This one is kinda like on the same wavelength as Monster, although this one was written first and is called Trying to Escape, it's about self inflicted pain and deprression.

Trying to Escape

All alone in my room
In the darkness I hide
Trying to pull myself
Out of this life-sucking tide
An all-time low
Rock bottom I've hit
Left without the mortal strength
To pull myself away from it
It sucks me in
Like whirling stormy seas
Sucking every last breath
Draining all living blood from me
Free falling down
This neverending hole
I can't get back
The life that was stole
In the corridors of my mind
I run down an empty hall
Yelling pleas of help
But alone I continue to fall
I'm in a guarded prison
But I'm beating on the walls
I'm trying to escape
But no one hears my calls
It chained up my mind
I'll never be free
It hates and kills and destroys,
This monster, inside of me
It eats away at my soul
It's like a disease
Killing me slowly
But this, no one sees
Possessed by this devil
And no one can tell
It holds me hostage in the dark
In my own personal hell.

-Mandi

Wow. Nice! it really sets a mood. You spelled poem wrong in the title, though. :P

oops, I just realized that! lol

thanks though!

I changed it for you. B)

thanks! lol

GRRRRRRR, I'm always late for the good stuff, anyways,

I LOVE THE POEM! I'm not exactly sure which one I like more though....

haha, thanks Wikky lol

they are actually pretty similiar except one is more depression oriented and one is more about self abuse and stuff