1. Name of Character in The World- Kusan
2. Name of Real World Player- Justin
3. Age- 14
4. Class- Long Arm
5. Eye color- Green
6. Hair color- Red
7. Height- 5'8
8. Clothing- Wears a long simple black cloak to cover his body, with golden draggon crossing over the entire body
9. Personality-
Online:When he talks to people, he refuses to talk about anything Offline and keeps all talk strictly to game, meaning quest, monsters, levels, rare items, guilds, etc;
Offline: Will talk about anything, including Offline and Online stuff
10.Weapon/Armor and Skills-
Head – Bandanna (Repth)
Arm – Wristbands (Juk Rom)
Body – Leather Coat (Gan Zot)
Feet – Sandals
Iron Spear (Repulse Cage)
11. Justin found this game when he was searching the internet for a cool down loadable game to play that offered him a variety of choices to play and do in the game. However, after a while, he heard of "The World" and went straight to his local game store to buy the game. When he got on, he saw 2 sets of servers, English and Japanese servers. Not able to read Japanese, he went to English and logged on, creating a long arm, and now his story begins.
First of all, both your story and your personality need to be longer... Your story should be around a page on its own, and the personality needs to be at least a full paragraph. Your personality should cover actual things about Kusan/Justin as a person - is he normally a pretty happy guy? Does he make friends easily? Get in a lot of fights? Whatever you find relative, not just whether or not he talks about online/offline things. The story should be... longer and more involved. Keep in mind that on this site, ALL of your rewards, from levels to items and everything in between, are based off the quality and quantity of your writing. Make sure all your work is A+ material, and you'll get the best stuff in return - put D effort into your work, and your character will be a newbie forever.
Additionally, you have a few spelling errors and typos - after you're done expanding your story, you should run it through a spellchecker, then read it very carefully to check for errors.
