Well hea's a poem that i wrote hope u guys like it...

Whenever I close my eyes
I fall into a deep sleep
So dark inside
As if I'm the only one
Alive,
I try to wake up
and get a hold of myself
But the more I try
The farther you seem
to be away
So everynight, I would pray,
to the heavens, the stars up above
Do not take this angel away...
For I fear of losing,
the one thing that keeps me alive....

Okay it's not that good i guess :blink:

Very Good Sweetie! I Loved It! Great Job!

It is sweet!!!! Beautiful poetry. Great work!!!