to revenge.I dont want even imagine,what he might do to me this time.i have to be strong,I cant show that I fear.Now is one time when being like Gaia would be a good thing.he thought.

Longer he did not get before he heard the guards coming.They drag him along.They took him in dark room.Yuri was there,with some his men.Oliver was tied in the chair."You and I am are going to talking a little",Yuri said.Talking? that what this is? I dont know what you are going to do,but I sure know that it is something worst than talking to me to death,if you are not going to talk next two weeks nonstop"Oliver said.
He was scared,but angry too,And he find suddenly himself thinking to Sam.Is that how Sam felt,when was kidnapped and later on when I force him to bring gaia to me?Lonely and scared,knowing that escape is useless,that he was sitting next to killer?I am sorry,Sam he thought.
"you are right about that,i sure have something worst the mind than talking.I got you in surprise,didnt I? My plan worked perfectly.Everybody thought thas it was you,who put jake in the hospital and sent those threats.Yuri said.
"yeah,that was a worse plan than even Loki would have thought.Just how did you survive when i shot you,and what do you want now? Oliver said.
I have a vest on.Some you bullet hit still and I was faking dead,What i want?I want to cross you ,distroy you completely.And want your pasword in your account. Yuri answered.
"My password? what for? You have takeover the Organisation,now you want my money too? No,I am not going to tell you that.Oliver said.
"oh yes,you will.sooner or later.Let see how you are goint to handle electro shoct treament",Yuri said.
Oliver closed his eyes and steel himself against the pain.
Back in New York,Tom has got Oliver message his answering machine."Tom,you probably think I am crazy,But Yuri Petrova is alive.He is behind all this.He put Jake in the hospital,not me.He is calling himself Dimitri Gagari now.Ask Gaia and Sam ,if you dont believe me.I am going to Chinatown looking for him.If Iam not come back,sent CIA looking for me and him.it said.
"Yuri is alive? Now Loki has totally lost his mind,Or is he? Tom thought.I think that was Yuri style too.But how can that be possible?
Tom tried to call to call Oliver,in his house and his cell,but nobody did answer.
Oh,no.Yuri got him.I have to find him.Tom thought.

To be continued...

Good job! And I'm writing one more chapter in my fanfic before I post it, so I don't have to write a new on every day. I guess I'll post it in the fanfic forum when it's done.

Hi.Mary! time to continue.

Chapter 12
"the another missing person"
Tom was having some trouble to get the Ageny believe Olivers message."even if Oliver said that Yuri is alive,how did we know that is true? he might mislead you in purpose and leave from town,Agent Rodriques said to Tom."Or he is gone totally crazy and imagined thinks",another agent said.
Oliver mental state has been unstabile for years,but he hadnt seen ghoust before.yes,I have heard murders,that feeling so guilty,that they imagined see their dead victims,but why just Yuri? why not Katia,or others victims.And where did get the name Dmitri Gagari and Chinatown? Tom wondered." but how could Yuri Petrova be alive? Loki killed him eleven years ago.Agent Rodriques said.
"Oliver said,ask gaia or Sam,so that what i do".Tom said.He was trying to call to Gaia but did not get answer.Where can Gaia be? She left going to walk in the park after school ,that must be hours ago.I hope that she did not vanished too.
Tom called to sam"Hello,Sam,thi isTom Moore.I have to ask you some question about Dimitri Gagari."Not again! First Loki babbled something incoherent about that Dimitri is evil and that his name is Yuri somethign,and now you.Sam said."did Oliver speak to you? What did you tell him? Tom asked.I check on files,Dimiri Gagari did not find anyhere,some agent said to Tom.
Thats I thougt.Tom said."Sam, i sent someone to pick you up.We have qouestioned you some more and show a few photographs.Tom said
Meanwhile,Oliver was exhausted and in pain.Torture has not break him ,but he felt like lighing has hit him,fried.He did not know how many hours has been past,when Yuri said,"take him back to cell,i have others thinks taking care of.I have not finisned with you,Loki ,not by long shot",he said.I am sure you are not, Oliver thought.
Not so far about where Oliver was ,Gaia was waking in small room,confused."what is this place? The bars in window.How did I get here? Oh,no Now i remember.I was attacked and someone drugged me.Now I have been captured.Who did this to me? What the hell is going in there?Someone has better be a good explanation of this.They have better to let me out of here,or this place is soon to be some serios need in repaired.Gaia think,furious.
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good job! Poor Olly!

Hi,Mary! and others too,if somebody else read this story besides Mary.time to continue story little.

Chapter 13
"sins of grandfather"

