Character name: Numair
Race:Human
Age: 16
Height: 5'8
Weight: 140
Eye Color: Deep blue
Hair color: dark brown
Element: Wind
Physical Description: Medium sized teenager with tanned skin. Dark brown hair shoulder length and most of the time in a pony tail. Black cloak with a white tunic, and black boots.
Personality: Always friendly and ready to help anyone, serious when need be and not afraid to fight
Class: Mage
Level: 1
Equipment: lv1 black hood, Maple rod, silver ring, black robes, leather boots(all level1)
Gold: 3,000
Epuipment: bandage kit
Skills: Flame blast, cleansing falls
Background: Numair's parents noticed his magical abilities such as summoning fire and controlling the wind. Once they saw these abilities Numair's parents became greedy and only wanted him to make the family wealthy. Once that greed set in their love for Numair disappeared. Numair ran away from his parents to hopefully one day become a powerful mage. On his travels Numair found a traveling Mage from the Cethindol Tower. The Mage took him there to develop his abilities. Numair is now an apprentice mage able to heal and make a fire blast. Although it's a small accomplishment Numair can't wait to extend his abilities.
Stop making new topics. Use the "Add Reply" button when you're looking at this.
There are still problems:
1. Try making your story 3 times longer
2. Cleansing Falls is not a healing spell. If you look in the Rules, Regulations & How To's section, and click on Mages, you'll see that it's a magical attack.
Fix those things then REPLY to this topic, please refrain from making a new topic altogether.
Character name: Numair
Race:Human
Age: 16
Height: 5'8
Weight: 140
Eye Color: Deep blue
Hair color: dark brown
Element: Wind
Physical Description: Medium sized teenager with tanned skin. Dark brown hair shoulder length and most of the time in a pony tail. Black cloak with a white tunic, and black boots.
Personality: Always friendly and ready to help anyone, serious when need be and not afraid to fight
Class: Mage
Level: 1
Equipment: lv1 black hood, Maple rod, silver ring, black robes, leather boots(all level1)
Gold: 3,000
Epuipment: bandage kit
Skills: Flame blast, cleansing falls
Background: Numair's parents noticed his magical abilities such as summoning fire and controlling the wind. He was a young child at that time playing with a wooden toy his father made for him. When the toy got jostled from the young Numair's grasp a powerful whirlwind swept up and brought the toy back to him. Once Numair
's parents saw these abilities the parents became greedy and only wanted him to make the family wealthy. They took him to fairs and festivals forcing him to put on shows like summoning fire and doing card tricks, where he would make the card fly around using his wind abilities. Once that greed set in their love for Numair disappeared. Numair tried to escape once but was stopped and the gifted child's parents had a traveling wizard make magical bonds that Numair couldn't escape from. Numair finally ran away from his parents by getting help from a witchwoman who broke the bonds for him. He then had hopes one day become to a powerful mage. On his travels Numair found a traveling Mage from the Cethindol Tower. The Mage took him there to develop his abilities. Numair is now an apprentice mage able to make cleansing falls and make a fire blast. Although it's a small accomplishment Numair can't wait to extend his abilities.
Good job.
You're in.
Keep in mind that being a mage, you start in Avalon. Feel free to look over the other adventures and than start your own quest. Good luck.
