Title: i am going to give it a shot
Description: don't h8
fearless_shaz - May 28, 2004 06:28 PM (GMT)
"could i have a box of krispy kreme dognuts please" gaia asked. she ws surpried that she had used the word please. i suppose for the first time she could say that she was happy, it had been a long time that had happened. i suppose with ed back in my life maybe things could go back to normal. i am just glad that ed decided to give our friendship a try and its good to have a friend back in my life. gaia carried on walking and eating her dognuts when she realised that she had walked into washington square park. "its been a while since i have been here" she thought. so many memories where in this park..some good some bad. mary had died here and it was in this same place that i had fallen in love.....sam. now where shall i start with him. as much as i hated to admit it i missed him. i used to hear how first love was always meant to be everlasting but i always used to laugh at it but now i understand. before gaia had realised she had come to the chess tables. she really did need some money..so she sat down. in ten minutes gaia had won 20 dollors. she was about to walk away when sam a guy come and sat in front of her.
"i belive we have an unfinshed game"
"sam" gaia was shocked. sam was talking to her. maybe he didn't hate her.
"well you going to play"...
"erm sure.." gaia's heart skipped a beat. he still had the effect on her even after so long
they played in silence. deja vu. but this time it seemed like they were playing for more than 20 dollors.
gaia looked at him and she realised that she loved him. always has..so much has happend and she still wanted him back and for the first time gaia didn't mind losing to him..
"check mate" he replied.
gaia looked down and relaised that she had lost. but she didn't care she just wanted him back. she got up and started walking away when sam grabbed her hand.
"the differance between this game and the last is that this time i am not going to let you walk away" sam said
tell me if you hate it.....i want your honets opinion
Dark Angel - May 28, 2004 07:20 PM (GMT)
awww its SO SWEET! i love it.
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 28, 2004 08:42 PM (GMT)
I Love It Except For The Fact That Its Sam .. But I Still REALLY Do Love It Alot .. I Like That Last Line .. Even If It Is A Little Corny But Still .. Love It!!
Dark Angel - May 29, 2004 01:20 AM (GMT)
i liked the last line too but i thought it was sweet and not corny and something that sam would say
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 29, 2004 04:24 PM (GMT)
Ye I Guess It Is Something Sam Would Say .. I Guess Thats Exactly Why I Dunt Like Sam .. Lolz .. But It Was Still A Really Good Story .. You Should Write A Non-Fearless Fiction Aswell
Dark Angel - May 29, 2004 07:59 PM (GMT)
EdLuver - May 30, 2004 06:20 PM (GMT)
wow, thas really good. (it is spelled doughnuts, not dognuts. sorry, but i had to say something.)
i espechially like it cause she is friends with ed. Ed rox! but sam... oh well, it was still great.
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 30, 2004 07:01 PM (GMT)
Maybe She Put The G In By Mistake .. Cause You Know .. Some People Spell It Donut And Some Spell It Doughnut .. I Really Think It Depends On Where You Live .. I Know In The UK We Spell It Donut But A Few Spell It Doughnut .. And When I Go To Canada They Spell It Donut Aswell And When I Do To The US They Spell It Doughnut Usually .. Sorry!! I'm Babbling :wacko: Lolz .. Again GREAT STORY
Dark Angel - May 30, 2004 07:35 PM (GMT)
yeah it depends on where you live and your accent. or even langauge
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 30, 2004 07:42 PM (GMT)
fearless_shaz - May 30, 2004 08:36 PM (GMT)
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 30, 2004 10:16 PM (GMT)
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Dark Angel - May 31, 2004 04:48 PM (GMT)
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 31, 2004 05:11 PM (GMT)
Jus A Teeny Weeny Bit ^_^ She Wore An Itsy Bitsy Teeny Weeny Yellow Polka Dot Bikini, That She Wore For The First Time Today! Lolz ^_^
Dark Angel - May 31, 2004 11:35 PM (GMT)
lol, we were supposed to sing that for a choir concert, but our stupidass teacher said we couldnt
fearless_shaz - June 1, 2004 02:59 PM (GMT)
"sam let me go"
"NO YOU ARE NOT GOING NOWHERE TILL I HAVE FINISHED"
gaia was a bit surprised by sam's voice, she had never heard him shout at her before.
"fine lets talk" gaia opened the door to the apartment and they both sat down.......there was an umcomfortable silence between them and it felt like forever.
"so" gaia said. "what is it that you want"
"want" how dare you ask me that after everything. i want my life back, i want things to go back to the way they were before. you seemed to think that its alright to just ruin my life and then treat me like shit. what did i do gaia do deserve this. all i did was love you thats it and when is loving someone such a crime. even after everything that has happened i don't blame you and i don't hate you. thats the worst of it that i still love you after all this. but YOU, don't seem to care becasue when have you ever cared about anyone's feelings. i mean answer this one question how long did it take you to move on."
gaia had been quiet the whole time and had been looking at the floor. she knew that sam deserved to be angry but that question had taken her by surprise.she looked up and didn't even realise that she had started to cry.
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 4, 2004 05:18 PM (GMT)
Awe!! :wacko: I Wish This Wasn't True, But Because Of That I Think I Like Sam More .. NOT AS MUCH AS ED OF COURSE!!! But Pretty Close :blink: .. How Long Was It Before She Moved On Anyways??
fearless_shaz - June 5, 2004 09:35 AM (GMT)
less than a week she had slept with ed
Dark Angel - June 5, 2004 02:46 PM (GMT)
i know, and that annoys me on how fast she moves on
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 8, 2004 08:23 PM (GMT)
Ye I Guess .. But She Really Did Love Ed Always .. Its Not Like She Jus Started Likeing Him As Soon As Sam Died .. Its Not Like That .. And Can You Blame Her?? She Was Hurting .. Gawd .. I'm Sounding Like Jerry Springer Or Some Other Guy Who Tries To Fix Things But Really Jus Makes It Worse!
Dark Angel - June 8, 2004 11:38 PM (GMT)
lol haha, but she did move on pretty fast. shes more of slut to my point of veiw now.
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 9, 2004 12:11 AM (GMT)
Lolz .. Its Not Like She Sleeps With Every Guy Shes Sees!!! Or Even Does Stuff With Them! She's More Of A Player In My Eyes .. Not A Slut!
fearless_shaz - June 9, 2004 10:53 AM (GMT)
lolz......but she still moved on pretty fast
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 9, 2004 06:02 PM (GMT)
Ye I Guess Your Right .. I Think I'm Just Defending Her Because I'm An Ed Fan Not A Sam Fan .. So I Dunt Feel Bad For Him .. Now if Ed Was Her Boyfrend And He Died Then She Slept With Sam
Then I Might Of had To Kill Her! Lolz .. JUST CONTINUE ON UR DAMN STORY! Lolz