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Title: Merry-go-round
Description: a poem by me! please review!


Bondgirl007 - March 7, 2004 04:43 PM (GMT)
I just wrote this poem and I just wanted to post it. It's actually about how you have a problem that you fight with for a long time and every time it seems to go away, it returns to always haunt you with your past troubles. Any comments and criticisms are appreciated. :)

Everything's different
And then everything's the same
I can't get out
Of this tormenting game
I see the blurred faces
All the colors start to blend
I'm scared and alone
It will never end
It's going too fast
The world's passing me by
Everything changes
In the blink of an eye
Everything comes
And everything goes
"What goes around comes around"
Is how the saying goes
I thought it was over
I thought it was done
But then this devil returns
To have some more fun
I thought I was through this
I thought it had passed
But I should have known by now
That the sanity wouldn't last
So I try and fight it
But I can't seem to learn
How to get out
Of this neverending turn
So I'll hold on tight
And to the world I'll appear fine
Trapped all alone
On this merry-go-round of mine

~Mandi

Stitch - March 7, 2004 06:20 PM (GMT)
[british accent]Nice job ol' chap![/britishaccent]




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