Yuri's men came to pick up Gaia."The boss want to you to see him",one of them said."well,I want to see him too.i want to give him piece of my mind.He has better to let me me out of here,or I am gonna tear this place down and kick his ass.Gaia seethed.
She kicked back and hit the guard in the leg and elbowed him in the gut.Then she throw another men over her shoulder."you know what? i change mind,i just want out of here" she said.
The other guards stopped her.2"what a wild cat!"some of them said. "the boss gonna love this one.The apple dont fall far of the tree." another said in Russian.What that is suppouse to mean? gaia asked.You'll see"one of them answered.
When Gaia finally get to see hers kidnapper,she was confused."Dmitri! was that you?what in the world is going on here?Gaia asked and stared at him.Dmitri looks different now,she thought,cruel somehow."hello,Gaia,nice too see you again.My name is not Dmitri and last name is wrong too.Care to take a guess who I am? Yuri said.
"I am not in the mood play games here,who the hell are you?Gaia said.She take closer look of him.Sam was right ,when he said that i look a bit like you,almost same color eyes,sam echin,but how can that be? and i guess you are not so ex Organisation operative.gaia thought aloud.
Good guess,you are on the track.I could give you a tip.if you take my fake fake last name,and chance my first name ,you get the Russian cosmonaut back in sixties.Then first name is right,and ,rest you can guess.
What is he talking to ? the russian astronaut,that would be Yuri Gagari.but..? Yuri?! my grandfather? what kind of sick joke is this,yuri has been dead in years.Gaia thought.
Are you saying that you are Yuri Petrilova,my grandfather?that is impossible,you are dead ,gaia said .
"Thats right,I am your grandfather and very much alive,like you see" .Yuri said.
Gaia was bewilder,but the soon the feeling change to confusion to rage.yousick sonfabicht! i am gonna kill you,she raged.She lunged at yuri ,but he ducked and backhanded her in the face.Killing me is harder that you thought,Gaia.but you could always try.Bring it on.Yuri said.
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Hi,Mary! didn't you like like last chapter or haven't you read it yet?Oliver didnt fit i n it,so I continue little more.

chapter 14

Gaia and Yuri continue fighting.The guards wacthed both terrified,and intrigued.Gaia punched,Yuri blocked first one,but another one hit him in the jaw.He hit back,Gaia ducked,she kick him in chest,Yuri stumbled back,but he did not give up yet.hi punched Gaia in the face.Gaia sidekick him in the head,he went down.Gaia tried to escape, but she get guards after her.In her way down,he get past Oliver ,in his is cell,"Oliver,what are you doing here" I could ask you the same thing..We have to get out of here Oliver said.Not so fast! Yuri has found them,he was standing there with his mens and looking dangerous."you two are not going anywhere until I said so.You sure are my granddaughter,Gaia.Take her back in hers room.
Not sure how to continue.how I am going to finish this story,when i get there?Any suggestions? to be continued later.

Hi! Sorry I didn't see last chapter, it's my first day of high school again and I had to get up at 5.. <_< Good job. :P

Hi,Mary! Not sure how to continue my story.How should I finish it,when I get there? Any suggestions? I write more tomorrow or next week.How is your story going?Still writing it?

um..my story turned out bad so I'm writing it again.

Yours should end by them winning against Yuri.

Hi,Mary! Maybe you are little too selfcritical for your story,I am sure it will be good.Time to continue mine a little

Chapter 15
"the Brekingpoint"
In the Agency,Tom and Agent Rodriques questioned Sam about Dimitri."tell us how you and Gaia get involved with this Dimitri Gagari?"we found him in Loki's compound in Berkshire,he was holding prisoner there,just like me
.Sam said.
Did he tell you why he was being captured? Tom asked."he said that he was ex Organisation agent,he hate Loki and that he did not like what Organisation has become when Loki run it.He told Loki that,so Loki shot him and captured him.Make me wondered how long Dmitri has been in picture.I thought that Loki founded Organisation,Sam said.
"I dont like to sound of this.Ex-Organisation operative? You dont quit working in the Organisation just like that,if at all.Loki shot him? I am starting to believe Olivers message,Rodriques said to Tom.Describe what he look like."And old man,eighty or something,white hair,clear blue eyes,little like Gaias,strong chin.Sam said.did he look something like this,Tom has found Yuris old picture in the computer.Yes,i think so.I cannot be absolute sure,he is lot younger in that.
Sam said."that confirms it then.We have to find Yuri Petrilova and Loki,Rodriques said."And Gaia too.And we have to find them soon,before Oliver have to bring back in body bag.
There is no telling what Yuri do to him.But where are we going to find them?.Tom said.We better start in Chinatown Yuris apartment.Rordiques said.

Later in Seattle,Oliver was still thinking how he and Gaia were going escape there.He had been tortured again."This is gotta stop!I have to get out of here,while I still can.Much more torturing I cant take,or I will broke,mentally and physically.
I dont have to put out this anymore.I am not twenty-two anymore,I am not scared of Yuri.I do whatever it takes to get out of here,I even kill him if have to.He thought.
Enough for this night.To be continued...

good job! :D

Hi,Mary! Time to continue my story.
Chapter 16

"the final showdown,part one"

Oliver was getting ready to escape."let see,how i am going to pull this of?how am i going to take down all guards and Yuri,too. I would need a gun and a bulletproof vest,and a cell phone might be good too.
Actually,all I need is take yuri down,the others wont matter.Oliver did not like idea killing anyone anymore.I have killed too many people in my lifetime,more than I can count.
On the other hand,killing Yuri Petrova,would be exception of rules.He sure is evil enough to deserve to die.some people might think the same of me.I dont think that even the Acency would not disagree,he might be in their hit list.

Two guards come to Oliver,one has his dinner with him.The guard only get open the door,and try close it behind him,when oliver attack on him.he hit him in the head with food tray,he crumbled in the floor.The another guard try to stop Loki,hi shot him,but missed slightly when he ducked.Oliver got him out of commision by strong choke hold.
Now I have to find Gaia and we must go,he thought.Oliver went looking for Gaia ,in the way there he found his stuff in some room in the hallway.He found Gaia,and open the door,"Come quick,we must go right away",He said,while he put his vest on.
They got downstairs and were trying to get out,when Yuri and his men found them."Where you two think you are going" Yuri said."anywhere but here,I am leaving ,and I kill you if you try to stop me",Loki said dangerously calm voice of his.
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good job :D